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Kiran

@kiranpri

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Your story telling is so professional. Excellent English and story very simple but so effective. Liked the Saras you depicted, selfless for his country. I could understand the fear Kumud had as it is not easy to live with someone to whom you do not know what will happennext.

Very sad through...😭

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sweetly_sour

@sweetly_sour

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
This is absolutely a very beautiful piece of writing. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Ur first?? Well u r very good for a first timer!!⭐️
I would definitely want to read more from u.

Jaaanuu 🤗

Thanks for reading it, and thanks for the lovely feedback 🤗, waise it's my first one on SC forum, I usually write for IPK.

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sweetly_sour

@sweetly_sour

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: kiranpreethee
Your story telling is so professional. Excellent English and story very simple but so effective. Liked the Saras you depicted, selfless for his country. I could understand the fear Kumud had as it is not easy to live with someone to whom you do not know what will happennext.
Very sad through...😭

Thank you Kiran 🤗 , your comment was a treat to read. 😆

Keep posting such lovely feedback always 😳

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sweetly_sour

@sweetly_sour

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: ...B.N.K...

bump !!! 😳

Oye Bumpwa, tera Bumper idhar 😆

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Fuggy Mehra

@..FuggyMehra..

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: sweetly_sour

Oye Bumpwa, tera Bumper idhar 😆

kaha ho tum log kal se 🤔

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sweetly_sour

Jaaanuu 🤗
Thanks for reading it, and thanks for the lovely feedback 🤗, waise it's my first one on SC forum, I usually write for IPK.

Oh!! Then u r a pro n a very humble one.

U shud write for our forum too khatti meethi gal. U have a very different n beautiful style. Of course I know the tracks in SC tend to sap our creativity at times but u can write ur own tracks n I am sure it will b a treat to read.

Take care n see u soon🤗

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ILTHBEB

@ILTHBEB

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Humi my dude..hugz.
Ektna badra os phela baar mila mujha.lol
puri tara sesh nahi kaar payi..half padra..awesome yaar<3.

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

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Hayee...Humi, you are back and how!👏

Very wonderfully written as always; you have it in you to write every genre, may it be humor in Rules, suspense in...oops main naam bhool gayi😆 and then this.

The play of emotions was brilliantly done and I wish for you to write more and more😊

P.S. For someone who doesn't like to read angst, you write it pretty well😛

Next up: A romantic OS...on you know who😉

Edited by Eccentrica - 11 years ago