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Posted: 11 years ago
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Saras khana kha lo

Mujhe bhookh nahi hai, he replied

Saras was again on the brink of the darkness that had one enveloped him

She again saw the same dread emanating from him - the fear of losing a loved one

She ached with him and wanted to comfort him, and couldn't see him broken like this

He would need all his strength in the coming few days

Kumud gently cupped his face and kissed his forehead

Saras, aise kaise chalega?

Tumne subah se kuch nahi khaya

Hum dhoondh lenge kabir ko

Main hoon na tumhare saath


Kumud, agar kabir ko kuch ho gaya toh?...

Saras's voice broke ... And he hugged her tight

And they stood there for a long long time,

As he felt her soft love enveloping him,

Saras felt calmer, he was not alone, his Kumud was with him

He looked at her beautiful face and smiled at her

Khana khane chalein? He asked her, his voice filled with love.

Kumud smiled back, and together they walked towards the dining room.


Yeh sab padh ke khush mat ho

Aisa kuch nahi hua


Saras ne kaha mujhe bhookh nahi hai

Aur Kumud chali gayi ...



So bhaiyon aur behnon

Yeh hai honeymoon ki reality

Yeh romance nahi

Yeh hai kabir bachao mission

Aur kabir bechara

Itna pyaara bachcha


Aur yeh writers kabir ke saare paap bhool gaye

Woh hero hai

Usne kitni help ki sabki

Aur Dukhba for the 1254th time maroed her favorite dialogue of Saraswati ke Sanskar

This time for kabir but

Sarawati ka beta hai,

Pyaar dena Janta hai

Arre Mai,

Khoon karna jaanta hai

Adultery karna Janta hai

Dhoka dena Janta hai



VC ka dialogue - bhabhi se badi sazaa toh Nandu ko mili hai?

Really? Let's see

Umm, Saraswati looses her child

Gets blamed for killing it by her husband

Finds out that he is having an affair with a Nachaniya

Goes into a depression

Is further alienated by the husband who is ash karoing with the sexy Guman

She kills herself

Not a sazaa at all


Now look at LN -

Ignores his wife

Romances with Nachaniya

Dumps Dukhba

Elopes with Nachaniya

Neglects his son

Honeymoons with Nachaniya

Expands his business and lives a life of luxury

With his trophy wife

And bechara LN??

Iss ko Saraswati se badi sazaa mili?

Kya kha ke dialogue likhte hain hamare cv?



I am sorry but this bechara kabir bechara LN is Bakwas

I can't digest this


Ok ab Saras was 8 when all this happened ?

So he doesn't remember his mom went to hospital to get a baby?

He doesn't remember talking to his mom about the little bhai behen

That Dwrakanath ji is sending for him ?

8 year old! He would remember this


Waise bahut modern jagah hai RN, visa ticket ek hi din mein

Ghar baithe baithe !

Awesome hai ji yeh toh


Menaka masi ka secret boyfriend kaun hai jinse usko roka?

Kalika, stop giving stale news to Guman !





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Posted: 11 years ago
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kya lee hain aapne arshi ji ! sahi baat hain - muje bhi woh scene thoda khatka , i mean how could she just leave like that ? she is the same kumud he sat on the doorstep of his room the entire night ! and now ... ????
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😆 Di... once again you wrote everything I wanted to say... this dialogue of vc and dugba about kabir and saraswati... 😡 absurd bas 🥱 nothing much happened in today's episode...in last five minutes many sequences were shown... but this kumud... 🤔 I said in your yesterday's bytes as to what I want to do with her... if possible check that also 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: believerintruth

kya lee hain aapne arshi ji ! sahi baat hain - muje bhi woh scene thoda khatka , i mean how could she just leave like that ? she is the same kumud he sat on the doorstep of his room the entire night ! and now ... ????


Wasn't that weird? Why are their scenes written so badly?

She was hardly given any lines to speak

Kalika had more dialogues than her!

Kya ho kya raha hai yahan?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arshi ...





" Saras khana kha lo

Mujhe bhookh nahi hai, he replied

Saras was again on the brink of the darkness that had one enveloped him

She again saw the same dread emanating from him - the fear of losing a loved one

She ached with him and wanted to comfort him, and couldn't see him broken like this

He would need all his strength in the coming few days

Kumud gently cupped his face and kissed his forehead

Saras, aise kaise chalega?

