Main hoon Suhana...!

Hi mundas----. And girlies-----

This is me Suhana---. A powerpacked dame--.

Just doing timepass as a rhyming game

Mat samjho tum mujhe ek Don se kum--

Kyunki mujh me bhi hai lots of dum--

Though maine pehle ki galthi

Ek stupid Sid ke pyar mein padke😡

Thank god main mili iss bholu se

Uski scooter ko zor se tokkh ke---..

Phir shuru hui meri understanding

Har ek member se iss parivaar ke--

Nahi tey yeh show-off or demanding

Unlike members every sasural ke---

Jo chupathi thi apne gum sansaar se

Baanti humne jo muskurahat toh

Paaya darpan mein apne maa ko---

Phir mili mujhe Radha bua----😛

Jo dikh rahi thi bebas- lacchar---😳

Deepak ko tukrakar gum mein ro rahi hai baar- baar😭

Samjane par bhi nahin samaj payi--

yun mamta chupa rahi hai woh---

After all main janti hoon life hai mushkil

deepak ko jeena uske maa bin--

Shahjahan-Mumtaz ke kisse te sune--

Ab unhe paya iss sansaar mein---😍

Bholu ke dada-dadi hai woh--😉

Bade pyare-mathwaale hai joh---

Phir bhool ki ek maine--

Rajni-Disha didi ko chod aayi hotel mein😭😭

Bholu ke samjhane pe samjhi---

Pyar miltha hai bahut mushkil se---.

Papa-mumma ki kya kehne----

Kabhi mom rothi toh unhe papa manathe--

Meeti toh hai pyari si,--

Maine banayi usse ek pari si,--

Man ki jo baath hum kehthe nahin,

Who keh dethi bina darre sankoch ke

Inder-Elesh bhaiya hai woh,--

Jo roye toh hasathe hai,-

Rutun toh manathe hai,

In all behen mujhe samajthe hai,

Meena toh OMG!--

Ab bhi nahi samjhi coffee banana,--

Phone par phone kare dolly didi ko,

Tips maange usse mujhe patane,--😕

Ab meri umeed hai jaagi---

Apni shaadi ki life se---😳

Paaya hai itna pyaar--❤️

Jo maine apne sasural se--

Bahut kuch dekhna hai aage--

Bahut kuch naya hai seekhna---

Ho jo saath ek parivaar ka---

Phir kahe ki fikhar karna--

Himmat se karoongi saamna--

Life ki har ek musibath ka---🥳

Himmat jo na jhuta payi toh--

Help loongi iss bholu ----ka

Kiya hai sign jo marraige certificate pe ---

and took Poori 3 gante for saath phere

Ab jhelna hoga all nakhras of mine--

For 7 janams of mere----..!

laxmi di..............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏

superb!!!!!!!!i totally enjoyed reading it...it was really suhana who was saying...wonderfully done..all characters...and thanks u sooo much..it was in simple hindi that i too can understand...do writing more...may be for all the characters...😆

once again fantastic writing laxmi di...👏

thank u shwetha.... yet to do up with the smileys.... work in progress......😆

Originally posted by: nikki18

very well written👏👏..suerpb👍🏼....luvd it!!

Laxmi jii, zabardast writing, after shounak you are the next who impressed and inspired with your great writing skills👏👏. Aajkal aap zabardast form mein lag rahi hai, jo bhi shot khel rehi hai ose maidaan ke bahar bhej rahi hai😆 I wish shounak will mail your articles to Zama Habib, i m sure you will become the creative head of SGP😃, not only an excellent writer, also a very good poet as seem from above wonderful lines, God may give you a chance and his blessings to implement your skills as you are a born writer and destined to become a writer reminding me the writings of great Premchand, dinkar ji, bimal mitra etc. in the writings of these person i feel they create scenes in their writings whether funny or emotional and always concluded in all good aspects of writing, you also create scenes with your writings👏👏, aap ke articles padhne ke baad unke content pe comments likhne se pehle apki writing ko applause dena hi padta hai, just like bowing of our head while seeing the idol of our god, similarly your writing is just like a ideal idol and its contents are the soul pure in every meaning and aspects.

few lines from my side:

Barkarar rahe andaz-e-bayan yu hi, sunte rehenge jab talak ye saanse shesh hai,
Ruk gaya hai waqt bhi ab , par aap ne ruke, aapka kalma kuch vishesh hai
aapne jo likha to mehfil mein achanak rangat si ho gayi,
yun langa hai jaise thehre shant paani mein ek harkat si ho gayi.

As far as the post is concerned, i m very happy to see the complete poetic sketch of gr8 suhana so far and it depicts the change in her character and highlights of the show so far just in few lines.

Lafzoon kay kiya teer chalay
Ghayal kar gai andaaz terai nayaray.

Dai De Zuban-e- Bayan Suhana ko tu nay
Jo Na Janay alfaaz hain kiya ye Suhanay

Rooz hi Intezaar Rehta hai tumharay kalaam ka
Tumhai rehta hai pata kiya dil mai hai hamaray.

Aur Akhir Mai Aarz Kiya Hai

Woh Jo kehtai hai kai hum likh nahi Saktay
parh liya karai Laxmi kai Khayal Ko
Jo Mooti bikhair daiti hai har taraf
Thodai say main nay bhi chuun liay hain.

Beautiful work Laxmi, assi saday bohat waday fan hain ji.

So, this forum is active even on Sunday, applauded👏👏

Originally posted by: Sinha18

Laxmi jii, zabardast writing, after shounak you are the next who impressed and inspired with your great writing skills👏👏. Aajkal aap zabardast form mein lag rahi hai, jo bhi shot khel rehi hai ose maidaan ke bahar bhej rahi hai😆 I wish shounak will mail your articles to Zama Habib, i m sure you will become the creative head of SGP😃, not only an excellent writer, also a very good poet as seem from above wonderful lines, God may give you a chance and his blessings to implement your skills as you are a born writer and destined to become a writer reminding me the writings of great Premchand, dinkar ji, bimal mitra etc. in the writings of these person i feel they create scenes in their writings whether funny or emotional and always concluded in all good aspects of writing, you also create scenes with your writings👏👏, aap ke articles padhne ke baad unke content pe comments likhne se pehle apki writing ko applause dena hi padta hai, just like bowing of our head while seeing the idol of our god, similarly your writing is just like a ideal idol and its contents are the soul pure in every meaning and aspects.

few lines from my side:

Barkarar rahe andaz-e-bayan yu hi, sunte rehenge jab talak ye saanse shesh hai,
Ruk gaya hai waqt bhi ab par ,aap ne ruke, aapka kalma kuch vishesh hai
apne jo likha to mehfil mein achanak rangat si ho gayi,
yu langa hai jaise thehre shant paani mein ek harkat si ho gayi.

As far as the post is concerned, i m very happy to see the complete poetic sketch of gr8 suhana so far and it depicts the change in her character so far just in few lines.

@laxmi: Ye smileys kaha se lati hai aap, plz hum bhai logo ko bhi to bata de bechare ghise pite smileys se hi kaam chala rahe hai😭😭
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