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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Dude Riddhima is going to fall in love with someone. But who, well you will have to wait for that. And at the end you will find out that smart planning was done between characters.

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preeti.r

@preeti.r

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Just read all the four parts ... interesting twist , like it a lot ... nice reading , your track is any day more interesting than whats going on in the serial 😆... specially love the quick updates

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Thank u very much for the compliments. I have the rest of the story in my mind till Rajpreet wedding but, should I continue writting after that? By the way how do you like Riddhima?

Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago

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hookedonGeet

@hookedonGeet

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ankitaluv
oh wow, your story is getting interesting with all hatke twists and turns

Hope Riddhima won't fall for Rajbeer 😆 ..Let her take away Sunny ji

Better twists and turns than what the cvs are force feeding us these days.

Welcome to the forum 'unknown'

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

wow ... your super fast with the story writing ... good job
loved reading them :)

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Part 5

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At lunch, Riddhima said "Bye the way, kun tha woh stupid air force officer jo ek sucidial place pe swimming kar raha tha. Tune mera woh awesome idea toh use kiya na. Uske nam ke posters pure Amritsar mein lage na."
Then Rajbeer got a angry face and then Preeto started pointing towards him.
<div>'oh, woh to Rajbeer tha na" said Riddhima in a nervouse voice,then Preeto slightly nodds her head. "Anyways, let it be. V can become friends. Woh jo sucidial place the na waha pe 56 sucides ho chuke the. You can call me Ridz if u want and i'm a choreographer."

Rajbeer and Riddhima shake hands then Bj says "Riddhima, toh kuch dino ke liye yaha pe rokja na."

"Nahi Bj woh mein apne Masi ke ghar reh rahi hoon. Aur mujhe wasi be Preeto se ek important baat karne thi."

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After lunch, Riddhima calls Preeto, Rajbeer and Sunny and they all go upstairs into Preeto's room for a talk.

Promo: What do u think is the important talk?

<div>PS

I will update Part 6 tonight or early tom. morning.😊

Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago