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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Yes Sana I agree. You are really talented and all the ff's are different and awesome and superb.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rajbeer's Apartment...
Rajbeer made cofee and Preeto still wasnt talking and was crying. Rajbeer- Preeto kya tha yeh sab
Preeto sobs and finally talks- woh Sunny
Rajbeer- kya kiya usne
Preeto cries- usne mujhe aaj raat bech diya.
Rajbeer quickly hugs her, Rajbeer- us Sunny ko mein ab nahi choudonga.
Preeto doesnt stop him this time. Rajbeer gets out of the house and finds Sunny outside the society smoking and laughing. Rajbeer goes up to him and holds on to his collar. This gets Sunny's attention. Sunny- yeh kya kar rahe ho
Rajbeer- keyse insan ho tum, jo apni biwi ko ek raat bech sakta. Becha toh becha lekin yaha bet kar has rahe ho.
Sunny- woh mera aur Preeto ka mamla hai. Jab uske maa baap ko hi uske chinta nahi toh phir tujhe kyu hai.
Rajbeer gets really angry and punches Sunny in the face and then walks away.
Next morning...
Rajbeer drives Preeto to her parents in Amritsar. As soon as Papaji saw Preeto he got mad- yaha kyu ae hai tu.
Preeto- papaji woh mein
Bj- bas bhi karo meri bachi itne dino baad ghar ae hai aur ap isse bol rahe ho.
Papaji- toh phir pochu isse ki woh Sunny ke saath ae hai ya akele ya kise aur ke saath.
Preeto looks to the ground- Bj woh Rajbeer ne mujhe yaha pe chouda.
Bj now gets angry and slaps Preeto. Bj- besharam tera patti yaha pe shubha key 4 bhaaje se aya hai aur tu Rajbeer key saath thi.
Preeto- kya Sunny yaha pe hai.
Meanwhile Sunny comes downstairs- Preeto, kaha chale gae thi tum. Mein kitna daar gaya tha.
Preeto- yeh natak band karo.
Papaji- kyunsa natak.
Preeto- Papaji issne mujhe kal raat bech diya tha.
Papaji- tu jhoot pe jhoot bolti ja rahi hai kuch toh sharam kar. Sunny ne tujhe becha. Mein yeh khabhi maan nahi sakta.
Preeto- lekin yahe sach hai.
Sunny- bas karo Preeto mein tumhe kyu bechonga. Mein tumhare itni parwa karta hon.
Preeto- enough.
Bj- puttar tu Rajbeer se pehle pyaar karti thi yeh sach hai lekin Sunny tujhe khabhi nahi bechega. Yeh maat bhol ke tu Rajbeer se pyaar karti thi yeh jaante hua bhi sirf Sunny tha jisne tujhe shaadi ki.
Preeto- Bj ek minute mein Rajbeer se pyaar karti hon yeh sabko patta hai. Aur hum donu shaadi bhi karna chahate the lekin yeh sirf Papaji ki zid thi, woh Rajbeer ko apna betta meinte the apna dhamad khabhi nahi. Ab iss mein meri kya galti thi. Ap logo ne zabar dasti meri shaadi Sunny se karae.
Bj- tu meri betti ho hi nahi sakti.
Preeto- hai kyunki ap sab ne mil ke apni Preeto ka gala daba diya tha. Woh toh ussi din maar gae thi jab apne meri shaadi ki thi.
Saying that she just leaves the house and goes and sits back in Rajbeer's car with Rajbeer. Rajbeer- kya hua
Preeto cries- woh Sunny waha pe pehle se tha aur aaj mera iss ghar se humesha ke liye natta bhia thot gaya.
Rajbeer- ab kya
Preeto- mujhe nahi patta lekin sabse pehle mein Sunny ko divorce deyna chahati hon.
Rajbeer- thek hai hum ek layer ko milke divorce papers ready karwate hai.
Preeto nods.
Chandigad, 3 days later, court...
Judge: aaj se ap donu patti patni ke rishte se azad hai. End of case.
Preeto smiles and looks at Rajbeer who is also smiling. Sunny gives Preeto a hateful look and then leaves. Preeto hugs Rajbeer,- thank u
Rajbeer- its ok.
Rajbeer had moved out of Sunny's society and was now living in a house, his own house. Rajbeer- now can we get married.
