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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Arshics


Saras khana kha lo

Mujhe bhookh nahi hai, he replied

Saras was again on the brink of the darkness that had one enveloped him

She again saw the same dread emanating from him - the fear of losing a loved one

She ached with him and wanted to comfort him, and couldn't see him broken like this

He would need all his strength in the coming few days

Kumud gently cupped his face and kissed his forehead

Saras, aise kaise chalega?

Tumne subah se kuch nahi khaya

Hum dhoondh lenge kabir ko

Main hoon na tumhare saath


Kumud, agar kabir ko kuch ho gaya toh?...

Saras's voice broke ... And he hugged her tight

And they stood there for a long long time,

As he felt her soft love enveloping him,

Saras felt calmer, he was not alone, his Kumud was with him

He looked at her beautiful face and smiled at her

Khana khane chalein? He asked her, his voice filled with love.

Kumud smiled back, and together they walked towards the dining room.



Arshi, maar daala, aapne...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: believerintruth


ikr ! sach main we need a refreshment for the cv's ! why not , we write instead of them for one day ? wait ... i just got some chamak in my brain ! ๐Ÿ˜† unki chutti ki chuttti , aaram ka aaram and next time jab lautenge unhe karna hoga humse bhi achha kaam ! ๐Ÿ˜†


Poor writer, some days I do feel bad for them, they have to write six episodes every week, it must be tough for them. I just wish they were a little more contentious about what they write
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Linda25

what kumud did in todays episode? and why in fact she was there? to show us that see me viewers whoever complain, i am here with your laddo saras.

i can not digest this kumud. what happened to her?? she even was silent when Guman said to saras that how you will control yourself if your bro even leave you. How come kumud can keep his mouth mum like a stranger??

Where kumud have been lost???


Pata nahi Linda, where and why she has been lost!

They have Jennifer Grover with them

She is awesome in emotional scenes

This was the time and place for an emotional scene

Why'd they write a scene for her?

Kuch samajh mein nahi aata
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: -R-R-R-

Superb bytes Arshi!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘
-Rahul


But lousy episode Rahul!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Arshics



Subu, it really was an absurd episode

And what you want to do with Kumud - do it! She has been reduced to standing around and doing nothing !

And it was a boring episode, and full of all Bakwas

I want to break coconut in kumud's head Di... ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: happychappy



Arshi, maar daala, aapne...๐Ÿ˜ณ


Maar toh cvs ne dala !

Happy, hum to bas bhoot ban ke yahan bhatak rahe hain!

Pleeeze iss show ko khatam karo na
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: shubh-aarambh

I want to break coconut in kumud's head Di... ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿ˜†


Break poore 11 coconuts subu, shubh hota hai!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
There is no excuse for this poor writing evryday. If and only writing is their job, why they can't write six episodes in a week. We all here have other works still we can manage to write something. ๐Ÿ˜† but whats wrong with CV's. And this kumud character i want to slap her and drag her out to hang her on tree for not behaving like wifey. Pramad time she was perfect wife. ๐Ÿ˜† what was that conference meeting of all dumbo's excluding saras. ๐Ÿ˜‰ each one deserved tape on their mouth for speakin crap. How can CV's come up with such things...?? Again same thing coming in my head. They are inspired from cowdung.

Loved your bytes as usual.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Kusum04

There is no excuse for this poor writing evryday. If and only writing is their job, why they can't write six episodes in a week. We all here have other works still we can manage to write something. ๐Ÿ˜† but whats wrong with CV's. And this kumud character i want to slap her and drag her out to hang her on tree for not behaving like wifey. Pramad time she was perfect wife. ๐Ÿ˜† what was that conference meeting of all dumbo's excluding saras. ๐Ÿ˜‰ each one deserved tape on their mouth for speakin crap. How can CV's come up with such things...?? Again same thing coming in my head. They are inspired from cowdung.

Loved your bytes as usual.


Kusum, I agree, it's their job, and they better do it well

This is below average writing, real pits!

No dimaag or dil put into their work

Haila kya kar diya in hone iss show ka haal
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Arshics



Break poore 11 coconuts subu, shubh hota hai!

Jaise aapki aangya ๐Ÿ˜†

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