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Posted: 13 years ago
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^so flashbacks are coming yay more Ayaan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys firstly wishing everyone a very merry christmas!

back after sooo long to update

hope u guys like it


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"thanks, coffee bohat achi thi," Suhana said leading Ayaan into her flat

"no problem, waise aaj toh record baan gaya ke tumne chup chap coffee pe li, remember Delhi mein tum perfect coffee ke chakar mein do-teen cup toh aise hi phekh deti thi," Ayaan said before adding,"Suhana tum sure ho Ishaan ko koi problem nahin hoga mere dinner pe yun achanak aane se?" ayaan carried Suhana's shopping bags into her kitchen.

"of course not, woh possessive type nahin hai, anyways tum bolo tumhe kya khana hai, mein maid ko bol dungi woh bana degi," Suhana said.

"tumhara favourite rajma chawal chale ga," Ayaan replied remembering how much Suhana loved that dish.

"wow tumhe yaad hai,"Suhana smiled saying,"I also remember tumhari favourite dish...its still paneer kofta na?"

"yes" Ayaan replied. He was happy that even after all this time Suhana had atleast remembered his likes.

"Madhuri! Madhuri!" Suhana called but there wasn't a reply,"God ye ab kahan chali gayi," Suhana went to look for Madhuri when she found a note on the dining table reading:

"Memsaab mere ko kuch
urgent kaam ah gaya
isliye mein ghar ja rahi hai.
Aaj aap manage karlo

Madhuri"

"OMG how dare she?" Suhana said shocked

"Kya hua?" Ayaan asked

"Madhuri apne ghar chali gayi..ab khana kaun banaye ga?" Suhana said looking sad

"Is mein upset hone wali kaun si baat hai, mein bana dunga," Ayaan said.

"no no tum nahi bana sakte, tum guest ho aur badi maa kehti hai 'athithi devo bhava' or something like that meaning ke yane ke guest God jaise ho, isliye tum nahin bana sakte...ab hotel se take away mangana padhega..." Suhana said while Ayaan smiled gazing at her adorably cute pout.

"Suhana it's ok, mujhe chef samaj ke khana bana ne ke paise de dena, mein itna bhi bura khana nahin bana ta, promise," Ayaan said convincing Suhana.

"Ok," Suhana agreed,"chalo kitchen mein, I just hope tumhara paneer kofta aur roti mere paneer kofta aur roti se better ho,"

"Waise Suhana, ye Badi Maa kaun hai," Ayaan asked rememberingthe way Suhana spoke 'Badi Maa' it sounded like she was addressing her own mother.

"Badi Maa is Ishaan ki badi maa aur mere liye mom ki tarah hai, she's such a lovely person, actually meri poori family itni amazing hai, tumhe unse milna chahiye," Suhana said, her face fell. Ayaan sensed that she missed them, these people must be amazing for (a) they handled Suhana and her tantrums well and (b) for bringing about such changes in Suhana, they filled the one gap in her life that her Dad's money and Ayaan's friendship couldn't, which was of a family

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"Suhana apne haath apne pockets mein dal lo warna jal jayenge." Ayaan said taking Suhana's hands and pinning them to her sides. She had twice nearly burnt her hands while trying to 'help' Ayaan making roti.

"Ayaan, tum abhi bhi woh perfume laga te ho jo mujhe itna pasand hai?" Suhana asked. The proximity between them has allowed Suhana to catch a wiff of the perfume she had once gifted Ayaan 4 years ago and Ayaan had since used only that brand of perfume.

Ayaan blushed a little before adding,"woh mujhe bhi acha lagta hai," before turning things back to a lighter note by saying,"par agar tum apne brand ka Suhana Bajpai, SB ka perfume launch karogi toh shayad mein woh bhi kharid lunga," Ayaan grinned. He had done perfume shopping with Suhana once when she had tried almost every perfume in the shop but didnt like any and therefore shouted at the manager of the store for stocking these perfumes and declared that she would launch her own fragrance soon. Obviously that plan hadn't yet materialized.

"Mera mazak udha ne mein bohat maza ah raha hai?" Suhana asked smiling a little. Just then the doorbell rang.

"It must be Ishaan," Suhana said heading to open the door.

Ayaan went into his own world seeing a dream he had pictured so long ago of one day returning tired from work to find Suhana opening the door and greeting him with her signature million dollar smile...

The smell of burnt roti bough Ayaan back to reality. Thinking like this about Suhana isn't right he thought, she's married now, very happily married.

"Suhana ye Mr Bijlani kya bakwaas kar rahe hai ke tumhara kisi ke saath affair chal raha hai, koi handsome ladka humare flat mein tumhare saath aaya tha," Ishaan said loosening his tie and handing his briefcase to Suhana. One of these days he was going to beat up Mr Bijlani.

