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Himanshu Sinha

@Sinha18

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: venture
Shwetha Tusi Great Ho
India ka Fate Ho
Hindi main kamzor Ho Chalta Hai
Par Angraizi main Bohat Taiz Ho

Lagai Raho isi Tarha Tum
Laxmi/Sheema/Himanshu ab Khair Manao
jab Phela shakar Aisa Hai to
Agai kiya dhamaka Karo Gi Tum.

SheW*Ha it was soo soo soo sweet and innocent kai I to just gone flat. I just went to fix my wardrobe and came back to see so many Shahkars( bolay to Master Peice) Himanshu was awsome too with such good grasp of words and emotions, with good humour too.
Laxmi eik mushaira, bolay to shair o shairi ka concert ho jai , you pick up a character and we all try to come up with something.

Kya baat kahi hai, maza aa gaya, sach mein ek mushaira ho jaye to likhane ki sab bhadas yahi nikalenge , shair o shairi ke to kya kehne, chaliye hum hi shuru karte hai- arz hai:

Situation1: Suhana rooth gayi hai aur usko manane ke liye ishaan bhai iss hadh tak chale gaye ki ab wo farmate hai:

Unhe manane mein hamara itna kharcha ho gaya,
ki hamari chodho,hamare baal baale pe bhi karza ho gaya,
aur ab humne udhaar bhi manga to charcha ho gaya. 😆😆

Situation2:ye tabki hai jab bechare ishaan ko suhana ke sid ke sath relationship ka dard jhelna pad raha tha, Arz hai

Meri taqdeer se meri kuch aisi takrar ho gayi hai,
ki unke intezaar mein umar se lambi raat ho gayi hai 😭😭

@Laxmiji aap he aisa kuch forum shuru kare jaisa @venture ji ne bola hai , aap hi kar sakti hai, hum to bas shagird hai.

Edited by Sinha18 - 14 years ago

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Shwetha

@Shwets1502

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

@himanshu..wonderful lines again...have to admit i read it thrice to get thecomplete meaning...kya karen...very weak in hindi..😉

so got the first situation perfectly...but the last one...just tell whether iam right...

iam having some fights/problems with my luck/fate..

and in waiting the nights have become longer than my age...😕😕😕

sorry if i killed your lines..😆😉

but this was my best try,..

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Himanshu Sinha

@Sinha18

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Shwets1502
@himanshu..wonderful lines again...have to admit i read it thrice to get thecomplete meaning...kya karen...very weak in hindi..😉

so got the first situation perfectly...but the last one...just tell whether iam right...

iam having some fights/problems with my luck/fate..

and in waiting the nights have become longer than my age...😕😕😕

sorry if i killed your lines..😆😉

but this was my best try,..

Absolutely Correct yaar, no you did not killed my lines infact you make a english clone of it bole to life de di yaar, @venture ka wo suggestion kafi acha laga, it can be the game of next week😊

Edited by Sinha18 - 14 years ago

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Shwetha

@Shwets1502

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

@himanshu...ya it will make a great game..u people can write in hindi and people sho dont know hini can translate in english...and vice versa..we def can have that...

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Sheema

@infinity00

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Sinha18 kiya khenai hai wah wah Mukarrar Mukarrar( bolay to repeat , repeat, I know so many SUHANAS here too!!!!)
Meri taqdeer se meri kuch aisi takrar ho gayi hai,
ki unke intezaar mein umar se lambi raat ho gayi hai .

Maar Daala Zalim kiya takrar hoi, phir lambi raat hoi, ab jawab sunye

Jo suna tha kai Sabr Ka phal Hota Hai Meetha
apnay case main to sadta hua hai lagtaa
Shukar Hai unko Kuch Aqal Aai
kay raqeeb ki kee unho nai khoob pitai
Chain Aya dil ko kuch zara meray
Par Chaar Din kai payar bina hi
taqdeer main hai hamari
lambi judai hai lambi judai

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Himanshu Sinha

@Sinha18

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

@ Sheema ji:

Zabardast 👏👏
Aisa kalma aur itne standard ke urdu shabd dekh ke halat kharab ho gayi,

hindi itni weak thi ki digest nahi hui to bathroom mein hi zindagi kharab ho gayi😆😆

aapne jo shandar likha hai, uska reply soch ke dete hai

Edited by Sinha18 - 14 years ago

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Himanshu Sinha

@Sinha18

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: venture
Sinha18 kiya khenai hai wah wah Mukarrar Mukarrar( bolay to repeat , repeat, I know so many SUHANAS here too!!!!)
Meri taqdeer se meri kuch aisi takrar ho gayi hai,
ki unke intezaar mein umar se lambi raat ho gayi hai .

Maar Daala Zalim kiya takrar hoi, phir lambi raat hoi, ab jawab sunye

Jo suna tha kai Sabr Ka phal Hota Hai Meetha
apnay case main to sadta hua hai lagtaa
Shukar Hai unko Kuch Aqal Aai
kay raqeeb ki kee unho nai khoob pitai
Chain Aya dil ko kuch zara meray
Par Chaar Din kai payar bina hi
taqdeer main hai hamari
lambi judai hai lambi judai

Unki judai mein thaki aankhen itni pareshaan ho gayi,
aankh lagi ki neend mein bhi unse mulakat ho gayi,

Unse milne ki hum itni fariyad kiya karte hai,
ki unki bewafai bhi shiddat se yaad kiya karte hai,
ab jo andaz-e-wafa unmein aayi hai, meri dhadkan kya,
meri rooh ke rom rom mein bhi bas wo hi samayi hai .

Edited by Sinha18 - 14 years ago

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Sheema

@infinity00

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Wah Wah Wah Aadab Aarz Hai

Halki Halki jo lehar chali hai payar ki
Aqal main zara dair sai aaige meray Yaar ki

Un ko chera Na parhna aya hai na aaiga
ishaan Bechara lagta hai Tanha hi reh jaiga
Suhana ki aqal zara moti hai bechari
Bhussa bhara hai badi hai ye lachaari

Reverse psychology azmaa kai dhekna pyaray
Ignore kar kay dekh un ko ,
kya sochata hai dularay
Mehboba hogi eik din Qadmo Mai Tumharay!!!!!!

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Himanshu Sinha

@Sinha18

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

@venture: Bhai waah, hamara bhi jawab suniye

Reverse physcology ki baat kya khub kahi hai sheema ji ne,
aur bhi aage socho toh kya khub kahi hai kisi ne,
ulfat pe to log fanna bhi hue hai tumhe to bas karna ha itna,
raah-e-ulfat pe gir gir ke bhi phir ek naye vishwas se hai uthna,
isliye ab bandh karo ye krandan(rona-dhona) hey rano ke nandan,
yaad rakho bas yehi ki shadi koi khel nahi, janmon ka hai ye bandhan.

Edited by Sinha18 - 14 years ago

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Shwetha

@Shwets1502

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

koi mere baare main socha??😕😉

alrite himanshu and sheema di..will be back W*H my comments tomr..as probably i will finish understanding only then...😉

and pl do oot translate..seriously...i will translate and ask whether its rite tomr...that will be my first step to be a poet(am soundng like a serious poet...or am i sounding wierd..😆)

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