Repentance bytes - Page 3

Originally posted by: rahuketu

Jay bhaiyyaa ki entriyaan thandi ke mausam me jam gayi! 😛 Bohot fiki entry... Naa koi dhaasu dialogue, naa koi dhaasu nayi BGM!
Arre humaare Pramaad ki ek evil hasi hi kaafi thi, usski entry dhaasu banaane ke liye! 😎

Overall... Mere liye... Thik-thaak episode! 🤔

Originally posted by: Ad_Mumbai_Girl

fantastic lines Arshi ji at the beginning. extremely well written. Super!

loved your bytes ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️
loved Gautam's acting⭐️⭐️⭐️

episode.. 😊

Originally posted by: Arshics

Thanks aditi, bas Gautam did his bit well

Aaj ke liye itna hi bas

Iss PH se itnaich milenga

Jazti mangnne kaich nahi

Originally posted by: Arshics

But Saras's face is like a mirror, and he wears his heart in his sleeve

Aur Dukh ke waqt apne hamsafar ka saath dena immaturity nahi hota

Maturity dikhani thi toh chnadri ban ke poore parivar ke samne nahi aata

Aur kartar ban ke poore gaon ke samne usko tease nahi karta

Immaturity woh hoti hai

Apne jeevan sathi ke saath uske Dukh mein khade hona

Asli maturity hoti hai

Stupid writing again

Jab unko duniya aur reputation ke baare mein sochna tha

Toh nahi Socha

Ab jab thoda PDA toh banta hai

Toh CVs ko maturity yaad aa gayi !

Originally posted by: pasumarthisa

I have to agree with the gen-next now. they could easily show atleast kumud holding his hand tightly. They are rationing it.

Something with contractual issues here. The same CVs who show Danny - kusum so close cant do this to Saras n Kumud. So dont blame CVs. But we might get something tomorrow.

Happy ji,

They dont have the creativity to show closure and handling of such situations. I said long time back(and you did too) that they are putting onus on Saras. Now LN is the wronged one and Saras has to come around. Simple and simplistic.

But that said the letter LN wrote to Saras might have some words of apology . Either way I have to see the journey of this man. Thats why I am here.

Originally posted by: happychappy

Arshi and Santhi,

I do blame the CV's...😡After watching some of the on-location videos, and seeing what they shoot and then not show...😡I do blame the director, editor, the whole lot...

And just as they use story-wala short cuts to make up for lack of creativity, they are using so-called "contractual issues" for not showing basic common sense stuff like all the things everyone's bee ranting about. Saras-Kumud dont hold hands, they sit on the bench at arms-length distance, Kumud keeps her distance from Saras-in-shock...

At the same time they have been showing in other scenes that they are intimate, like Kumud laying her head on Saras shoulder on several occasions, and Saras holding her in a protective-proprietorial fashion that only a husband would do. I dont see "contractual issue" bleeping on that scene... It's just that their equation is inconsistent across scenes...

And assuming these "contracts" stay the same since start of the show, what happened in the atta avalanche scene? Or so many other romantic scenes? Nah, I dont buy it. It's just a cover-up for poor writing and direction.

Today I noticed there is a creative Director called Shikha Vij in the titles... Anyone seen that before? She needs to buck up. Pronto.

Originally posted by: happychappy

Arshi and Santhi,

I do blame the CV's...😡 After watching some of the on-location videos, and seeing what they shoot and then not show...😡 I do blame the director, editor, the whole lot...

And just as they use short cuts to make up for lack of creativity, they are using so-called "contractual issues" for not showing basic common sense stuff like all the things everyone's bee ranting about. Saras-Kumud dont hold hands, they sit on the bench at arms-length distance, Kumud keeps her distance from Saras-in-shock...

At the same time they have been showing in other scenes that they are intimate, like Kumud laying her head on Saras shoulder on several occasions, and Saras holding her in a protective-proprietorial fashion that only a husband would do. I dont see "contractual issue" bleeping on that scene... It's just that their equation is inconsistent across scenes...

And assuming these "contracts" stay the same since start of the show, what happened in the atta avalanche scene? Or so many other romantic scenes? Nah, I dont buy it. It's just a cover-up for poor writing and direction.

Today I noticed there is a creative Director called Shikha Vij in the titles... Anyone seen that before? She needs to buck up. Pronto.