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sweetly_sour

@sweetly_sour

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

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Fuggy Mehra

@..FuggyMehra..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u so much for dedicating this to me 😭😭😭😭 AND VEE means A LOT <-- iss se accha word meri pass nahi hai 😭😭😭😭 thank u kaam hai baccha 😭😭😭

great writing🤔 everybody knows that humi is a great writer.

creative mind well in this entire forum i m the biggest fan her creativity then kya likkho 🤔

then gun wala saras ...saras the don (good don) hayeee i bet koi bhi iss forum me saras gun pakad sakta hai ah nahi soch paye ga but humi devi can do anything 😳😳😳 .dude he was sexy with capital S .😭

and then kumi 😆 i know u tried to make her as nice as u can but dek she is another b here too.every woman takes pride of their desh vhakth pati yeah BF usko apne padi hai 😡😡😡😡

bechare ko batay bhi nahi about her daughter 😭😭😭

okay i m so so so so so so so sorry cox i was trying to make a banner 🤣 🤣 and dude aisa daravna banner na ho toh hi accha hai then so gayi 🤣 🤣
daughter se yaad aye ...saras / gautam ki baby girl with those eye and skin ..dude i need to read that part again.

next part likk baccha ...

they were walking (kumi and saras da baby girl) .kumi fall of the bridge ...she dies and then saras takes care of the baccha girl ...now happy ending 😆😆😆

meri ji nahi vhara yaar aur likke ...tu toh usko maar de 😭😭😭

love u love u love u ...great , awesome , perfect ...baki janne ki liye dictionary dekhe
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Edited by .....B.N.K..... - 11 years ago

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

i very nice one

i loved it,simply beautiful. Emotions flowed so smoothly and the characters so much at peace with the circumstances.

Seemed like i just saw an episode of teri meri love stories :)

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sweetly_sour

@sweetly_sour

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShanUlas
i very nice one

i loved it,simply beautiful. Emotions flowed so smoothly and the characters so much at peace with the circumstances.

Seemed like i just saw an episode of teri meri love stories :)

Thank you Shana 🤗 , oye you changed your username??😲

Comparing my OS with the Teri Meri lovestory in itself is a huge compliment 😳

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sona...666

@sona...666

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

wow beautifully written👍🏼

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Veera

@SahirsBeard

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

bohat lambha hai bey... are you ready?? Poora parhke dikhaa dude... and I didn't even cheat and make the font size bigger 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Members only post 😉 😉 koi aur naa dekhle, huh? 😉 😉

Oh my goodness, an OS dedicated to me?? 😭 😭 😭 😭 To Tomo and me? Humi... 🤗 I am speechless dude and definitely not worthy of a dedication. Thankoo thankoo thankooo! 😳 ☺️

Ah dekh I'm going to give you a scene by scene review so you can see my reaction to EVERYTHING. 😆 Enjoy 😃

Oh wow... dude yeh kitna romantic hai man... mujhe lagta hai ki besides reading Zu ka stuff, I've never seen a romantic OS that is not over the top sickly sweet... it's perfect. 😳

Humi yaar... this integrated philosophy of life 😭 I love pondering these things and you're writing them... only my favourite authors are able to write like this aur tu... 😭 so excellent... very beautiful! 😃 😳

"anti-social elements" 🤣 I love that, you're a genius!

hmm... new job? Itnaa bhi dangerous ho sakta hai kya..? What is he, a tapku acrobat?

OMGG SARAS IS A SPY THAT KILLS PEOPLE TOO BONUS... YEH KHABH HUA BEY??? pLoT tWiSt 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

seriously, kya tension build up kiya yaar, too good! 😃

Yeh toh bale hi overprotective hai bey 😭 I was hoping she'd ask for some cool spy wale tricks and tips... knife work, boo ya 😎

Oh my god the colours are leaving his life... I felt so sad... 😭 😭 😭 Humi dude kya likhaa tune 😭 😭 😭 😭

Kal nu viyaa... chal Karte hain party sharty 🥳 In the midst of all this unbearable sadness... a nice thought of a wedding kyun mixed emotions deh rahe ho mujhe 😳 😳

Tomorrow morning... he didn't say what time? 😳 Uh oh...

"sacred sanctum awaited to witness the union of love" OMGGG HUMIII EWDSFEWONS BRILLIANT!!! 😭 😭 😭 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 😳

Itna dramatic prose... Nature vs. this couple... I like this pattern 😳 😭

"shackles of his love" omg you did it again bang punch on my heart too great bey 😳

p.h.i.l.o.s.o.p.h.y ka intro again... Vee lubs it 😳 😳 😳

Awww of course Saras goes to the baby bachaa awww 😳 😳 😳 she sneezes awww so cute! 😃 I love this kid already 😃

OMGGG ANOTHER pLoT tWiSt... the bacha likes chocolate ice cream!! 😆 😆 😆 I'm kidding omg look it's Kummmuuu 😃 😲 short hair... she'd look nice with a bob cut 😳

(did I really just say she'd look good with a bob cut?? story ki setting aisi hai toh yes 🤣)

MOMMY??? PHIRSE CHAUNKAADIYA MUJHE 😲

how does he know the kid is his? 😉 joking joking

hahahahahha their awkward hi's. I can feel the awkwardness 😆 😆 😆 well done!

limp? 😕 what have you been up to Saras?

