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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: rishi_rosid

Hi good morning dear.

You surely get nice comments not tomatoes and chappies

Your making all crazy with your ffs and ss

Waiting for your ss

di no waiting now

just in 5 min update will be served to read😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: banuprasa

Nice concept & we look forward your update tomorrow dear..👏👏👏


All the best...👍🏼

thanks di
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Posted: 10 years ago
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BOUNDLESS LOVE


Roli was feeling so tired because of over stress..after solving the puzzle of mysterious happenings..at last she was relief that her Sid is back to her..Simar's self-respect won in-front of Rajveer's evilness..Prem is back on track after seeking forgiveness and giving oughth ,to
never keep self respect of his wife and family on name of cards or any other stupid game by which the family should face any hard ship..Maya went back to her world asking pardon to all Bharadwajians especially Roli and Sid..Amar and calender live in the house for there work and they are as usual welwisher of the family..Rajveer was in jail while Rajkumari died in the war between Sid and her..Mausiji asked pardon for her deeds as usual mahan Simar and Mataji forgave her..All the Bahu's and betas again united together..atlast all are together again under one roof...
but something is missing..
what is that..yeah happiness..
but y..
because the ladli bahu of BW house was ill due to lack of care towards her behind all this.. she is not interested in eating anything while all family members are worried..

ROSID'S ROOM

Sid:Roli stop u r adamancy and eat something yaar

Roli:No Siddhantji i don't want anything please understand

Simar:Roli what happen to u y u do all this,u r health is not well and ur showing ur childishness all r worrying for u

Sid:Roli please i can't allow u to play with ur health

Roli:Di and Siddhanthji i'm really very sorry but i don't have mood to eat

Sid:Ok now come with me we need to go for shopping

Roli:Shopping for what

Sid:Roli tomorrow is Raksha bandhan and i need to buy gift for Jhanvi

Roli:Oh sorry i forgot and i need to tie Rakhi for di and another i should send to toothan..thanku Siddhantji for reminding me

Sid:Ok by this u can feel fresh also

Roli:Yaah sure

Roli and Sid went for shopping but there also her mood was same she was not eating anything ..also she have improper food for dinner all started worrying about

Roli's health

NEXT DAY:

All were ready to celebrate Raksha Bhandahan though Roli smiled in-front of others she was not all alright

Anjali and Sanjana put tika on their forehead,did aarthi and tied rakhi to Aarv, Pratham and Nirvan
Jhanvi tied Rakhi to all the 4 brothers and they gave beautiful gifts to her

Roli as usual tied Rakhi to Simar but she was badly missing her brother Gautham

Roli was remembering how she used to tie rakhi gautham and how he irritate her while giving gift
That is when they heard the door bell..Simar went to open the door and was surprised to see her mom ,pappa and gautham

Simar in anxiety was about to shout..while Gautham sigh-gelled not to shout

Simar:Maa ,pappa

Hearing her parents arrival Roli rushed to them and hugged Meena and Jamunalal..while Prem and Sid took his blessings

Roli was missing Gautham and she asked about him,she was upset

Roli:Maa where is Gautham..he has not come

Meena:No Roli he has not come

She was upset while others smiled secretly..They all settled, suddenly

Two hands closed Roli's hands from behind

Roli:Gautham

Roli said Gautam and turned to see while Gautham was wearing a funky mask in order to afraid Roli..

But Roli, she wasn't afraid and took out the mask to reveal the face and fold her hands

Gautham:Maaa

He screamed loudly while Roli was confused and he hide at back of Sid
Roli:Toothan its all over come out

Gautham:Di u have became a chudail ..how jiju selected u as life partner i don't understand

Sid:What to do saaley ji misfortune

All laughed while Roli gave an angry look to both Sid and Gautham

Roli:Are u both finished,Gautham just stop now i will tie Rakhi

Simar and Roli tied Rakhi to gautham..Gautham gave gift to Simar ,while for Roli

With all sort of excitement

Roli:Mera gift

Gautham:Tenga and he went and hide behind Sid again

Sid smiled while Roli gave an irritated look to Gautham

Roli:Siddhantji hateeye

Sid:Roli agar tumhar bhai mery peechey khada hai tho mey kya kr sakthe hun bolo...just try to catch him

Gautham escaped seeking nice chance

Roli:Aapko na i will see u later

Sid:First u go behind ur bhai for the gift

Roli:Yes,...she was now behind Gautham

TOM AND JERRY WAR IS GOING TO BEGIN

The gays entered into the house while Roli and Goutham are running around the house

