Preeto ... our own storyline :)

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

Guyz since the story just dragging ... i thought lets make our own story up... I'll start and you guyz carry on ..

PART 1

Okay so rajbeer and preeto are together ... on meeta mehendi day
rajbeers trying so hard to talk to preeto but she is ignoring him because of NA...

Rajbeer- Preeto tum mujhe ignore kyun kari ho!

Preeto- Mein ... ummm...nahin toh mein tumhe ignore nahin kari... woh meeta di ki mehendi he na toh bass bauth kaam hain

Rajbeer - Choot bath bolo preeto ... mein notice kara hoon ke roke ke din se tum mujhse teek se baath nahin karti ... aisa kya hogaya kain tum itni badal gayi ...
tumhai paatha hain na ke mein tumse itna pyaar karta hoon

Preeto- Par mein nahin karti ... ab se tum apne raaste aur mein apne...

Rajbeer- nahin karti matlam??? toh woh sab kya tha ... woh waqt jo humne guzara... saab choot Tha kya ???

Preeto- HAAN!! CHOOT THA...

Preeto tries to go but rajbeer grabs her arm and pulls her close towards him ...

Rajbeer- Meri ankhon mein dekh kar kahon ke jo paal hamne guzare woh saab choot hain...
kehdo ke tum mujhse pyaar nahin karti ... kehdo preeto ...kehdo

Preeto crying but staring into rajbeers eyes ... staying quiet... not knowing what to say

Edited by xxAqeelahxx - 13 years ago

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

Some one carry on :) 👍🏼

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Saina

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Posted: 13 years ago

you put us on spot...please continue would love to hear from you👍🏼

Nice post

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Sneha Patro

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Posted: 13 years ago

Guddd one Aqeelah some of us here have already come up with SS/OS/FF...as u have started the story i want u to write do continue...👍🏼

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Madhuban Sen

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Posted: 13 years ago

ya please u continue na...

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Bobby1810

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Posted: 13 years ago

I agree too. We have come up witih our FF/OS. So please carry on and give us more.

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snehapatro
Guddd one Aqeelah some of us here have already come up with SS/OS/FF...as u have started the story i want u to write do continue...👍🏼

I'm really bad at story writing ... i wanted you lot to continue :)