SaMud SR:A Dream Realized! - Page 5

Originally posted by: happychappy

Beautifully written, OSJ the romantic!!! 😊

Now, keep writing, or else!🤗

Perfectly said, Mrieshka...😃

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Yippee!!!

Personalized siggy for me!!Do I know how to add my name too in it???😳

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Happy to get so many great responses.

Whatever I wrote is just wat we all would like to see. Kumud without KB Is not so Kumud n I wish Saras gifts her one.

N that horni!!! Why have those amnesic haven't rangofied it yet?

N doesn't Sara's deserve a decent - I love you from his Kumud?

These ppl want to show comedy I say fine but there r done things which go beyond comedy like a love confession, the act of love making...

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Happy to get so many great responses.

Whatever I wrote is just wat we all would like to see. Kumud without KB Is not so Kumud n I wish Saras gifts her one.

N that horni!!! Why have those amnesic haven't rangofied it yet?

N doesn't Sara's deserve a decent - I love you from his Kumud?

These ppl want to show comedy I say fine but there r done things which go beyond comedy like a love confession, the act of love making...

Completely agree.. Coz as you said in the OS that this time words would not build up or show how much they love each other , but the acts and gestures, their silent soul's conversations are the points which make their passion for each other come out.! So the BOLDED lines is what i want on my screen.! 😳

Waiting for it..

Jaanu I don't need to tell you that I am a huge fan of your write ups . I may be busy but I never let go of any of your works for the simple reason that you always go parallel with the tracks shown and pay attention to small details that make your stories so special.
I love the reference to the nose ring, to the KB, to her claiming his, touching his face and you mentioning how he kept his eyes open this time making us relive the past moments.
SR seems to be incomplete without the groom removing the bride's jewelry but here again you wrote it so classily.
Hats off to you for giving us a classy SR of a classy couple.

This oozes class and subtlety that verily depicts the purity and innocence of SaMud and their love for each other. You're a master writer J. Amazing❤️

Originally posted by: dazzzling

Jaanu I don't need to tell you that I am a huge fan of your write ups . I may be busy but I never let go of any of your works for the simple reason that you always go parallel with the tracks shown and pay attention to small details that make your stories so special.
I love the reference to the nose ring, to the KB, to her claiming his, touching his face and you mentioning how he kept his eyes open this time making us relive the past moments.
SR seems to be incomplete without the groom removing the bride's jewelry but here again you wrote it so classily.
Hats off to you for giving us a classy SR of a classy couple.

Originally posted by: DocWho

This oozes class and subtlety that verily depicts the purity and innocence of SaMud and their love for each other. You're a master writer J. Amazing❤️

Thanks for not giving up after 2 failed attempts!