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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arshicsji, great bytes and even more so your love and sense of loyalty towards the show as well as your admirers. Initially I was not much enthusiastic about the hackneyed idea of memory loss of the lead character. However I believed the concept has the capacity to develop into a substantial track and also a potential source of conflict between the two leads. But now it has been turned into an absolute farce. The amnesia track if handled reasonably would have explored another facet of samud characters and their relationship, provided poignant and emotional experience for the viewers and also extracted brilliant performances from the actors. Of late I liked only 2 episodes (full-on samud, just before the mishap). Both were executed sensibly with poignancy in some measure and romance in a large measure. Be it saras-kumud or saras-jw, both are able to achieve the crackling chemistry and charm.

Today I managed to catch the last 3 episodes to have an idea of how they go about this senseless storyline. Height of insensitivity, thoughtlessness and irresponsibility. On top of that, gumaan's act was an onslaught on the viewers' senses. In the original version she was just a selfish, conceited and manipulative woman. So the choice was apt and she too did justice to it to a reasonable extent. After her comeback she was resurrected as a gruesome killer with premeditation which is not her forte. With her crazy antics she made the act hideous. In order to develop the revenge plot kabir's character was concocted out of nowhere. Similarly now 'the dead' saraswathima comes alive but with a cliche twist. (As such the new saras has no remnants of his mother except on his name). This fabrication would demean the old version which primarily dealt with saras's deeply disturbing nightmares and the events that were relived with all the accompanying trauma.

In this new storyline the performances of the leads are sketchy. For the 1st time in the storytelling scene I could see only GR, no traces of saras. Also GR's portrayal of saras who is now said to be on a mission (kumud's recovery), is not at all intense and convincing, rather comes off as relaxed and zealous. Jen on the other hand is quite noncommittal. The actors with ambition have been trapped in this script for long which meanders without any vision and objective.

Here I would like to revisit my comment on jyo's post a couple of days ago. Instead of taking pains to recollect and rewrite I simply do the 'edit & paste'.

It is unfortunate that we are dealing with a bunch of skilled(!) dodgers in the name of writers who persistently evade their responsibility and commitment. The downfall of the show is purely due to the lack of intent more than anything else. The (un)creatives have thoroughly lost the plot and their direction. The laziness from each and every one could be seen on screen for quite some thing!! In a nutshell it's an opportunity wasted. They fulfilled our wish, we got what we asked for. Saras is back to life (wish they don't meddle with it again).

To concoct the new storyline they had three options before them. 1. the much awaited memory loss sequence which offered some solid scope for the future course of events in a fairly sensible manner inspite of it being a cliched route. Only with this storyline we can root for intense, emotional and romantic samud. 2. To restore saras to his sound health and proceed to deal with kumud's trauma and in the process explore samud relationship along with tracking down the next villain in line (gumaan?) and then perfectly ending the show with samud kushkabri and kabir shaadi. 3. The fake amnesia track which is a pointless exercise and the scope and potential is very much limited, almost negligible.

So the cvs have finally picked the 3rd option and it is now going on the expected lines. The worst part is that it will adversely affect the performance of the leads leading to mediocrity. They may even adopt the same hamhanded approach of the Mumbai track and bring everything to a close in a sudden and hurried way. Also because of this senseless and unconvincing concept viewers can not connect to samud emotionally and as a result samud scenes may not click with the audience.

In short, my thoughts :

1. I regard this as character butchery of saras.

2. Wish arshiji and you were writing for the show. It would be a fine combination of substance, subtlety, humour and creativity

This cut and paste thing is to reaffirm 2 points. i.e what I strongly feel is more than the creative bankruptcy it is the lack of intent on their part. Secondly if not for your posts the show would have been so much poorer. So sincerely wish you were writing for the show.

Want to add 2 more thoughts :

3. My request to cvs :- for the remaining days please retain only samud, dugba and danny in the show and oust the rest of the cast from the show.

4. Please confirm the show's closure. We can watch the rest of the tamaasha at peace.

Once again thank you for the daily update in your unique style.
Edited by lal04 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved Danny-Saras scene in the beginning. Danny being so open about his bhaiyya missing his bhabhi. And saras telling that he is going off limits. I want more of their scenes before the show ends if we can't get saras-kumud scenes. Those can be ghisa-pita n boring. But danny-saras scenes still have that freshness in them.
Saras's Ott acting was an eyesore. His 'mujhe kya pasand hai' and 'aisa lagta hai ki' were too much. But liked how the others got irritated. For once, it was good to see him at the receiving end.

