Sushaan OS#13:Kaise Unhe Main Pukaron(Pg/15 - Page 3

Originally posted by: -MadRaginiFan-

WONDERFUL OS yet again Ana👏

This was my expression while reading it :- ☺️

First let me tell u that it ws not at all vulgar & theres nothing against the rules of IF...to be honest i was imagining all the lines u wrote & hats off to you for writing such beautiful scenes with such ease😳

It was easy to imagine SuShaan in your OS coz they have given us some really close scenes in SGP.Will miss them soo much as today is the last epi

thanks for putting a smile on my face..u did a great job👍🏼

thanku so much Vips😃
so happy to know that you liked the whole thing
i have wrote some SR scenes in my fics before but as this OS was complete based on it, so i though, i over-do somewhere😕
yup, even i can't get over that HUM-TUM scene ever...it was just fab😉😆😳😳
me too so gonna miss it...on SP, this is the only show i lyk to watch...
so happy that atleast it can bring a smile😃😳

Originally posted by: Ddhi

absolutely brilliant👏

i ws imagining each & every part of it...u make my day yaar seriously...

plzzz do write some more of these...atleast i surely like these...plzzz😊

thanku so much dear
so glad that you liked that and thanku for the comments😊😛
i will surly post more OS's later on😳

Originally posted by: Ctnr6

4 me dey r not my SUSHAAN!! As I can say!!!
I m not sayin it b'coz I found it vulgar, infact its vry cute FF of nwely married couple who want 2 be wid each other all d time & share some luv momnt wid each othr...
4 me Sushaan is & alwys wil b 4m SGP...!!! As der charc. Is alwys SO near 2 me & I can imagine dem only in dat way...!!!
As I felt after redin ur FF dat dey r some1 else who r wearin d mask of SUSHAAN...!!! As u wriitten it VERY nicely dat any1 can fall in luv wid it lyk me but still wanna say dat I was not really able 2 realte it wid my bloved SGP Sushaan... :-)
As I think u can undrstnd my coment...! :-)

everyone has its view...and i respect yours...
you didn't find it relating to them, its ur take😊
but every fiction is based of imagination...every novel, every fiction does appeal you if it is something different from the other story.😊...and i don't find myself comfortable in writing in the same story line as going on in the soap...😕
so i beg your pardon to disappoint you but i can't write on that...😊

Originally posted by: shilu999_balani

hi ... ive never interacted with you before i think and i kind of stumbled upon your OS ..dilbar... and tell you the truth im bowled over... thank you... thank you so much for writing this for us... ask vips ... im a die hard fan of jaira.. and i really enjoyed your writing... as i am doing for the ones writte by vips and deepak... i copy and paste them together so that i could get a continuous narration instead of having to seach for parts on the forum... looking forward for your other parts too... i still havent gone thru both the parts but i wanted to congratulate you before reading the whole 2 parts... looking forward for more parts from you... thank you once again...

hey poonam
i though have seen you in creation gallery sometimes ya but never we interacted before😃
glad to know that you liked my writing.😊
will hope that you will like my OS's further too...

Originally posted by: shilu999_balani

wonderful ana... just finished both the parts... you literally transported us to their world... very breathtaking account of their love and love making...no it was not vulgur althou a little more explicit than usual...but written in a very lucid and vivid way... kept us engrossed till the very last word... really very good...waiting for your further narration...

thanku so much poonam for liking my effort
so glad you could relate to it...😃
i will write now after a lil gap, a week one as have another fic to update in between
thanku for your support in this forum...😳

such a beautiful OS i LOved it thoroughly finally u tght of creatin sushaan...,pata hai u olwys update sushaan ff earlier bt nwdays i c more ff of ridheema...nd armaan

neway it ws nyc readin ur OS...loved ol prts...
especially suhana nd ishaan 's scooty drive...awww hw dey felt each odr @ dt tym it ws awesum 😃

i ws able to c suhana in blue net saree nd ishaan in white sleeves clothes with cot/...i mean while i ws readin i could gt very clear image...so i very well enjoyed it...