"woh handsome ladka mein hoon," Ayaan said coming into the hall wearing Suhana's apron and sporting some atta on his cheek.

Ishaan looked at Suhana questioning as she continued smiling looking at Ayaan. Ishaan cleared his throat.

"oh Ishaan this is Ayaan , mere 6th grade ka friend jiske saath mein college jati thi, actually aaj mujhe market mein mila tha toh meine usko dinner pe invite kiya tha par will you believe, uss Madhuri ki bachi ne day off le liya, mujhe inform kiye bina, ye toh acha hai ki ayaan ko cook karna ata hai warna mujhe cook karna padhta," Suhana said as Ishaan shuddered at the thought of Suhana's food.

"waise dinner tayar hai," Ayaan declared, "oh by the way Suhana ne intro de toh diya hai but I'm Ayaan," Ayaan said holding out his hand for Ishaan to shake but Ishaan didn't.

"don't mind but mujhe apne haath pe atta nahin lagana hai," Ishaan said pointing out the atta on Ayaan's hands.

"oh sorry," Ayaan said.

"tum done fresh ho jao aur mein khana serve karti hoon," Suhana said

"Suhana are...are you sure," Ayaan asked looking uncertain

"haha bohat acha joke tha," Suhana said sarcastically,"now shut up and get ready for dinner...bathroom udhar hai...tumhare cheek pe atta hai wash it off"

Ayaan headed into the bathroom and as he washed off the atta he thought about Ishaan. He couldn't quite believe this was Suhana's Ishaan, he was so opposite to Sid and yet Suhana loved him so much. In college Suhana used to always say she will marry a rich, handsome guy who earns more than she spends and who will treat her like a princess, yet Ishaan hardly had all these qualities but Suhana was so happy with him. What does he have that I don't Ayaan thought but immediately shook his head as though trying to shake out the thought, Suhana is married Ayaan thought, she's not mine anymore.

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next part will have Suhana's college flashbacks


hop u guys liked this part

plz do comment.critisize

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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
WOW..what a surprise on a lovely Christmas morning..
Merry Christmas to you too Shona *hugz*

HarShIni update yet again...maza aa gaya..u always tempt me to imagine their convo..just love the way u write its so simple yet so magical.
aww poor Ayaan khud hi khana banata hai...aur bhi bada wala awww for Suhana who tried helping him but burnt her hands twice!
Loved how Ayaan kept thinking that no..Suhana is married now.Badi Maa part was ADORABLE!!

Keep Rocking...
waiting for the nxt part,jaldi updte karna
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*rubs eyes twice* huh Shona updated???😲 it's a Christmas miracle

JK wow this is a wonderful Christmas present😳 I will read it later and then comment bc right now I have to attend to guests😳


PS- I love how you're advertising my stuff😆😆😳😳😳
Edited by Tani91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tani91

*rubs eyes twice* huh Shona updated???😲 it's a Christmas miracle lol its a small xmas present...whether anyone else reads it or not but i am going to go through with this FF for u n Vipu coz im realli enjoying it..usually i update within a few days but was realli busy in the last month so cudnt update

JK wow this is a wonderful Christmas present😳 I will read it later and then comment bc right now I have to attend to guests😳 sure read in ur own time


PS- I love how you're advertising my stuff😳 lol not my fault u make such amazing stuff of all the ppl i love haha btw i shud get commission for this naa?😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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is that enough commission😛 no but thanks...I'm glad you like the stuff mostly because we ship the same people🤣


BTW I read it and once again I loved how you've captured Suhana as her self (not like the CVs with her stupidness) but her innocence remained intact. Once again I could almost imagine a scene like this and I loved how you kept it subtle with the perfume😳 that was a original and unique touch😳

and I ROFLed at Ayan and Ishan meeting with the atta🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tani91

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is that enough commission😛 no but thanks...I'm glad you like the stuff mostly because we ship the same people🤣 haha yes thats enuf commission! yup SGP,TaAnu,HarshIni,TVD,OUAT...lol long list


BTW I read it and once again I loved how you've captured Suhana as her self (not like the CVs with her stupidness) but her innocence remained intact. glad u say that coz i do try to do that...keep the story n characters similar to how they are in the show...just add Ayaan to it...
Once again I could almost imagine a scene like this and I loved how you kept it subtle with the perfume😳 that was a original and unique touch😳 thx i dont wanna go overboard with filmy Suhana-Ayaan scenes...trying to keep it simple n pure...Suhana is happily married to Ishaan and Ayaan's intentions aren't bad...

and I ROFLed at Ayan and Ishan meeting with the atta🤣 haha i wanted their first meeting to be funny...different from the usually meeting the guest type of intro...coming home n seeing a guest cooking with Suhana was a lil zara hatke...