Tumne subah se kuch nahi khaya

Hum dhoondh lenge kabir ko

Main hoon na tumhare saath


Kumud, agar kabir ko kuch ho gaya toh?...

Saras's voice broke ... And he hugged her tight

And they stood there for a long long time,

As he felt her soft love enveloping him,

Saras felt calmer, he was not alone, his Kumud was with him

He looked at her beautiful face and smiled at her

Khana khane chalein? He asked her, his voice filled with love.

Kumud smiled back, and together they walked towards the dining room. "



Only in our Dreams ... 😭


I really do not Understand ... What is wrong with the Writers ? 😕


For God's sake , here was a situation crying out for the Scene that you have Penned above so Beautifully ... Simply Tailor made for a Warm Heart to Heart Convo ...showing their Deep Bond and Love ...

and what do our Great Writers do ...Nothing ... 😡

Who in their right minds would miss such an opportunity ?

Thankfully they did something later with the Tea scene ... but ... it was so less ...

There was so much Potential there ...Totally Wasted ...


As for the Whitewashing of Kabir and LN ... It is so Absurd that one almost feels like Laughing out Loudly at the Stupidities ... The less we talk about it the better
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arshics


Wasn't that weird? Why are their scenes written so badly?

She was hardly given any lines to speak

Kalika had more dialogues than her!

Kya ho kya raha hai yahan?


ikr ! sach main we need a refreshment for the cv's ! why not , we write instead of them for one day ? wait ... i just got some chamak in my brain ! 😆 unki chutti ki chuttti , aaram ka aaram and next time jab lautenge unhe karna hoga humse bhi achha kaam ! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what kumud did in todays episode? and why in fact she was there? to show us that see me viewers whoever complain, i am here with your laddo saras.
i can not digest this kumud. what happened to her?? she even was silent when Guman said to saras that how you will control yourself if your bro even leave you. How come kumud can keep his mouth mum like a stranger??

Where kumud have been lost???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb bytes Arshi!!! 👍🏼 👏
-Rahul
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubh-aarambh

😆 Di... once again you wrote everything I wanted to say... this dialogue of vc and dugba about kabir and saraswati... 😡 absurd bas 🥱 nothing much happened in today's episode...in last five minutes many sequences were shown... but this kumud... 🤔 I said in your yesterday's bytes as to what I want to do with her... if possible check that also 😆


Subu, it really was an absurd episode

And what you want to do with Kumud - do it! She has been reduced to standing around and doing nothing !

And it was a boring episode, and full of all Bakwas
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: twila

Arshi ...


" Saras khana kha lo

Mujhe bhookh nahi hai, he replied

Saras was again on the brink of the darkness that had one enveloped him

She again saw the same dread emanating from him - the fear of losing a loved one

She ached with him and wanted to comfort him, and couldn't see him broken like this

He would need all his strength in the coming few days

Kumud gently cupped his face and kissed his forehead

Saras, aise kaise chalega?

Tumne subah se kuch nahi khaya

Hum dhoondh lenge kabir ko

Main hoon na tumhare saath


Kumud, agar kabir ko kuch ho gaya toh?...

Saras's voice broke ... And he hugged her tight

And they stood there for a long long time,

As he felt her soft love enveloping him,

Saras felt calmer, he was not alone, his Kumud was with him

He looked at her beautiful face and smiled at her

Khana khane chalein? He asked her, his voice filled with love.

Kumud smiled back, and together they walked towards the dining room. "



Only in our Dreams ... 😭


I really do not Understand ... What is wrong with the Writers ? 😕


For God's sake , here was a situation crying out for the Scene that you have Penned above so Beautifully ... Simply Tailor made for a Warm Heart to Heart Convo ...showing their Deep Bond and Love ...

and what do our Great Writers do ...Nothing ... 😡

Who in their right minds would miss such an opportunity ?

Thankfully they did something later with the Tea scene ... but ... it was so less ...

There was so much Potential there ...Totally Wasted ...


As for the Whitewashing of Kabir and LN ... It is so Absurd that one almost feels like Laughing out Loudly at the Stupidities ... The less we talk about it the better


Twila, really it could have been such a good episode, but apne cvs Jo hain na, they don't want to treat it as a love story, for them it's now season 2 of 24 will start where they will race against time to save kabir!

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