premar & rosid ff 'DESTINY' part 8 updt - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rolisiddhant


thnk u divya di. U like it naa? We ll try 2 update soon.


I am not just liking it loving it very much...Hmmm waiting for next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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continue my dear friends soon plz soon 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys thnx for d cooperation. Here is d part.

PART 3

Simar in market. Prem comes.

Prem: hi!

Sim: hey! How r u?

Prem: f9. Thnk u. and u?

Sim: me too. U came for shopping?

Prem: of course.

Prem got a phone call and simar is little confused. Then prem cuts his phone

Sim: time 2 go home see u later.

She turns 2 go.

Prem: aah…. Simar, let me drop u.

Sim: no thnx mr…..

Prem: prem! Forgot my name right?

Sim: aah! Yaa. No thnx prem I ll manage.

Prem: we r friends naa. U can't say no 2 me. Common I ll drop u.

Sim: k.

Sid's office

It's 1 o'clock. Sid looking at some files. And roli sitting looking 2 d watch and sometime sid. Siddhant notices dis bt stay silence. It becomes 1:10 pm. Roli look 2 sid bt doesn't tell anything. Its 1:20 now……

Roli: excuse me!

Sid: hmm….

Roli: don't u feel hungry?

Sid: wht?

Roli: its lunch time siddhant!

Sid: sir!

Roli: siddhant!

She takes away file frm sid.

Sid: wht r u doing?

Roli: come and hv lunch wid me siddhant….

Sid: u r hungry?

Roli: yes.

Sid: then go and eat food. Dnt eat my brain.

Roli: I ll eat food bt wid u.

Sid: wht? I ll take lunch wid u? no chance!

Roli: u hv 2….

Sid: get lost..

Roli is dragging him.

Sid: don't touch me. As i…..

Rosid: hate girls.

Roli: I know but if u want me nt to touch u then come wid me.

Sid: f9. After u.

Days pass. Premar friendship and rosid fight increases day by day.

One day

Premar in a coffee shop. Both r having in convo.

Prem: so wht abt ur future plan?

Sim: nthng special. I m in search of a man who ll love me a lot. He must b my best friend. Handsome, dashing. And he should b fond of singing and dancing like me. And he ll b always wid me when I need him in happiness and sadness.

Prem: found him?

Sim: no. I ll try 2 find all dis in my husband as I prefer arrange marriage then love.

Prem: and if u start loving somebody then?

Sim: no chance as I knw I hv 2 do arrange marriage why would I go in dat line. Its my own decision so there is no question of loving some one.

Prem becomes upset. Sim receives a message.

Sim: I hv 2 go home. papa is going out of town he needs me.

Prem: k. bye.

She leaves. Prem goes 2 is car. Sit inside and takes out his pocket diary and starts writing something. Then suddenly he sees simar standing and looking at d watch. He keeps his diary behind d front glass of d car and goes 2 simar.

Prem: wht happened?

Sim: I want a taxi bt no taxi is…

Prem: come I ll drop u.

Sim: k. thnx.

Both goes 2 car and sit. And they go. Inside d car they r not talking as prem is lil upset. Then suddenly sim eyes fall on diary where it is written PREM'S DIARY. She gives a naughty look and wants 2 stole d diary 2 knw prem's secrets. They were on d way when d traffic police stops prem and asked for d license. Prem and the traffic police were having some conversation and the traffic police is checking d documents when sim secretly stole d diary and keep it in her bag. After that prem drop her in her house.

SID'S OFFICE

A meeting is going on, sid is sitting n roli is standing beside. The dealer says:

Mr. siddhant, the deal is final, but we want you to see our project site once.

Sid: my pleasure sir.

Dealer: come to Kolkata tomorrow then. We can leave together.

Sid: sure.

Dealer: get ur secretary with u too.

Sid: ah…

Roli: I will surely come sir.

Sid gives an angry look. The dealer leaves.

Sid: what is d necessity of your going?

Roli: I m going.

Sid: but…

Roli: I am going.

Sid: fine, get ready till 10 by morning, I will pick u.

Roli: ok.

SIMAR'S HOME

Her father leaves home. Then simar goes 2 her room running and takes out prem's diary from her bag. She lays on bed and starts reading it.

1st PAGE

Today is my birthday. Mata g gifted me my fav. Car today. My bro promised me he will spend d whole day with me only and he will not play any game today which can b danger to his life.. I m very happy today…..