Preeto- of course.
Bj meanwhile comes to the court,- Preeto yeh tu ne kya kiya shaadi ke pavitra rishte ko thod diya.
Rajpreet break their hug and look at Bj. Preeto- bj, ap se rishto ki baata suna ab accha nahi lajta. Ap woh maa ho jisne apne patti ki izad ke liye apni betti ka katel kar diya.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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1 WEEK LATER...
Rajbeer and Preeto are married. It was night, Rajbeer was done taking a shower and Preeto was just putting away some clothes. Rajbeer just came out of the washroom, shirtless. Rajbeer was combing his hair and then Preeto came and then messed it all up. Rajbeer- Preeto kya kar rahi ho, mere bal.
Preeto is too busy laughing. Rajbeer fixed his hair, Rajbeer had a idea, he started walking towards Preeto and then held her arm. Rajbeer- bhaut mazaa a raha tha. Ab meri bari tumhe paresha karne ki. I'll take my revenge.
He toke both of her hands and held them behind her back. Preeto looked up to him still laughing- yeh tha apka revenge.
Rajbeer- nahi.
He knelt down and then tried to see her navel but her sari was in the way. He tried to remove it but Preeto wouldnt let him. Preeto- kya kar rahe ho Rajbeer. Stop it.
Rajbeer- nahi aur tumhare haath, well yeh bhaut chote aur delicate hai ke mera ek haath hi kafi hai.
He takes both of her hands single handed and then moves her saari aside so he could see her navel. Rajbeer looks up Preeto one more time before continuing. He smiles at Preeto, then brings his mouth close to her navel. His tongue encircles her navel and Preeto shuts her eyes tight. Rajbeer then starts nuzzling her stomach. Preeto- Rajbeer please stop it, bus bhi karo. Plz mujhe jaane do. She is trying to free her hands but fails. Then Rajbeer stopped, and looked up at her- i think ke yeh sab agar hum bed pe kare toh accha hoga.
Rajbeer picks her up and then goes to the bed. Rajbeer still holds on to her hands and looks in her eyes- agar tum mujhe kiss karne dogi toh phir yeh sab thoda jaldi hoga lekin agar tum mujse isse hi ladti rahi toh phir bhaut ziyada time lagayga.
Preeto doesnt answer but stops trying to free her hands. Rajbeer lets go of her hands and then goes back to her stomach, he holds both sides of her waist and starts kissing her navel again. Preeto was moved her head to her right and closed her eyes. Rajbeer gave her 2 feathery kiss on the navel and then for the third time instead of kissing it he bit Preeto's navel. Preeto- ouch, Rajbeer stop it.
Rajbeer was sucking her navel and then stoped and then went up to Preeto's face. He kissed her cheeks- i know ke mein tumhe bhaut kiss karta hon lekin kya karo.
He kisses her lips, then with their lips still against each other he says- u feel so good. Tumhare skin itni soft hai aur iss mein itna nasha hai ke control nahi ho patta.
Preeto starts laughing, and so does Rajbeer. Rajbeer- god i luv u
Preeto breaks the kiss- i luv u 2 lekin ab plz jaan dona.
Rajbeer- itni jaldi kya hai abhi toh poore raat hai na.
Preeto smiles and Rajbeer removes her saari and then starts nuzzling her neck. Rajbeer again gives Preeto 2 feathery kisses on the neck and then bits it. Preeto pushes him away- Rajbeer.
Then starts rubbing the part that he bit. Rajbeer pulls her hand- yaha ao mein thik kar deta hon.
Rajbeer pulls her back on the bed and kisses the parts and Preeto keeps smiling. Preeto- apko patta hai apse boora iss duniya mein koi aur nahi hai.
Rajbeer- nahi mein tumhe boora issi liye lajta hon kyunki mein tumhe apna pyaar karke dekhata hon. Tumhare saath soo ke.
Preeto blushes. Rajbeer- waise jab tumne mujhe pehli baar shirtless dekha tha tab kya kaha tha.
Preeto- patta nahi
Rajbeer- kaho na
Preeto- besharam nagaa.
Rajbeer smiles- i luv u
Preeto- i luv u 2
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14

nicely written thanks. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Wow Sana simply amazing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
please continue the story ahead, we are waiting...or is this the end of the story. ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Sorry guys that waz the end

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