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Sheema

@infinity00

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

I am having so much fun, Laxmi you are a very very sweet person, I feel like I am with my old college and school friends who just mess around and have great laugh , Thankyou!
A new taaza taaza lunch time kalaam

Oh Suhana, bholu ki bholi
Tu hawaldar ko kiya na booli!

Shukar kar Khair Mana
hawaldar tha thoda khiska hua
jo woh hota asli wala
drawing room ki ( drawing room is the nick name of interogation room)
tum dono ko sair karata.

Oh Suhana Bholu ki Bholi
Tu samajhti khud ko Robin Hood ki Pooti( grand daughter)

Thanay Ki safai say tujh ko kiya hai bhai
Tu wahan kiya apnay honey moon pai aai.
Parta jo us mai ka haath tujhay
Yaad aajata tujhauy apni naani ka bhai.

Shwetha where are you?? waiting for your master peice.

And one more thing I want to say thanks to all Indians who were at the CWG yesterday for giving a very warm welcome to my country men and women ( Pakistan) thank you India , thank you very much, and it was a fab job , baknay do goron ko Delhi did an excellent job.

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Shwetha

@Shwets1502

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

ok..here i somthing from me...iam writing as u people canot hit me..😆😆here it goes..honestly i havent thought abt anything.iam just trying somthing now...😊

this is a ground for great writers(laxmi di,sheema di and himanshu👏👏)..

but chipping in are some good fighters(ya thats me😉)..

the writers write many things out of nothing..😃

the fighters write nothing but nothing..😆

its still being complemented...nice of u all...😊

u r the best writers..hats off to u all...😃😆

i know u wud me...if i was near u all...bt let me tel u..u need fun in between serious poems and poets...and i think iam filling tat post..😆

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Sheema

@infinity00

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Shwetha Tum nai jo Likha
Paarh kar Maza Aya Maza Aya
Thodi Hansi Thoda Guzza Aya
Hum Tumhai Marai gain Kyon
Tum nay jo likha woh samajh To aya!!!!!
Aur Sheema nai jo Likha
Us ko khud kya khak samajh aya.( khak means dirt)

Good one, Shewts, keep them coming, I think people are going to think that we are gone crazy, actually since Friday nothing to say as waiting for today,s episode, to aur kiya kartai, bus kuch idhar kuch udhar likh mara.
I wish more people would come to this forum.

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Himanshu Sinha

@Sinha18

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Shwets1502
ok..here i somthing from me...iam writing as u people canot hit me..😆😆here it goes..honestly i havent thought abt anything.iam just trying somthing now...😊

this is a ground for great writers(laxmi di,sheema di and himanshu👏👏)..

but chipping in are some good fighters(ya thats me😉)..

the writers write many things out of nothing..😃

the fighters write nothing but nothing..😆

its still being complemented...nice of u all...😊

u r the best writers..hats off to u all...😃😆

i know u wud me...if i was near u all...bt let me tel u..u need fun in between serious poems and poets...and i think iam filling tat post..😆

Ghazb dha diya, kal pehli ball pe four aur aaj to six hi maar diya👏👏

Ye jo aajkal ap itni zabardast form mein lag rahi hai,
hame hamari shayari ki dukaan khatre mein lag rahi hai.😭😭
chupi hui roshnai(Talent) se nikal ke ab to aap aise aise kalme likh rahi hai ,
ki hame sakshaat english poet john milton ki behan lag rahi hai😊😊
aap ke is naye avtaar se mehfil mein ye jo nayi bahaar aayi hai,
uspe hum ab dil-o-jaan se sajde karte hai,
khush raho,ahle watan, ab hum to safar karte hai

Edited by Sinha18 - 14 years ago

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Shwetha

@Shwets1502

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

ya sheema di..had to wai two days for the next episode and for the discussion and yeah...the forum goes reeeaaallllyyyy quiet in the weekends...bt iam always here cos iam always OL for my college works so just slip in every hr or so to see any posts.....and yep we indeed have gone crazy..and may be more crazier after watchin todys episode..

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Shwetha

@Shwets1502

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

thank a lo himanshu..john milton's sister....thats a shock and thank for the complement..means a lot...

will try harder to wrte something good..😊

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Laxmi...............👏..👏..👏..👏..👏..👏..👏..👏 What a creativity..!! Rocking..stuff ❤️

Fab poem..n excellent emotis....

Moi gonna fry some lines too 😳

Jab guzre sadko se...Suhana Bajpai.....

Blood pressure ..logon ka ho jai ..hi-fi...

Mud kar jo dekh le kisi ko ek baar....

Bhool jaye woh ....sara sansaar....

Aur aise hi achanak ek...din ....kuch kahe ya sune bin

Thok diya ...ek bholu ka khatara... aur jate jate..kar gai apni smile BEAM 😳

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anwesha rath

@Anurulz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

arre yahan to mushaira lag gaya hai!!great posts by everyone..my like button for sum reason refuses to accept my pressing so verbally telling tht i loved each and every post here...laxmi aapke to kya kehne...fantastic writing..😃

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Himanshu Sinha

@Sinha18

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

@Armu4eva: Kya likha hai ek dum Laxmi ji ke andaz mein, thnx for such gr8 and simple lines
@ Anu Rulz: Swagat hai swagat hai

Naye Shaiyoro ka is mushaire mein hum laxmi ji ke shagird log swagat karte hai aur tanu ji ne to aagaz bhi kar diya

Naye kalmon se mehfil sajegi ab, hamare jaane ki bas thodi si der hain,
nayi roshnai se sama mehke ab, ki hum chalte hain samay ki pukar hai,
Sukhe hue darakhto ko ab mehekti hui taazi hawa ki darkarar hai.

WELCOME GUYZ 👏👏

Thanx to Laxmi ji for such a gr8 post where everyone is taking part and creating a environment full of encouragement , thnx to Sheema ji for poetry of such a high level and to shwetha for inserting the funny traits and converting the heavy atmosphere of serious poems into a light and relaxing one with her funny and skilled rhymes poems, no wonder she is really our John Milton on this forum.

WIth Regards
Himanshu SInha

Edited by Sinha18 - 14 years ago

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Sheema

@infinity00

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Hai Allah himanshu ji aap to sakht sharminda kar rahay hain. Its the vibes we are getting from each other which is bringing the inner awaz outside!!!
I have got some thing which I thought while driving, so literary chaltai chaltai arz kiya hai

Bholay say jo bholo ki bholi say bhool hui
Bholo ki kismat ko bhooli kabool hui.

Sid ka shukar ada kar bhai
jis nay Suhana say phelay jaan chudai
Gussai main Suhana nay bholo say
shaadi kay liyee gardun( neck) hilai

EIk bhool jissay kheti thi woh bechari
kehti thi kay kiya kismat hai hamari
ho jab woh sub ko hi payari
lagi us ko bhi dunya ab kitni nayari

Aur aakhir main arz

Yeh din bhi zindagi main meray yaar aya
Ishaan merai liyee eik car laya
baich dala us nay apni khatara
hai Ishaan kitna hai payara!!!!

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