Repentance bytes - Page 6

Originally posted by: Arshics

Sudha tum sc ko bhool jao yeh ho nahi sakta

Tum sc na dekho yeh Gautam hone nahi dega 😆

Just for the moments this man creates with his acting we can't leave the show

Yes, the magical couple with the ehsaas have changed so much after marriage?

That now she holds back when he is so much in pain

Again back to days, when he had to hold himself back during pramaad days

And would silently be her support, even if she was angry with him and married to pramaad

Now toh there is no barrier, she can be with him, by his side haq se

Originally posted by: annete

''mujhe apne ghar le chaloogee ''
kumud rishton mai bahut pehle se hi bat chuke thi
Repentance bytes for kumud in future a sure possibility ,Arshi.,Santhi ...girlfriends😕...what say...

Originally posted by: Arshics

A puzzling dialogue indeed

Which ghar was she talking about ?

Desai house - because that's where kusum called her to

But it's no longer her apna ghar

Vyas house - but they were not heading towards that

So what was the apna ghar?

Originally posted by: annete

Excellent bytes once again ,Arshi
a delightful read
Hogg bhai apne zehmat ki apke is hauslah afzaa'i' ke liya dosto ke taraf se salaam.. Sacchi mohabbat ka yeh roop hota hai yaad delane ke liya shukriya
...''suna hai ishq sacha ho
to khamoshi
lahu ban kar
ragon mai naach
uthti hai
aur saach baat ki khusbbu khud mahsoos hoti hai''

Arshi sarasmatic episode hi mera liya ab dekhne layak hota hai
an almost stoic saras and then his breaking down into a thousand pieces
sarasmatically enacted by Gautam
n sarasmatically encapsulated by you
Gautam n Arshi ...a saras combination👏👏👏
21 gun salute

Mukamaal mohabbat ki adhuri dastaan ab hogayi puri
naya tag line sochana parega...Gautam ka hai ye kehna
Saraswatichandra ki is nayi kahaani may ab ayega naya mord
Arshi tum hi soch ke likh do apne shabdkosh se chunkar
ka ab kare hum kis naam se is kahani ka sambodhan😊

Originally posted by: KusumSingh04

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😳 WOW...U are so good at writing. as i said before you and arshi are best at writing poems

Originally posted by: annete

Kusum those are borrowed lines 😃

Heres the full nazam

Mujhe khamosh rehne do
suna hai ishq sacha ho
to khamoshi
lahu ban kar
ragoon mein
naach uthti hai
abhi kuch din mujhe
meri mohabbat azmaney do
usey mai kyu baaton
usey mene kitna chaha hai
bataya toh jhoot jata hai
ke
sachi baat ki khushbu
to khud mehsoos hoti hai
meri baatein
meri sochein
usey khud jaan lene do
abhi kuch din mujhe
meri mohabbat azmaney do

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Originally posted by: hotdogg

U think?

Consider this scenario...you and your spouse are the eldest in both the families...you have your own demons to battle regarding your dad...you feel you are responsible somehow for this state of affairs...you showed attitude causing your dad to leave and get into this accident...you feel enormously guilty for the treatment you meted out to the person who you love deeply but wont admit (forget the logic for the moment about who is to be blamed first...net net you feel you are responsible)...you are shit scared because you dont know if he will survive...and the guilt is piling on because you caused this...you are shit scared because if he does not survive you are left with the vacuum of the issue remaining unresolved for eternity...because of you...In the middle of all this the entire family is around...knowing you are the reason it has come to this ..maybe..and worried...and somehow you got to keep it all together...and not break down...you have got to lead this group to the other side...

you know you have your love with you in this through thick or thin...so do you really need a demonstration of care and concern?...Why do you need a reaffirmation that she cares?..that's a given.

Even considering the social mileu...I do not think this calls for hugging, holding hands etc in public and in front of family...especially when its not yet the end...I have not seen it in many such family gatherings in cases of people admitted in hospitals...the younger couples (compared to the elder senior couples / family) generally tend to push thier own feelings lower in the priority and focus on the issue at hand...Typically there is a division of labor...one part of the couple manages the hospital environment and the other manages the sundry relatives & logistics...

Net Net ..After all they have been through, saras does not need a physical affirmation of kumud's concern ...he KNOWs that she is equally concerned...

And actually it works the opposite way...he draws strength knowing shes around...but not in his face demonstrating concern...and that she's running interference with the rest while he sorts out his mess in his head and comes to terms with how to deal with this going forward...

And kumud is giving him the space to figure this out first at his level...That's maturity..

I just saw this scene basis the inputs on CB...and I felt it was actually good...no melodrama...more realistic...and actually showing the deep bond these two share...they now dont need to spell it out or hug or some such...these are low level signals...they have gone beyond...

I particularly liked the depiction in the end scene...where kumud knows he feels guily he screwed up (even though inadvertently) and trying to come to terms... saras knows that kumud knows that he feels guilty he screwed up (even though inadvertently) and is trying to come to terms...and yet there is no 'I told you' so from her side...and his (implicit) admission of the same through the sub-text in his first response when she comes next to him..."Yeah...You are right...I feel screwed up...But I am trying to work it out"... And the entire exchange is with both showing utmost respect to the others POV...

Only great actors like GR & JW can pull this through without this degenerating into a me-too scene...

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

first my appreciation to LN ji for creating three hansome puttars...OMG they r so handsome...me shana dead

all three so gora gora chikna chikna baka navjavaan ...haai

now coming to ur complain...Saras is struck and we all know when he is in deepest pain he is loneliest and does not want anybody around, does not want to be touched ...just wants to be in himself into himself into his shell ...thats what he did and happened and all saw it happening and dukh baa said it...when she asked kumud not to leave him alone


saras and kumud r same in case of facing troubles ...they just want to face it alone...its time they learn that now they have a better half and need to share