Awww, the way you described that... I felt like I was Saras and I was looking at my almost grown up child for the first time. Well done, Humi 😳

"His past would always follow him." What a way to sum up the same character, even if he's in a completely different situation. Saras ka ehsaas abhi tak hai is story mein... and the ehsaas of the Saras pre-SP-kachraing. Genius, genius Humi. 😕 You're a better writer than you think 😳

Somebody I used to know nooo 😭 😭 😭 😭

Oh my goodness what an ending. You turned it into such a musing. Humi seriously how could you think I could be mad at you this is such a golden story yaar... Best, most meaningful story of love I've seen... I think it's a much more down-to-earth, stuck in reality story. Vee type ki bilkul 😆

This is absolutely beautiful! 😳 Abh mujhe pataa chal gayaa ki Humi ke dimaag ka jaadoo uske dil se bhi shaayad sundar hai. 🤗 Thank you so much for restricting this post (because it's so beautiful) and dedicating it to me and Tomo... I can't even right now my emotions 😭 😭 😭

Look at my girls. One writes such beautiful poems in Hindi-English and then makes VMs (Tomooo) 😳

and the other can make you laugh and cry in a moments notice with her magical words 😲 Simply outstanding!!! 😃 🤗

Edited by veera25 - 11 years ago

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

ye tony kabhi nahi sudhregi ...os may bhi kummi ke peeche padi hai ...rolf

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sweetly_sour

@sweetly_sour

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...B.N.K...
Thank u so much for dedicating this to me 😭 AND VEE means A LOT <-- iss se accha word meri pass nahi hai 😭 thank u kaam hai baccha 😭😭😭

great writing🤔 everybody knows that humi is a great writer.

creative mind well in this entire forum i m the biggest fan her creativity then kya likkho 🤔

then gun wala saras ...saras the don (good don) hayeee i bet koi bhi iss forum me saras gun pakad sakta hai ah nahi soch paye ga but humi devi can do anything 😳😳😳 .dude he was sexy with capital S .😭

and then kumi 😆 i know u tried to make her as nice as u can but dek she is another b here too.every woman takes pride of their desh vhakth pati yeah BF usko apne padi hai 😡

bechare ko batay bhi nahi about her daughter 😭😭😭

okay i m so so so so so so so sorry cox i was trying to make a banner 🤣 🤣 and dude aisa daravna banner na ho toh hi accha hai then so gayi 🤣 🤣
daughter se yaad aye ...saras / gautam ki baby girl with those eye and skin ..dude i need to read that part again.

next part likk baccha ...

they were walking (kumi and saras da baby girl) .kumi fall of the bridge ...she dies and then saras takes care of the baccha girl ...now happy ending 😆😆😆

meri ji nahi vhara yaar aur likke ...tu toh usko maar de 😭😭😭

love u love u love u ...great , awesome , perfect ...baki janne ki liye dictionary dekhe
🤣 🤣

@Bold...Ufff,,,tu uska peecha yahan bhi nahi chhodegi 🤣🤣

Tonyyy , thanks for this super duper dil ko chhone wala comment 🤗🤗

You were the reason behind me writing on SC , so tujhe hi dedicate karungi na, and tujhe thank you bolne ki zaroorat nahi 😳

Haye meri itni tareef sunke main behosh hojaying 🤣

BTW main Gun wale Saras ko main Assasin banane wali thi , but then soncha too much hojayega, and desh bhakti wala flavour bhi nahi ayega 🤣 ...me and my crazy imagination 😆

See maine khud nahi soncha ki Kumi itni selfish hai, you do quite a research on her psychology bey, you turned her negative even in my OS 🤣

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetly_sour

Thank you Shana 🤗 , oye you changed your username??😲
Comparing my OS with the Teri Meri lovestory in itself is a huge compliment 😳

love ur writing pls write more...its encouraging to see people write on saras kumud...makers have butchered kumud and saras else characters ye bhi kaam ke the 😆...which r so beautifully depicted in ur one shot

yes humi now i have added my hubby name Ulas too ..i thought this SC will go on forever and God knows when will i get samud so decided samud kabhi mile na mile ShanUlas ek ho hi chooke hai ☺️

Edited by ShanUlas - 11 years ago