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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 27


Siddhant was running behind roli.

Sid: roli wait...

Roli: siddhant you cant catch me.

Sid tried for sometime finally catch her.

Sid: roli this is not right. You always hug me, kiss me and run away. But wont allow me. I won't leave you today without kissing you.

Roli: siddhant we are not inside the house. We are outside what if someone look at us.

Sid: roli no one is here. Please.. Please.

Roli was going backwards step by step while sid was going forward until roli go till the coconut tree.

Sid kept his hands in both sides so that roli can't move further.

Sid moved close towards her face & kissed on her forehead, cheeks and moved towards her lips..

Two eyes were noticing this in anger which belongs to none other than naveen.


Sid lay down on her lap.l

Roli: siddhant my forehead is waiting for sindoor & neck is waiting for mangal sutra.

Sid: I am also eagerly waiting for the day to come.

Roli: once the day comes my siddhant not in need of running behind roli for a kiss.

Sid; roli you too not in need to run from me after giving a kiss.

Roli blushed.




Rosid parents decided to get them married as they completed their final year exams.

Rosid were very happy.


The news of their marriage spread in the village which also reached the ears of naveen.

naveen decided to do something & get roli married to him.

Naveen went to his father & said that he want to marry roli.

His arrogant father decided to get roli married to naveen at any cost.



That day was rosid engagement day.

Roli was looking very beautiful in the new saree gifted by siddhant parents for their engagement.

Roli was waiting in her room

Siddhant came to roli house for engagement. Only few were invited which were very close.

Sid: maaji I will go & see whether roli is ready.

He don't even wait a minute & rushed towards her room.

Roli was looking at mirror after getting ready.

Sid went behind & back hug her.

Roli: siddhant all are waiting down for us.

Sid: let them wait for few more minutes.

sid kissed her on her neck.

Sid: my roli is looking so beautiful today.

Sid turned her towards him.

Sid went close to her lips..




In the downstairs naveen with his family came to roli house.

Naveen father: we wish to get your daughter married to our son naveen

Roli father: sorry she is already decided to get married to siddhant since childhood. Also they love each other. We can't accept your proposal.

Naveen father: how dare you deny my proposal. My son wish to marry roli. We won't go out from here without getting it finalised.

Rosid heard loud voices & rushed towards downstairs.

They were shocked to see naveen & family there talking about roli marriage with naveen.

Sid: naveen what is this.

Naveen: siddhant I got nothing to talk to you.

Sid: you are aware we love each other then why you want to do all these.

Naveen: I am also loving her since school days I can't let you marry her.

There was huge argument going on.

Naveen father told his persons to threaten both families.

Two persons with big knife was standing behind each member of rosid families.

All the guests who came for engagement ran out.

Naveen father: naveen just take that girl & rape her. Then these people can't do anything.

Naveen started running behind roli.

It started raining heavily..

Roli: siddhant.. Siddhant..

Siddhant tried his best to come out of hold of those person to save roli and came out running behind naveen to save roli..

...

Finally rosid died...
Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
hate that naveen to the core 😡 ...anyway dr nice update...waiting for ur next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
nice update didi.waiting for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Oh god that naveen how dare he is hope rosid take revenge for that continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 28


Rosid remembered everything.

Rosid cried and hug each other tightly.

They are no more afraid of rain.

Their life puzzle is solved.

They felt much relieved.

Sid: roli I love you.

Roli: siddhant I love you too.

Sid: roli let's see what happened to our parents.

They rushed towards their house.

The houses were empty locked outside.

Roli: may be that naveen might have killed them.

Sid: you are right. Roli let's go from here.

When rosid turned, they were surprised to see naveen standing.

Naveen: siddhant & roli you both. I can't believe my eyes.

Sid: why are you surprised to see us alive again & want to kill us.

Naveen: siddhant. No. That naveen died already.