Omg seems lyk suhana ws waiting 4 dt moment 😉in d beach😍i ws in deir dreamland..
last ws even superb ishaan wearin ring...

i jst loved it sooo muchhh muahhh ..*hugs*🤗

😊jst nw only i read dt sec prt

Originally posted by: sakshisin

such a beautiful OS i LOved it thoroughly finally u tght of creatin sushaan...,pata hai u olwys update sushaan ff earlier bt nwdays i c more ff of ridheema...nd armaan

neway it ws nyc readin ur OS...loved ol prts...
especially suhana nd ishaan 's scooty drive...awww hw dey felt each odr @ dt tym it ws awesum 😃

i ws able to c suhana in blue net saree nd ishaan in white sleeves clothes with cot/...i mean while i ws readin i could gt very clear image...so i very well enjoyed it...

Omg seems lyk suhana ws waiting 4 dt moment 😉in d beach😍i ws in deir dreamland..
last ws even superb ishaan wearin ring...

i jst loved it sooo muchhh muahhh ..*hugs*🤗

hey sakhshi
thanku so so much for the appreciative comments dear🤗
no dear, this is the first time i m writing on Sushaan...and so happy that you guys liked it😛
hehe, i thought now lets actually get suhana a scooty and promote Ishaan to a bike after having his khatara scooter😆😉 but that too had lovely memories on it😍
so happy to know that you feel connected with the story and could imagine that scene😉
yup, after two year courtship, atleast she was expecting a proposal now...and Ishaan had to take an initiative after all, WO LARKA HAI, USAY KARNA CHAHIYE NA...😆😉
😉

Originally posted by: sakshisin

😊jst nw only i read dt sec prt

i loved it thoroughly ...hvent felt so vulgaR...quite sensuous tough
aftrol aftr marriage yesehi to karthe hoi😳😛

and anna i m lovin ur ffs a lottt a ton...i ask u to continue with dis Os ,,,,,PLZZZ DEARRR...LOVING IT..MUAHHH...AGAIN

I read dis aftr watching sgp ...i mean d 2nd prt, it hs brgt a smile in my face as well jst like vips😃
u rock anna...i m enjoyin ur ff...👍🏼

i m thinkin abt fillin my 7.30 pm (30mts)in readin ff's///as i jst dont wana remember abt sgp..:)(😔

u knw i said my pals as well to read ur awesum OS..😊

thanku once again dear...
and thnanku for giving your views on content yara...was highly worried about it while writing...
Oye, abhi pehli ko cont kia, abh ainoo v cont karoon gi tau ye tau g fic he ban jaye gii...Next time, next story...😳😃 different experience karo na
either they would be married or fall in love only these are the two possibilities as i hate to write that villain kind of stories much
Oh, don't worry...you can catch the old epi's on YT...me too so gonna miss SGP...😕
and thanku once again for recommending my OS's thinking they are worth...its an honor dear
Hope you will enjoy further on too...

take care
ana😳

Originally posted by: cool_SK

thanku once again dear...
and thnanku for giving your views on content yara...was highly worried about it while writing...
Oye, abhi pehli ko cont kia, abh ainoo v cont karoon gi tau ye tau g fic he ban jaye gii...Next time, next story...😳😃 different experience karo na
either they would be married or fall in love only these are the two possibilities as i hate to write that villain kind of stories much
Oh, don't worry...you can catch the old epi's on YT...me too so gonna miss SGP...😕
and thanku once again for recommending my OS's thinking they are worth...its an honor dear
Hope you will enjoy further on too...

take care
ana😳



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yea yea i m waiting desperately nd yea i usually catch old sgp epis in utube par i m interested in reading new stories,new trks...so i m really lukin 4wd to ur OS...u dont hw much i m in love with it..
day by day i m becomin addicted to OS NF FFS created by others...
plzzz update it faster dear ..cn i c it tody ya 2mrw with nxt prt plzzz of sushannn

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