After a long time I am writing on the forum.
There are too many random points to share:
First point : The other day my chachi said, I don't like Saraswati Chandra these days, all rona dhona, so thought for creatives on why audience is getting disconnected. And how to redeem to get the TRP's. if you read successful plays, watch successful serials, they have a balance of rona dhona and comic elements. So I think there needs to be some events where in Kalika is made fun of, kind of mazza chakhana types, some funny confusion from Jamai babu( alakh's husband), some comic love story like that of murkha nand ( with some serious human pathos) . I think this will give some balance.
Second Point : some how creatives have weakened Saras's character. See when novel was written were old times, when someone staying in your own house for long periods was acceptable. But now, it does not feel appropriate. Same way I was not convinced with the way Bhuddhidhan has been shown to have complete faith on Saras. It's not convincing enough . There were minor incident like that speech, or saving Kumud, but not convincing enough. There can be track where in creatives show some serious professional working of Saras, where in he predicts the opponents chaal, rubbished by every one but proved right in the end. This will not only give additional track, some more episodes, but also something thrilling to watch apart from rona dhona.
Third point: to strengthen Saras character, they should show him refusing to eat together on same table, as a sensible man he should know his limits that he is after all not a family member, but an outsider. Then some one from family only to coax him to restart to eat together, this makes it convincing to say that Saras never stayed due to Kumud's lust ( which point will come up later in story).
Fourth point : its not convincing that Kusum has not told her mother that Saras is here. If she is intelligent to know, Saras staying under the same roof is not good for her sister ( for what will happen when his secret will be revealed), then she is intelligent enough to know that this should be brought to notice of elders at her place.
Looking forward to inputs from others. See, we also can contribute in suggesting the creatives how to increase TRP's so that show is not taken off and more importantly gets its due. It's far superior to sasural Simar ka types serials.