Simar: hmm… seems like u love your family very much…

She continues reading every page 1 by 1.

5th PAGE

Today is my sis's marriage. She is going to start a new life. I bless her from deep of my heart. After marriage she will have 2 go to London as her will be husband works there. I never expected one of my heart's parts will go so far from me. I will miss her a lot.

Simar: prem.., u are a very good human.

She again turns the page. And suddenly hears the door bell. She keeps d diary back in the bag and opens the door. Roli is there. she comes in.

Roli: didi, tomorrow m going 2 kolkata for some urgent work of office. Boss ll come 2 pick me.

Sim: k.

At night

Rosim sleeping. Sim opens her one eye and looks at roli. Seeing her in a deep sleep she takes out prem's diary again.

10th PAGE

Today I saw a girl bt I dnt knw her name. I jst knw dat she stole my heart. I was in love at first sight.

Sim: ah!!!! U r in love and never told me abt her. Though I m ur best friend. F9 I ll see u tomorrow.

She turns d last page.

Today I wanted 2 tell simar how much I love her bt couldn't. we thinks totally different frm each other. She wants 2 love the one whom she ll marry bt I want 2 marry d one whom I love. She ll ever understand my love or nt I dnt knw. I jst knw dat I love her and I cnt live widout her. Bt I too dnt want 2 force her if she doesn't love me,no matter bt I ll love her till d end of my life.

Simar shocks reading all dis.

Morning

Roli is getting ready 2 go.

Sim: roli! How is ur boss?

Roli: my boss. He is khadus. (in mind: sweet too.) he is a young angry man. (in mind: bt very good by heart). U knw, we always fight between our work.(in mind: bt I love him too.) and……..

Sim: and u ll manage 2 go wid him 2 kolkata?

Roli: I hv 2. Work naa didi.

Sim: hmm.

Then they hears car horn.

Roli: perhaps boss came. I hv 2 go fast otherwise he ll shout at me. Bye di…….

She goes. After roli leaves simar calls prem

Sim: come and meet me now.

Prem: wht happened simar everything is k naa?

Sim: come and meet I ll tell u everything.

Prem: k.

Rosid in car

Sid: hw much time u take 2 get ready! We r late by 15 mins.

Roli: hello! I was ready. u came late.

Sid: dnt argue. Remember I m ur boss. K.

Roli: I knw very well. That's why I m behaving so politely. If some other hv……

Sid: hello! Hello! Hello! If dis is ur politeness may I knw how rudely u can behave?

Roli: u really want 2 see?

Sid: no thnx. I m nt interested.

Roli: better.

Simar waiting 4 prem. He comes.

Prem: simar.

She turns.

Prem: wht happened? Why did u called me here?

Simar shows him his diary.

Sim: wht is this prem?

Prem: how did u get that?

Sim: that doesn't matter. Matter is dat wht u hv written in it.

Prem: simar i……

Sim: u broke my belief. I believe that u r very strong. U r very brave bt u….u r unable 2 express ur feelings also? I thought I m ur best friend and u ll share wid me everything and u hide such a big matter frm me. I didn't expected this frm u prem, I didn't.

Prem: then…..let me do it now.

He goes on knees.

Prem: I love u simar. Will u marry me?

2 be continued…………..

Hope u all like it…………….😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
huhuuu🥳


Am the first one to like and comment... Love u anu for giving cute update...😊


Simar's naughtiness and Roli's mad love, Rosid cute fight and prem's deep love...wooowww amazing...👏great going ...continue soon... I think simar will accept prem's love and i also expect some miracle will happen in Rosid business trip and sid will fall for Roli...


Update soon anu...😛


Edited by diyasri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

yipeee 🥳🥳..m te second...mmm..not at all..m after my di.😉.we r always 2gether😛..so m first.😊.hehe...😆

Anu & Radhu,🤗
superb update yaar.👏..happy 4 rosid 😊and tensed 4 premar😕...the diary part was so cute😛..and rosid lunch..haha..so funny..🤣.
waiting 4 te next part...update soon yaar.👍🏼...eagerly waiting 4 te rosid kolkata trip...
Edited by shikhanair - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
really awesome dear rolis mind voice is sooo cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Wow thanks for d pm. Nice. Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
super update continue soon my friend
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
really nice...i cant imagine that simar is naughty like this stealing prem's diary nice to see her like this.finally prem proposed simar😳.good...but when wil sid fall in love.wish to read more rosid romantic scenes.thanks for pm dear...continue soon

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