There were some good lines like 'mein apne life ki chapters yaad karne ki koshish kar raha hu' etc.

Saras-kumud scene was way below par. The way the director showed Desais' expressions repeated in a sequence was horrible.

This episode was written ok but very poorly executed. But 1000 times better than seeing guman on screen. An assault on the senses and mind. Yesterday I said that the actor n the way the character was written was a result of SLB team's worst day at work. Nothing more.

I never wanted an amnesia track like most of the forum wasis who have been shocked at this twist. I feel this track is being trivialized by over-zealous saras's acting(not GR's. The problem is in writing here), poor execution and return of guman. Things are going loose. But I am ok with it on the whole. Saras is acting silly at times but never missed the big picture. I do not think Kumud is being taken for a ride.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

nice post !! arshisc... 🤗... loved it...
pata nahi kyun i thought of reading d post... lekin padhke maja aya...


Thank you dear, waise when the episodes are like this, the forum becomes even more entertaining with everyone's take on the episodes !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: happychappy


at least they didnt kill saras ... so far...

let's count our blessings...😊


Saras is the only blessing we can count. Everything else has been killed already !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: samudbest

Arshiji what a senseless episode. No story at all. CV's are lost case now. Even they don't know what they are showing. Hats off to Gautam that even in such a stupid writing, he is making the scenes watchable by his expressions. Kumud has nothing to do in this fake amnesia track but only to wait when saras will come and she will continue with her story of old samud days. But there is no chemistry between them while this story telling process. CV's have ruined all this. I really don't like Kumud's dressing style too. Why is she still following mumbai dressing style when she is in ratnanagri now? I think CV's are taking revenge from us that we spoiled there dream of killing saras. Is it not enough that now they are coming with another worst track of getting Saraswati back. Why they are making mockery of such an epic novel by Govardhanram Tripathi ji.


Well, first they removed all traces of kumud sundari and replaced her with Jennifer, now they are also replacing all traces of Saras and replacing him with Gautam.

The idea is to not have to bother with any continuity, logic, story, etc.

They are just killing time till the show ends
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pasumarthisa


I haven't watched but I too like saras's expressions and his family taking a dig at his Ott acting. As for kumud, I don't think anyone is having fun at her expense.

The rest I agree. Family members are like props, logic is sleeping, realistic approach flew in that taalaab and I never talk about guman. The actor n character is SLB team's worst day at work. And current ph is not even worth mentioning.

And return of Saraswati is creative stupidity at its best.


Santhi, you've coined the best term that describes our writers - creative stupidity. Before seeing all this, had someone used this term, I would've wondered what they meant.

But thanks to our ceevees , we have first hand experience of creative stupidity of the highest order.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: jyo_loveurlife

Hello di😃 Perfect bytes👏

Aaj episode me kuch hua kya??? Pata nahi!!😲😆
Kal hum dekhenge?? Pata nahi😆


Jyo, kya kabooter khana ban gaya hai hamare show ka
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiranpreethee

Arshiji you are perfectly right. Senseless acting. For once I could not understand Saras'dumb act. He is usually spot on but here everything is looking ott even for him. Don't tell me there will be a resurrection of Saraswati, that would be the ultimate crass track.


Absolutely Kiranji, it will be the lowest blow! Saraswati resurrection makes the whole story meaningless. All of Saras's pain and pathos, all the very basis of the story is thrown in the name of the so called creative license.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShanUlas

Pata nahi kyu mujhe lagta hai ki this is another kartaar Singh comedy act by saras laddoo

Is not family growing too big !!

Seems like now this show will go on meaninglessly like other non stop shows of SP ...may jantaa is liking saras in such comic role


Pardon me but now saras does look like a comedian trying to act serious !


Shana, I feel that just because the ceevees couldn't kill Saras, they have decided to kill off his character in a way that is worse.

Make him do these meaningless things, for no rhyme or reason.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KK84

SP and creatives are taking badla on us for making GR stay till the end! Geesa peeta deekha kar humein torture kar rahein hai!!


Oye, Kat I just said something similar in reply to Shana. This Saraswati alive wala idea will completely ruin the 0.1% credibility that was left.

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