ROSID FF: Love's Rebirth Completed FF

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Friends,
Banu again with my 3rd FF.ROSID FF: Love's Rebirth

First of all I would like to thank you all my friends who do give comments & encourage and also the silent readers who just read the FF & enjoy eventhough they dont comment for various reasons.

My first FF was based on a Love which happend after Marriage between ROSID & 2nd one was Love birds from College who later get Married and success in their life.(2nd ff not yet completed)

In this FF, the concept is Love happens in the previous birth and they were killed. ROSID take rebirth in different places and fate make them unite again. How they are affected by previous birth memories & how they realise their relationship across births & How they take revenge with the villian who killed them in the previous birth will be seen in this FF.

I request my dear friends to provide their valuable comments to continue this FF.

Also request for your valuable suggessions to make improvements in this FF than the previous ones.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Banu, another interesting ff and I know u would excel in this too,
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Looking forward to new ff Banu it sounds interesting
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Part 1


It was raining heavily.

Roli was running very fast in middle of the trees.

Roli: Siddhant... Siddhant...

A person was running behind Roli to catch her.

The person almost near Roli.

He tries to pull the saree of ROli and she was struggling to escape from him.

while Siddhant hit that man on his head with a stick.

Siddhant rushed towards Roli.

Siddhant: ROli are you alright Dear.

Roli: Yes Siddhant. I am alright.

Siddhant: Roli, lets go from here.

Roli & Siddhant hold their hands together and started running from there.

Due to heavy rain, it was difficult for them to run very fast as well as the path was not clear.

The person who got hit slowly opened his eyes and saw both running from there.

He managed to get up and was thinking. If I am unable to get her, no one should get her.

He took the poisoned sharp knife which he was hiding with him and throw it towards them.

The knife hit Siddhant and he fell down.

Roli: Siddhant... Siddhant..

Siddhant: Roli run.. Roli run...

Roli: No I cant leaving you.

Siddhant was in his last few minutes.

Siddhant: I wont survive. Roli you run.

Roli: Siddhant when you dont survive why should I run & live.

Roli took the knife from Siddhant body & suicide herself with the knife.

Siddhant: Roli, why did you do this.

Roli: Because I cant live without my Siddhant.

Siddhant: Roli I believe we will take birth again to live.

Roli: Yes Siddhant we will take birth again to live.

Roli & Siddhant went close to each other & kissed.

Roli & Siddhant took their last breathe of that birth...

Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: srdevi

Banu, another interesting ff and I know u would excel in this too,


Thanks Dear. Just updated the 1st part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: justloverosid

Looking forward to new ff Banu it sounds interesting


Thanks Dear. Just gave my first update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Bahu quite a good start I loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow dr...another ff...great start ...pls continue soon ...
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Part 2


Mataji & Rajender were tensed.

Sujatha got severe pain before reaching hospital.

They rushed their car towards hospital.

Mataji: Matarani, please bless us. She should deliver the baby without any problem.

The car reached hospital & sujatha was taken to labor ward.

After few minutes of struggling Sujatha delivered a baby boy.

Doctor came out of the ward.

Doctor: Mataji, Your daughter-in-law delivered a baby boy. Mother & Child both are normal.

Mataji: Matarani, Thank you so much that you saved both Mother & Child..



(Mataji alias Nirmala devi is from Rich family who lost her husband in her young age when Rajender was only 10 years old.

Mataji was herself handling all the business till Rajender got capacity to handle on his own.

Rajender married to Sujatha before 2 years and this was her 1st delivery.

As Sujatha lost her parents in her childhood Mataji herself taking care of her daughter-in-law)



Mataji & Rajender were very much excited to see their new member of the family.

Sujatha was discharged from the hospital and she reached Bharatwaj House with the newly born baby.


Mataji arranged for grand naming ceremony for her grandson.

Mataji listed various names for the baby.

But she was getting the name Siddhant in his mind again & again as name for the child which she not even having in her big list.

Mataji decided to go with the name Siddhant.

Rajender & Sujatha too were ok for that name.

Sujatha put the baby in the cradle & called the baby by the name "Siddhant' in its ears.

Baby gave a cute smile hearing the name "Siddhant"

Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3


After few years.

It was a small nursing home where Gauri was admitted due to labor pain.
Her husband Divedi was waiting with their 1st daughter Simar outside the labor ward.

After few hours of stuggle, Doctor came out.

Doctor: SIr she delivered a baby girl.

They were very happy.

Simar: Pappa I got my sister now?

Divedi: yes simar. you got your sister.


(Divedi was middle class man doing job in a factory with small amount of salary.

Their family was well taken care by his wife Gauri.

Simar was their 1st daughter and now it is 2nd delivery for Gauri)


Gauri with the baby was discharged from the hospital and reached their small home.

Simar: pappa, what will be the name of the baby.

Divedi: Simar you tell us which name you wish for your sister.

Simar after much thinking.,,

Simar: Pappa we will keep the name of this baby as Roli.

Their parents agreed for the name selected by Simar.

Simar: Roli.. Roli...

The baby turned her face hearing the name " Roli"

Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago

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