OS: Somebody That I Used To Know - Page 4

Originally posted by: sweetly_sour

Vee, OMG!! itna lambaaa reply 🤗🤣

Ruk padhti hun 🤣

BTW usko Members only and No copy wale codes dalke secure kiya 😎

Originally posted by: sweetly_sour

I know, you are fab writer too 👏,,many ek beginning ka paragraph padha tha us din, but poora nahi padh saki , tab masti ke mood mein thi, remember? 😆

I know, you've not written anything recently hai na? cuz teri post is lost somewhere in the old pages of this forum 😕

Originally posted by: veera25

Shana tum achi likhti ho, aisa mat kaho 😎

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

thanks for appreciation veera but fact is sometimes i myself get irritated while writing coz i start writing too much 😆

i can very well feel humi 'sl ast line as writer in os

Originally posted by: veera25

My on the spot reactions to your comment 🤣

bohat lambha hai bey... are you ready?? Poora parhke dikhaa dude... and I didn't even cheat and make the font size bigger 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Veee I love you, I'm already excited to read it. tu cheater nahi,,but you know main spacings deke bahot cheat karti hun 🤣

Members only post 😉 😉 koi aur naa dekhle, huh? 😉 😉

Koi aur na churale 🤣

Oh my goodness, an OS dedicated to me?? 😭 😭 😭 😭 To Tomo and me? Humi... 🤗 I am speechless dude and definitely not worthy of a dedication. Thankoo thankoo thankooo! 😳 ☺️

Ah dekh I'm going to give you a scene by scene review so you can see my reaction to EVERYTHING. 😆 Enjoy 😃

Haan because you both are like bestest people on this entire forum 😭😭, tumlog kameene hongey auron ke liye🤣, but jaise bhi ho merey liye sahi ho 😎🤗

Oh wow... dude yeh kitna romantic hai man... mujhe lagta hai ki besides reading Zu ka stuff, I've never seen a romantic OS that is not over the top sickly sweet... it's perfect. 😳

Humi yaar... this integrated philosophy of life 😭 I love pondering these things and you're writing them... only my favourite authors are able to write like this aur tu... 😭 so excellent... very beautiful! 😃 😳

Tujhe toh merey Girru wale chalak Tactics pata hi hai na 🤣 , I know most people dig this philosophical connection, 🤣

And yeah, I wanted to keep it realistic 😳

"anti-social elements" 🤣 I love that, you're a genius!

Tune pakad liya 🤣 , actually that was because of my limited vocabulary 🤣, couldn't come up with more apt words 🤣 , soncha rehne dun kaun itna point out karega 🤣

hmm... new job? Itnaa bhi dangerous ho sakta hai kya..? What is he, a tapku acrobat?

OMGG SARAS IS A SPY THAT KILLS PEOPLE TOO BONUS... YEH KHABH HUA BEY??? pLoT tWiSt 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

seriously, kya tension build up kiya yaar, too good! 😃

Wanted to make him look badass!! 😎

Yeh toh bale hi overprotective hai bey 😭 I was hoping she'd ask for some cool spy wale tricks and tips... knife work, boo ya 😎

No comments, Tony ne already bahot bashing karli Kumi ki 🤣

Waise in real life people do react like this 😕

Oh my god the colours are leaving his life... I felt so sad... 😭 😭 😭 Humi dude kya likhaa tune 😭 😭 😭 😭

Kal nu viyaa... chal Karte hain party sharty 🥳 In the midst of all this unbearable sadness... a nice thought of a wedding kyun mixed emotions deh rahe ho mujhe 😳 😳

Tomorrow morning... he didn't say what time? 😳 Uh oh...

Ghonchu, time ka kya achaar dalegi 🤣🤣

"sacred sanctum awaited to witness the union of love" OMGGG HUMIII EWDSFEWONS BRILLIANT!!! 😭 😭 😭 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 😳

Ishhh thank you 😳

Itna dramatic prose... Nature vs. this couple... I like this pattern 😳 😭

"shackles of his love" omg you did it again bang punch on my heart too great bey 😳

p.h.i.l.o.s.o.p.h.y ka intro again... Vee lubs it 😳 😳 😳

Tactics and tricks to spice up the storyline 😎

Awww of course Saras goes to the baby bachaa awww 😳 😳 😳 she sneezes awww so cute! 😃 I love this kid already 😃

OMGGG ANOTHER pLoT tWiSt... the bacha likes chocolate ice cream!! 😆 😆 😆

ROFL!!! 🤣🤣

I'm kidding omg look it's Kummmuuu 😃 😲 short hair... she'd look nice with a bob cut 😳

(did I really just say she'd look good with a bob cut?? story ki setting aisi hai toh yes 🤣)

Tu chup kar, I'm sure Tony will be her hairstylist 🤣

MOMMY??? PHIRSE CHAUNKAADIYA MUJHE 😲

how does he know the kid is his? 😉 joking joking

Vee ufff 🤣, locket hai na bey, kya itna saboot kafi nahi? paternity tests karwaun kya terey liey 🤣. Ofcourse it is his, my OS wali Kumi is not bewafa 😎

hahahahahha their awkward hi's. I can feel the awkwardness 😆 😆 😆 well done!

limp? 😕 what have you been up to Saras?

Yeah about limp,,,you know his dangerous missions 😭, getting injured is just part and parcel of his job. bechara hogaya hoga aisa😭 But the cool thing is he's got a swag 🤣🤣

Awww, the way you described that... I felt like I was Saras and I was looking at my almost grown up child for the first time. Well done, Humi 😳

"His past would always follow him." What a way to sum up the same character, even if he's in a completely different situation. Saras ka ehsaas abhi tak hai is story mein... and the ehsaas of the Saras pre-SP-kachraing. Genius, genius Humi. 😕 You're a better writer than you think 😳

Somebody I used to know nooo 😭 😭 😭 😭

Oh my goodness what an ending. You turned it into such a musing. Humi seriously how could you think I could be mad at you this is such a golden story yaar... Best, most meaningful story of love I've seen... I think it's a much more down-to-earth, stuck in reality story. Vee type ki bilkul 😆

Awww...thank you Vee😭😭 🤗

This is absolutely beautiful! 😳 Abh mujhe pataa chal gayaa ki Humi ke dimaag ka jaadoo uske dil se bhi shaayad sundar hai. 🤗 Thank you so much for restricting this post (because it's so beautiful) and dedicating it to me and Tomo... I can't even right now my emotions 😭 😭 😭

Hug le le bachha 🤗🤗

Look at my girls. One writes such beautiful poems in Hindi-English and then makes VMs (Tomooo) 😳

Yeah Tony is the most talented bandi, and lively person on this forum,,,baaki saarey iske samne zombies hain 🤣

and the other can make you laugh and cry in a moments notice with her magical words 😲 Simply outstanding!!! 😃 🤗

And look at my multitalented bachhi Vee, she clevely bashes Kumi, aur kisiko pata bhi nahi chalta, she is a pro at making awesome posts, she is a sweetheart ,,,to be contd ( zyada tareef is not good for your health )

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

humi is their a way to make post exclusive ..i wanna makemy ff too do tell

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

did write one two weeks ago ...but its an FF ...i will advice u readonly after i have updated three four chapters ...as i am very slow and extensive and sometimes boring too coz of too much description 😆