First Goutham entered into Pari's room

Pari was doing her make up seeing gautham she stood up with her make up kit doing make up and went towards him

Roli suddenly enter her room due to her sudden entry pari's make up was spoiled

Pari:Roli

Roli:Sorry babi

But Roli didn't wait she just ran behind Gautham

Pari:Sattu ji see what Roli did

Sattu:Pari don't worry ...he was consoling her but no use

Roli seeing Gautham coming towards Amar's room she just hide herself under curtain

Gautham was coming running fast thinking Roli is behind him while ,Roli to make him fall she just took her leg out

But before Gautham can fall Amar came in middle ..he fall down

Amar:Hey maaa

Gautham:Roli di...he showed thums down and runned

Roli:Thothan i will not spare u today

Seeing there running all family members r happy..especially Sid and Simar thinking now she is out of mood

Sid:Roli saabki jaan nikal degi kya

Roli:Siddhanthji shut ur mouth and try to hold that stupid

Gautham:U r big stupid(still running behind each other)

Uma:Roli maan jow na please stop

Roli:No babhi today i will see his end

Before uma could say Gautham pushed Uma on Roli while Roli pushed her onto couch

Uma:Shailuji

Shailu:Uma kisneh kaha bhich mein bol ne ko

Gautham stopped a while in front of kushi Roli found him and gave a tight slap

While Gautham bent down seeing Roli and kushi got the Slap

Gautham:Roli di he showed his tongue

Roli:Tothan key bacche

Khushi:Maaji ,sankalpji Roli babi beat me

Karuna:Roli what is this

But Roli is Roli she just ran behind Gautham.

Gautham was at back of calender searching for Roli while roli was at back of Gautham..
Now Roli got a nice chance to kick him,she just raised her leg..and ran towards gautham
Calender bent down seeing aarav throwed a toy to pick it up ..gautham just step aside in that speed Thinking Gautham Roli Kicked calender on his ass while calender screamed to hell and fall forward..he said

Calender:Jab mey chota tha na khoi be meri ass par itna solid kick nahi diya

Roli and Gautham were fighting while Sid Caught Roli and lift upto the floor while Prem caught Gautham

Simar:Roli and Gautham just stop it now

Roli:Siddhantji chodiye chodiye mujhe aaj na iss toothan ki kher nahi

Gautham:Jiju leave me today i will see what this dayan will do

Roli:U thothan u called me dhayan..wait and see what i will do now

Gautham:Who will wait with u ..i will just run from here..ctch meu dayan

Roli pushed Sid while Gautham pushed Prem they both fall on the gays

they again sarted running while kids were clapping and enjoying the fight of Maasi v/s Mamma

Simar was trying to save Prem and Sid from the gay's

Maataji,Sujatha,Meena ,Jamunaand Rajender were came out from the room and was surprised to see Sunami in house created by Roli and her bro
Before they could react

Verma aunty entered into house she was shocked seeing the scene

Roli was infront of Verma aunty while Gautham was at back

Verma:Roli can u give me a bowl of sugar

Roli:Aaj meh tujhe nahi chodungi

verma:mujhe kyun

Roli:Aunty move aside

Verma:move where

Roli pushed Verma while she fall on Rajender...Mausiji came out of her room and stood beside Mataji

Mausiji:Hai jiji what is this toofan mail inside the house..arey samajneh vaali bath hai yeh ghar hai ki marathon

yahan wahan bagh rahey hai

before mausiji could say anything Gautham gave solid punch which blast mausi's nose,Mataji rolled her eyes thinking short escape

Seeing all this jamunalal became furious

Jamunalal:Roli and Gautham

Roli and Gautham feared with sudden shout and came infront of jamuna

Jamunalal:Roli and u Gautham what all this r u kids in just 15min see what u have done

Roli and gautham:Sorry pappa

Roli:all because of this thothan pappa

Jamuna:Stop it Roli it is not ur mayaka its ur sasural

Roli:Thotan give my gift now

Gautham gave a soft toy

Roli:Thank u tothan...Roli hugged and kissed

Gautham:Roli didi i know u will surely like it

They both sat and took a releif breath unknown of damage,suddenly

Sid:Roli bachau yaar

That is when Roli opened her eyes and saw Sid and Prem in hands of gay..Simar was trying hard to release them..Roli went furiously

Roli:Oye u got u r money na now go

Gay:These guys r so handsome...let us be here for some more time..they said biting their lowerlip and clapping in-front of Roli

Roli:I said leave them

Sid:Arrey chod do yaar agar Jhansi ki Rani badki naah tumhareh saathsaath hum saab ki kher nahi

Listening to Sid they all left and wentout..again a sound of bachou came

Roli:Siddhantji aab kya hua

Sid:Its not me

That is when all looked Verma on Rajender and sujatha is trying to get him free

Sid:Roli kuch kar yaar otherwise Rajender Bharadwaj will become Rajender Verma

Roli thought for a while and said

Roli:Verma aunty ur curry on stove is burning

listening to Roli verma got her concious back

Verma:because of u ppl my curry will be burnt

but Rajender ji i will come again Verma said with a blush while Rajender and Sujatha were shocked..

