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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 30


Rosid reached bw house.

All are yet to come out of the surprise.

Prem: siddhant we are still shocked to see your photos in that house & above that your previous birth.

Rosid smiled.

Prem: you both loved so much in previous birth that you took rebirth to live together again. Its amazing.

Simar: yes premji. Its amazing. That's why they were changed in 1day after their marriage. You were right their Kerala trip gave them solution to their problem.

Sid: prem, 2 births due are there with roli. We will take leave


Premar smiled & roli blushed.

Sid took roli to their room holding her arms.

Sid locked the door.

Roli tried to move from there while sid hold her hands.

sid: roli shall we dance.

Roli nod her head as acceptance.

Sid switched on the music.

Rosid started dancing in love.

The dance was filled with love, grace, rhythmic.

Rosid enjoyed dancing together.

While dancing sid slowly removed her ear rings and kissed on her ears.

They continued dancing.

Sid slowly removed her nose ring & kissed on her nose.

They continued dancing.

Sid hold her hands & removed the bangles gently.

Sid kissed all over her hands from fingers to shoulder.

They continued dancing.

sid removed her necklace and kissed all over her neck.

They continued dancing.

sid hold her saree tip while roli stopped dancing.

Roli blushed.

Sid dropped the saree tip & removed the fleets from its grip.

Sid took her hands and kept on his shoulders.

Sid pulled her close to him holding her hips

they continued dancing.

Roli finally lean on his chest and hug him tightly.

Sid hold her face & kissed her forehead, eyes, nose, cheeks & moved towards her lips.

after few minutes.

Sid stopped the music & took her in his arms.

Sid lay down beside her in the bed.

Sid moved towards her lips again to satisfy the thirst of 2 births.

After few more minutes.

sid caresses her hip and kissed.

Roli closed her eyes & her body was shivering.

Roli pushed him gently and got up in shyness.

sid hold her hands & pulled her towards him.

Roli fell down in his arms.

Roli removed the buttons of his shirts.

Roli caresses sid from waist to shoulder.

Roli kissed on his chest, neck, moved towards his lips.

After few minutes..

Sid lift her face.

Rosid had eye lock for some time.

Sid smiled & roli blushed.

Rain started to bless this couples consummating passing the births.
Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: magicalrosid

Thats amazing didi but why rosid did not take revenge...



It is because he already lost his life in jail. Also he realized the mistake
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Awesome updates Banu.The plot was superb.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 31


Roli wake up next day morning.

Roli looked at sid face.

Roli remembered the previous day moments & smiled.

Sid wake up to see smiling roli.

Sid: roli..

Sid pulled her more closer & hug her tightly.

Roli: siddhant let us wake up. Its already 7 now.

Sid: roli let it be 10 also, I am not going to get up today.

Roli: then what about breakfast.

Sid: I am not feeling hungry to have food. I am only feeling hungry to have you.

Roli blushed.

Roli: what if anyone search for us.

Sid: let them search

Roli: what if anyone call us

Sid: let them call us.

Roli: siddhant...

Sid: you are concern about someone who not yet search for us & not yes called us. What about me already waiting for you?

Sid pretend to be angry.

Roli blushed & went close to him.

Roli: there is no need for my siddhant to wait for roli's approval. He can take her as he wish.

Sid smiled & hug her tightly.

Sid went close to her & covered them with the blanket.

After 1 hour

Rosid got ready to go down for breakfast.

Rosid hold their hands & got down.

All were happy to see them together.

Mataji: siddhant we are all very happy that your problem is solved and now you are happy.

Siddhant: yes mataji. We first wish to thank you all who decided to get us married & also arranged for a kerala tour. Above this roli place important role in getting into the clues correctly & finally we achieved.

All were happy and enjoyed the moments together.
Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally everything solved very happy but still no rosid love confession...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalrosid

Finally everything solved very happy but still no rosid love confession...



They did confess in an update pg 14 in the park
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi friends,

Hope you all enjoyed the story & thanks for all your comments.

When I started this story, I decided to make it very big with very long previous birth love story, then the villain revenge etc. But I don't know myself my mind was in urge to unite our rosid of 2 birth & not let me to pen more on what I exactly planned. So I just gave few instances & completed the previous birth stories. Also finished that villain track too.

Also I am not able to pen more to add any other plots it this which take out the essence of that rebirth.

Hence finishing this as short story here itself.

I am not aware how many of my ff readers were getting their expectations meet.

I am sorry if I don't reach your expectations.

But don't worry that all three ff are completed now. I will be back with next ff in just 2 hours time with another new concept.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Banu, you have exceeded our expectation and thumps for all the great ff and have really enjoyed your awesome writing talent.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: banuprasa

Hi friends,

Hope you all enjoyed the story & thanks for all your comments.

When I started this story, I decided to make it very big with very long previous birth love story, then the villain revenge etc. But I don't know myself my mind was in urge to unite our rosid of 2 birth & not let me to pen more on what I exactly planned. So I just gave few instances & completed the previous birth stories. Also finished that villain track too.

Also I am not able to pen more to add any other plots it this which take out the essence of that rebirth.

Hence finishing this as short story here itself.

I am not aware how many of my ff readers were getting their expectations meet.

I am sorry if I don't reach your expectations.

But don't worry that all three ff are completed now. I will be back with next ff in just 2 hours time with another new concept.



really it is very nice banu...waiting for ur next ff...loved all ur ff's
Edited by navya.k - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
all updates r mind blowing banu why u r always tensed related to ur ff ur all ffs r always fab

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