RoYush- TERE LIYE ts (part 3 updated)

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Sarthi Sharda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Lovely update dear

AN Thanks for pm

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jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

really glad that im getting good feedback for my os on royush...

thank u all for ur feedback...

keep enjoying...

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Part 2
it's raining
and piyush starts running

song plays
(He starts seeing love of his life everywhere)
jaane kaisa hai jaadu kar diya!!!
Dil mera hone laga kyun laapata
laapata!!!
(She disappears suddenly ...He turns back and she nowhere)
He injures his hand hitting on wall
kuchh to hain tere mere darmiyan!
(He imagines her healing his wound and hugging him)
kyun lag raha jar pal mujhe ab naya naya
Naya naya!!
Sab kuchh apne sa lagne laga,
Tu apna sa lagne laga!
(He picks a flower and gives it to her )
khayalon mein tere!
(He listens car horns and his dream bubble bursts)
Katte hain din!
katti hain rate in meri ab tare gin gin !!!
(he smiles and thinks he is in love but his smile fades off and worry on his face to loose his love of life forever)
Do I love u?
Do I love u ?
What I feel, it is the true!
But, do I love u ?

He run towards his car
rain stops
he sits in car and goes to hospital

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 8 years ago

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

piyush running in rain painfully thinking of roshni was touchy.his imagination of roshni everywhere..healing his wound,,hugging him...so he is slowly realizing his love n has rushed to the hospital to meet her.cant wait 4 royush meeting.through a song sequence u have shown piyush's emotions beautifully

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
piyush running in rain painfully thinking of roshni was touchy.his imagination of roshni everywhere..healing his wound,,hugging him...so he is slowly realizing his love n has rushed to the hospital to meet her.cant wait 4 royush meeting.through a song sequence u have shown piyush's emotions beautifully

thank u dear...for ur lovely feedback!!⭐️😊

hope to entertain u more and more with my stories...on royush!😉😳

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Heatsha8176

@Heatsha8176

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Awesome updates
Piyush finally realized his love for rosh
Remembering all past moments with her
Remembering how she risked her life to save him
Now she's in hospital
Thank god he was a blood match for her
Now he's running back to be with her
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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ameena671

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

wow wonderful update loved it thank you for pm.

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kavita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Piyush running in the rain thinking about Roshni was very much passionate.

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊

Piyush running in Rain thinking about Roshini was so Heart-Touching.😭

The Song was so Emotional.😭

Piyush Emotions were so Nicely explained.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

__________________________________

(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

part-3

piyush worried for roshni...

he gets call...

he picks it

piyush :chaachu roshni kaisi hai ab?

chaachu: wo theek hai ab ...par tera naam bol rahi hai baar baar ...tu kahaan hai

piyush:wo...wo chachu mein abhi aaya !!

he reaches hospital in hope for roshni

he runs towards her room 507

he goes inside the door running...

he calls her name:roshni

roshni was laying on bed

she opens her eyes slowly ... taking piyush name from her mouth

piyush:finallly...finally tumko hosh aagaya !!!

roshni kept quiet

piyush :ruko mein abhi ek danda le ke aata hun!

roshni :what?

piyush:us dande tum apne is buddhu pati ko khoob marna !!

roshni ...:piyush!!

piyush:jo dard meine tumhe diya hai uska hisab to chukka karna hi hai naa...

tumhara ye nadan bhondu buddhu idiot pati ye bhi nahin jaan paya ki kaun uski kab puri zindagi ban gaya

jiske naam us daata ne mera har ek pal likh diya !

agar tumhe kuchh ho jata na to mein jeete ji mar jaata !sachchi!

roshni:finally!tumne maan liya ki sirf mein hi tumhare liye pagal na thi..?

piyush:mmm...ye dost bhi apni dost uff apni wifea hai ke liye poora pagal sarfira ho chuka hai !

tumhe pata hai use uski life aur roshni dono mil gayi hai

i dont think ab usse zyaada lucky koi aur hai is duniya mein

roshni smiles...tears rolled down from her eyes...

mmm patidev ..i love u tooo ...😭

piyush:sachchi❤️

roshni:sachchi!!!

he hugs her ...⭐️

and just then family arrives there...and sees them together happy hugging each other...

they too get happy ...

aarav says :ise kehte hain sachche pyaar ki humesha jeet hoti hai !⭐️😊

iske beech daraar dalne wala jal kar reh jaata hai and u all know i m talking about whome?😉

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