Then came a list of complaints

Seeing pari kids frightened..but Kids were encourajing Roli and Gautham

Anjali:Maasi what a kick u have gave to calender uncle,and maama, u to mausiji

Sanjana:Slap to kushi chachi and Amar uncle fall head over heals,papaa and chachu with gays

Anjali:Maasi continue again

All looked at faces while Roli and Gautham were smiling bowing there head down

Mataji:Ok ok now its dinner time lets have dinner

Gautham:Didi this paneer koftha was prepared by u na

Roli with all excitement

Roli:Yes delicious na,Siddhanthji like it a lot

Gautham:Yak jiju again what happen to ur taste

Roli was now in top anger

Roli:Gautham u don't like palak na now u see what i will do

Roli holding gautham's both hands she feed him palak

while Gautham got a chance and in min there is upside down of the game

Gautham hold Roli's hand and forced her to eat 4 paratas

All were happy though they were fighted because of there fight Roli's mood got set and eat stomach fully...

After a while in Rosid room

Roli was on bed beside Sid and Gautham on her lap

Sid:Roli..u both in ur house will fight like this only

Gautham:More then this

Sid:Now i think i should be say i'm lucky if not Roli would fight with me and bust my bottom if i'm her friend

Roli:Siddhanthji what r u saying when i beat u

Sid:Roli u won't beat me but kick me from bed

Gautham:Di u won't spare jiju also

Roli:Uboth shut up...and Siddhanthji though we both fight but we r together in facing problem also when we r in our house

Sid:Good to know

Gautham:Yes jiju di is that's y i love my Roli di more then any one

Sid:Roli i think this is ur khandhani problem

Roli:What

Sid:Fight before u love

All the three laughed

Roli:Yes we fight before love that's y my and thotan's love is boundless love

Gautham:I love u di

Roli:Ilove u too

Sid:I love u 3

saying 3 hugged each other

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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Hi friends

its a small thought of giving a comedy ss on bro and sis relation

All thanks to banu di for suggesting a wonderful title for my ss

hope i reached the expectations of u guys

please do like it and post ur comments negative or positive
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: kshamaD

Hi friends

its a small thought of giving a comedy ss on bro and sis relation

All thanks to banu di for suggesting a wonderful title for my ss

hope i reached the expectations of u guys

please do like it and post ur comments negative or positive


Very cute SS dear... I dont have brother & i enjoyed this a lot...

yes you reached the expectation...

Thanks for just suggestion of title... Thanks... but its my pleasure dear...

Hope to get more & more writing from you...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
very nice update dear
very funny ss
i like verma aunty very much
i was imagining the situation and was laughing really hard😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ramya2397

very nice update dear

very funny ss
i like verma aunty very much
i was imagining the situation and was laughing really hard😃😃

thanks ramya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: banuprasa


Very cute SS dear... I dont have brother & i enjoyed this a lot...

yes you reached the expectation...

Thanks for just suggestion of title... Thanks... but its my pleasure dear...

Hope to get more & more writing from you...😛

thanks di will try to give my best possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Simply awesome story kshama
Loved it a lot.

Gotham and roli were superb.

Getting pity on rajender, amar and calender

Mausiji got nice for her deeds and also kushi for try to deceive them again let it be for funny also

Bechari pari no no I should say bw family to see pari like that and able to withstand

Your ss was really fabulous and wonderful

Bro made her sis normal
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: rishi_rosid

Simply awesome story kshama

Loved it a lot.

Gotham and roli were superb.

Getting pity on rajender, amar and calender

Mausiji got nice for her deeds and also kushi for try to deceive them again let it be for funny also

Bechari pari no no I should say bw family to see pari like that and able to withstand

Your ss was really fabulous and wonderful

Bro made her sis normal

thank a lot di
i was waiting for u r comment after the ss

i want to take revenge on all bahus so each one got a chance as these stupid bahus other then

simar never support Roli😆😆

and coming to bro and sis i every time like cute fight so tried and it worked well

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