Back With My New FF!! (Updated Part 5)

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sheetal

@sheetal1979

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ayshax
I am now going to introduce the characters and their roles

Siddhant AKA Sid: The only son of a wealthy businessman and older brother of Simar. He strongly believes in love and is looking for the special one

Roli: She is Prem's younger sister and is from a middle class family with big dreams. She is at college and she is kind of spoilt and doesn't really believe in love, until she meets the special one.

Prem: Older brother of Roli who believes in love and is waiting for his dream girl

Simar: Younger sister of Sid and a spoilt girl like Roli who also goes to college and doesn't believe in love

This story will be about Roli and Simar 2 college friends, both spoilt but still hardworking. They don't believe in love and there will be ups and downs when they do get to know about each others feeling about each of their brothers Sid and Prem.

nice character sketch dear can't wait plz update soon and yes try more than one update daily😉

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Anjali-RoSid

@Anjali-RoSid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

nice character sketch... can't wait for the update

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Devi Ravi

@srdevi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Nice intro, looking forward to your ff.

Edited by srdevi - 11 years ago

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Aysha

@ayshax

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Roli on the way to college with her brother Prem in the car.

Roli: Be quick Prem. It's my first day at college today. I don't want to be late.

Prem: Roli, I can't do much. Can't you see there's alot of traffic. Even I am getting late for work ain't I?

Roli: Please try to be quick or I'll get late.

Soon Roli arrived at her college and Prem drove off. She was right on time. She walked in to her class and sat down in any available seat. She looked around to see her class mates. As she was looking around she saw a girl aged around 21, standing at the door.

Roli: Miss, why are you standing at the door? Come in the class.

The girl gave Roli a stern look. She walked towards Roli and sat on her desk.

Boy: You stupid girl. She isn't the teacher. She's the oldest student of this college. Simar.

Roli: Oh I'm so sorry. I thought you were the teacher, but it's not my fault you look older. Take it as a compliment.

Simar: Are you new to this college?

Roli nodded. Simar got off Roli's desk and sat next to her.

Simar: Hmmm.. This is your first and last mistake. You're new that's why I'm not saying anything to you otherwise you'd find yourself out of this class.

Roli laughed at what Simar just said. Simar looked at Roli curiously thinking what she was laughing at.

Simar: Anyways whats your name?

Roli: Roli.

Simar: Hmmm good.

A few minutes later the teacher walked in and taught the lesson. After the bell rang Roli got up and wanting to wonder around the college. Simar went after her.

Simar: Oi you. Ro Ro Ro. What was her name again.

Roli turned around as she knew Simar was calling her.

Roli: It's Roli. R-O-L-I. Roli

Simar: Yeah yeah whatever it is. Where are you going?

Roli: Just around the college. But why do you want to know?

Simar: Just like that. I'll show you around. Come with me.

Roli and Simar went for a tour around the college. Simar showed Roli around and they became friends. Later that day Simar and Roli were sat in the canteen eating their lunch.

Roli: Simar, how old are you?

Simar: I'm 21 and I know what you are wondering. Why am I still in college aren't you? I'm still here because I've failed so many times even though I try hard.

Roli: Hmmm.. Don't worry. I'm here now. I'll help you.

College was over and Prem came to pick Roli up from college. He saw Simar with Roli and was surprised to see her. Roli sat in the car and waved bye to Simar.

Prem: Roli, why is there an old girl in your college that looks like a student?

Roli: Prem, she is a student and she's 21 and still in college because she's failed so many times.

Prem: Oh..

Edited by ayshax - 11 years ago

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PreetiSJ

@PreetiSJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

lovely intro and update 😊

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Aysha

@ayshax

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Later that evening Prem and Roli with their family sitting at the dining table.

Prem: Dad, I have got a new job which is better than my current one. I'm starting tomorrow

Prem/Roli's Dad: Really! Thats a very good news

Prem/Roli's Mum: Yes son thats a really good news. I'm really proud of you.

Roli: Congrats bro.

The next morning Roli and Prem set off for college and work. Prem drops Roli off to college and sees Simar walking into college with Roli. He stares at her for 5 minutes.

Prem: (To himself) Are you mad? Why are you looking at Roli's friend in such a way?

Prem drove off to him new work place. He went into his new office and was eager to see his new boss. He went into the boss' cabin and sat down.

Siddhant: Welcome Prem. I'm your new boss Siddhant. You can call me Sid.

Prem: Thanks alot sir. I'm very happy to meet you.

Prem and Sid both started a convo and Sid explained the work to Prem. On the other hand Simar and Roli were in college in the canteen.

Roli: Simar. I'm going to miss one of the classes today. I have a doctors appointment. Can I copy your notes tomorrow?

Simar: Why tomorrow? Come down to my house tonight. I'll give you my address.

Roli set off to the doctors.

Prem and Sid were still having their chat in Sid's cabin

Sid: Prem. I have a doctors appointment and I have to go. Please can you handle the work until I'm back?

Prem: Yeah sure sir. Don't worry.

Sid also set off to go to the doctors. Roli arrived at the doctors and sat in the waiting room. She glared around to see who was around her.

Roli: (To herself) There's no one interesting here. And it's so boring. I'll call Simar.

Roli rang Simar and started having a chat with her whilst waiting for the doctor to call her. All of a sudden Sid walked in and caught Roli's attention. Roli couldn't stop staring at Sid. Sid smiled at Roli and sat down opposite her but far away.

Roli: Oh my god. He's so perfect.

Roli almost forgot she was on the phone to Simar.

Simar: Roli? What happened? Are you okay? And who are you calling perfect.

Roli: Simar, he's so perfect and.. Forget it. I'll tell you later.

Soon Roli was called by the doctor half an hour late. Sid got angry upon this and complained.

Sid: This is unfair. I have been waiting here since half an hour. My appointment was meant to be at half 4 and it's 5 now.

Roli: Ummm... Excuse me. You can go before me. I don't mind.

Sid: But you've also been waiting here probably longer than me.

Roli: It doesn't matter you can go before me. Its okay

Sid: Are you sure?

Roli: 100 percent.

Sid: Thanks.

Sid walked off and Roli kept staring at him. By the time she got home from the doctors it was already late to visit Simar's. She got home and went to sleep.