Roli: naveen don't try to act smart. You killed us & also finished our family. Is it not enough. You have come here to kill us again?

Naveen: roli I agree i did the mistake of throwing the knife on him. But I did not kill your parents or not come here to kill.

Sid: then where are they

Naveen: after you both died, your parents gave police complaint and police arrested me. I spent my 14 years in jail. My father died worrying about me. When I came out of jail I went to see your parents only for the mistake I have done. Yes I realised later that I did mistake of liking roli knowing she loves you. I asked for pardon. I took care of them till they die one by one before 2 years. I am having these property papers as well as mine with me. Please accept all these & accept my pardon. I have decided to go in search of peace which I lost long back on that day.

Naveen handover all the property papers & left the place.

Sid: roli I can't believe all these happenings.

Roli: we need to believe & be happy that our life puzzle is solved now.

Rosid smiled.
Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Hi friends,


Now their life puzzle is solved. Just a try in different angle in this ff.

I would like to know all your comments where the concept & storyline was interesting to you all.

First I thought of stretching the love storyline of previous birth. But I did not do that.

Sorry for not replying to your individual comments as I am updating from my mobile since yesterday.

Next update on this birth will be updated later.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 29


Rosid called premar.

Sid: prem sorry to disturb you bro. But can you come to the address I give you.

Prem: siddhant any problem.

Sid: no prem. Just come. You will get to see surprises.

Sid gave address to prem.

Sid also called mataji & roli parents and told them to come.

Rosid went to naveen house & collected their house keys.

Rosid were waiting for all to come.

Suddenly rain started.

Rosid looked at each other.

They smiled.

Rosid hold their hands and went out.

Rosid started dancing in the rain.

The dance took out all their suffering they have seen all these days.

It took out all these pains out.

After few minutes no more pain left in their mind.

They continued the dance in love, in joy.

Premar, mataji, rosid parents reached the place.

They all saw rosid dancing in the rain.

All were surprised.

They looked at each other.

Rosid were lost in the world. They were not even aware of their arrival.

All were not aware which place is this & why they all were called.

Also how they are OK with the rain

Mataji tried to call them while prem hold her to let them come back in their own.

After few minutes rosid stopped dancing & noticed all reached the place.

All smiled looking at rosid.

Prem: siddhant what is all this happening? My bro who was afraid of rain dancing in the rain.

Rosid blushed.

Sid: please come. We will tell you all.

Sid opened the door of the house which was Sid's.

Mataji: whose house is this.

Sid: mataji it is mine.

All were surprised other than rosid.

When they went inside they saw photos of sid with a couple.

Rosid looked at each other. They were getting emotional in going to these places where they lived.

All went to upstairs.

Sid: this is my room.

The room was full of rosid photos.

All were shocked.

Rosid remembered they shared in that room.

Sid remembered & touched his chest where roli gave kiss in that room.

Roli blushed.


Then they went to roli house.

Similarly they found roli photo with a couple and in the upstairs roli room full of rosid photos.

Rosid remembered their moments.

Rosid smiled & blushed looking at each other.


All were very much confused.

Mataji: siddhant we are unable to understand anything. Can you please tell us. What is this place. How you both photos all over room if both houses.

Siddhant: now we will tell you all. These both houses belongs to us of previous birth.

Prem: previous birth?

Sid: yes.

Rosid explained to all what all happened in their previous birth & its effect given in current birth. Then how they solved the puzzle.

All were shocked to hear all these.

Prem: this mean you are pair from previous birth who were in search of each other since childhood.

Sid: yes prem.

Mataji: we are unable to believe ourselves now. Its good that everything is OK now

Sid: we wanted you all to know this that's why we called everyone. Nothing else. If we come there & tell you. It will be like a story.

All agreed.

All decided to return to Delhi to their home.

Rosid were very happy to return with all the problems solved & to start their life.
Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Amazing!!!! Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update didi. Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thats amazing didi but why rosid did not take revenge...

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