Thank u di for reading n commenting
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will let u know wen i update next...hopefully within a couple of days n this time there will be flashbacks

Edited by shona. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys
Back agen wid Part 4
Hope u guys like it

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"so Ayaan tum aur Suhana college mein saath teh," Ishaan asked. The trio was at the dinning table having dinner.

"yeah, actually humara ek group tha; mein, Suhana, Sudhi, Sullie aur..." Ayaan broke off

"aur Sid," Suhana finished off,"hum bohat masti karte teh and you know Ayaan ne college mein mere adhe assignments complete kiye hai,"

"aur return mein mujhe jo chahiye tha woh milta tha, Suhana ki taliya," Ayaan said.

"kya matlab?" Ishaan asked.

"woh actually Ayaan singer ban na chahta tha and woh jab bhi gata tha toh hum sab clap karte aur iss ko cheer karte," Suhana said recalling her college days

"actually Suhana sabse badhi critic thi, jo music usse pasand tha woh he mujhe baaja ne ka allowed tha...ek baar isne mera guitar bhi break kar diya tha gusse mein,"

"oh yah I remember actually hua ye ke..." said Suhana and she began narrating the incident to Ishaan

***FLASHBACK***

Ayaan was sitting on the bean bag playing his latest composition while Suhana stormed into his room

"kya hua, Suhana tum itni upset kyun ho?" he asked his tone full of worry. Suhana looked very angry because she was upset about something Ayaan noted.

"mera aur Sid ka break up hogaya," Suhana announced fuming. She took hold of a vase and smashed it. Ayaan didn't even flinch though it was his favourite vase.

Ayaan got up and went up to her, "Suhana iss baar kya hua?" Ayaan asked softly

"you know he's such an idiot, jis company ne usko ad offer kiya hai woh bohat buri hai, woh apne workers ko time pe pay bhi nahin karti aur bad working conditions mein kaam karati hai. Meine Sid ko bola ki woh offer rejected kar de but he didn't listen to me and accepted the offer and he called me a spoilt rich brat so meine uske saath break up kar liya," Suhana explained

"tut tut tut uski ye himat ki woh Suhana Bajpai ko spoilt rick brat bole," Ayaan said sarcastically. He was annoyed at Sid too for not valuing Suhana and her opinions.

"IT'S NOT A JOKE DAMN IT!" Suhana shouted and she smashed another vase and scattered the flowers in it.

"CALM DOWN SUHANA!" Ayaan shouted over her. This was serious he thought, she was seriously upset.

"Suhana agar woh tumhare vicharon ko value nahin karta toh permenantly chodh doh usse,"

"what is vicharon?" Suhana asked annoyed

"thoughts, opinions," Ayaan said, "Suhana, ek baar mein finish kardo, ye kya tum dono ne laga rakha hai every 2 weeks ladai aur jagda choti choti baaton pe," Ayaan said, he was losing his cool as well at Sid for hurt Suhana and at Suhana for not seeing how much more he loved her than Sid

"what is wrong with you Ayaan, tum mujhe comfort karne ke baje kyun suna rahe ho?" said Suhana feeling more upset. Ayaan was the one person other than her dad who was a source of comfort for her

"Suhana tum kyun nahin samaj rahi ho ke mere paas tumhare aur Sid ki fights solve karne ki ilava bhi aur kaam hai," Ayaan replied. Why wasn't Suhana still ready to say she will leave Sid permenantly

"kya...kya important hai...tumhara music, ye guitar," said Suhana picking up Ayaan's guitar,"ye tumhare liye Suhana se bhi important hai?" asked Suhana

"ye mere liye tumhari aur Sid ki arguments solve karne se ziyada important hai," said Ayaan angrily. How could Suhana love Sid to the point of being oblivious to other people.

"fine" said Suhana and she flung the guitar across the room. It smashed into the wall and broke, "bajayo apna guitar aur gao apna gana," and with that she stormed out leaving Ayaan shell-shocked.

***FLASHBACK***

"Ayaan pehli baar mujhe se itna upset tha," Suhana finished. Typical Suhana Bajapai thought Ishaan remembering such incidents from the early days of his marriage

"but Suhana ne first time mujhe mana ne ki khoshish bhi ki thi," Ayaan chuckled at the memory,"yaad hai Suhana," he asked

"of course" Suhana said


Hope you guys liked it
next update will have Suhana's first sort of apology from Suhana

please do comment/critisize



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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok...saw this and reserved my spot..sorry cant reply right now as I'm typing on my iPad...my laptop got a virus so was trying to fix it and right now my iPad is about to like die due to low battery...so once i get home I will read it and then comment
Edited by Tani91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fantastic update. Thanks for the pm. Please pm me when you update new stories. Its a humble request.

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