RoYush- TERE LIYE ts (part 3 updated)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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part-1

piyush has realised roshni love for him so true ..she is right now fighting for her life in hospital because of him only...
he is feeling guilty ...when noone was there for him ...from starting roshni was there for him
but when she needed him...he did not even trusted her ...

in hospital room,
roshni saying piyush name again and again...
simar worried
piyush outside
piyush:mata rani pls...roshni ko bacha lo ...saari galti meri hainaa...to fir use kyun saza mil rahi hai
mein use kho nahin sakta...ap jante ho naa...to phir...
just then,simar comes out from room angrily...
simar(angrily):piyush...
piyush hugs her:maaa...
simar frees her and tells him:ab kya dekhne aaya hai tu yahaan,ki wo zinda bhi hai ya margayi?
piyush:maa ye aap kya keh rahi hain?
simar:wahi keh rahi hoon jo sach hai
meri maata rani hain uski raksha karne ke liye
tu jaa yahaan se
she tells mataji:aap ise keh dijiye ki ye chala jaye yahan se aur mujhe iski shakal bhi nahin dekhni
piyush feels guilty...he starts going sadly
suddenly doctor came nd simar says :doctor... roshni kaisi hai ab?
piyush stops and goes fastly towards doctor
doctor says: roshni ka o- blood hai jo milna bohot mushkil hai
piyush :doctor mein launga uske liye blood aap bas uska ilaaj jari rakhiye
use kuchh nahin hona chahiye bas!!
doctor:ok...but fast...
piyush runs fastly from hospital and searches for roshni blood in blood bank
he return sadly after hours
not getting o-blood
doctor:aap sab apna blood test karwa lijiye ek baar
hosakta hai apmein se kisi ka khoon uski jaan bacha le...
piyush says :doctor aap mera bhi blood test kar lijiye ...mujhe kahin pe o-blood nahin mila,...
doctor takes him to a room and tests his blood
after it ,piyush comes outside room
and sits sadly...
After some time...doctor comes and says:roshni ka blood group piyush ke blood group se match kar gaya hai
he runs towards doctor with happiness and requests doctor:doctor aap mera khoon ka katra katra le lijiye but pls...meri roshni ko bacha lijiye...
piyush holds his maa :maa apne dekha mera khoon roshni ke khoon se match hogaya
mein roshni ko kuchh nahin hone dunga wo bohot jald thik ho jayegi dekhna aap...
simar gets angry :she removes his hand from her shoulder and turns away!
tu tab kahaan tha jab use teri sabse jyaada zaroorat thi..
doctor:dekhiye patient ko apke blood ki zaroorat hai fast!
he goes with him and gives his blood to roshni to save her life...
piyush comes outside and very sad seeing her in this state only
and sees roshni from her room window...
he feels guilty and very sad ...
he goes outside the hospital
he starts driving his car
he switches on the radio..
song plays..

Lafzon se jo tha pare
(he remembers his childhood moments with roshni)

Khaalipan ko jo bhare
(he goes lost in their memories...their fights)

Kuchh tto tha tere mere darmiyaan
(her accepting all mistakes...and telling him i love u )

Rishte ko kya mod doon
(his cloosing door on he face)

Naata yeh abb tod doon
(vaidehi piyush about to marry and roshni gets married with him because of his decision for her mother respect)
tears roll out from his eyes...

Ya phir yun hi chhod doon, darmiyaaning roshni
(his loving vaidehi not trusting roshni ...slapping her...and blaming her for all)

Benaam rishta woh...
(and then vaidehi exposed ...she just using him in the name of love thats it)
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
he remembers how vaidehi took sword and runs to kill him but roshni saved his life and risked her life for him)

Ho naa.. sake jo bayaan, darmiyaan
Darmiyaan Darmiyan
Darmeyaan Darmeyan

piyush says to himself:kyun bachaya tumne mujhe...! mar jane deti ...
mujhe jeene ka hak hi nahin hai
mein apni bachpan ki dost ko naa chunkar kal ke aaye jhoothe pyaar ko chuna...
he cries..,

Kuchh to tha tere-mere darmiyaan
Haaye
Darmiyaan Darmiyan
Darmeyaan Darmeyan
Kuchh to tha tere-mere darmiyaan...

Aankhon mein tere saaye
(he closes his eyes...and remember how they used to tease each other..)
Chahoon tto ho na paaye
Yaado'n se teri faasla haye
he stops his car ..its raining...
he gets out of the car,...
and remembers...how they used to dance in rain ...together with dholwale...
he sits back in car
Jaake bhi tu na jaaye
(he remembers how she put ointment on his wound and says thanks to him from saving her from fire)
Thehri tu dil mein haaye
Hasrat si banke kyun bhala
he sees two children running after each other
and remebers his moments..with roshni in childhood...them running after each other and playing ...
Kyun yaad karta hoon
Mit.ta hoon banta hoon
he starts driving again...
Mujhko to laayi yeh kahaan
Benaam rishta woh...
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho na sake jo bayaan darmiyaan
Darmiyaan Darmiyan
Darmeyaan Darmeyan
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan
Haaye..
Darmeyaan Darmiyan
Darmiyaan Darmeyan
Kuchh toh tha tere mere darmiyaan


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and it will help me improve my writing too...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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When roshni risked her on life to save from piyush he realized her value.now he is so guilty.but he is trying to rectify his mistake by donating blood to her.thats nice.Piyush saying y she saved him n she shud've let him die was touching.piyush remembering their past moments with d song darmiyaan was very emotional.pls update d next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

When roshni risked her on life to save from piyush he realized her value.now he is so guilty.but he is trying to rectify his mistake by donating blood to her.thats nice.Piyush saying y she saved him n she shud've let him die was touching.piyush remembering their past moments with d song darmiyaan was very emotional.pls update d next part soon


thank u dear for ur long feedback...will try to update next part soon ...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Atlast Roshni's patience paid off. Their jodi will be like Simar Prem jodi.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update...
Thank u for pm & update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for Update,Dear.😊
Thanks to jasminerahul, For Pm.😊
It was Amazing os.😊
Piyush Part was so Nice.😊
The Song was so Nice.😊
The Conversations were so Nice.😊
Please Update Soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: leavesandwaves

Atlast Roshni's patience paid off. Their jodi will be like Simar Prem jodi.

u r right...
i love royush jodi too core...they r defination of true besties..love
piyush did too much wrong before...
even guided by vaidehi
but roshni stilll saved him...
and it changed piyush heart too/...
he melted and realised his mistake...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: PremPBSB

Awesome update...

Thank u for pm & update

u r welcome...
thanks for appreciation...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for Update,Dear.😊
Thanks to jasminerahul, For Pm.😊
It was Amazing os.😊
Piyush Part was so Nice.😊
The Song was so Nice.😊
The Conversations were so Nice.😊
Please Update Soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu

glad u liked...it...⭐️
part 2 updated of my dil mil gaye story on royush..
read enjoy...!!😳😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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