Ek dil chaar rahen - Kumud ki duvidha

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ek dil raahein hain chaar

Kis rah pe chal ke Kumud ki

Naiyya hogi paar?


One road that leads

Back to the sunny streets of her childhood

The welcoming arms of ma and bapu


And questioning eyes

Pointing fingers

Accusing glances

Malicious gossip

That will singe not just her

But all her loved ones



The second road that takes her

Into the arms of Saras

Her soulmate

Where she will find love



And social ostracizatiion

And character assassination

Hers, and that of her sisters

And shame in the eyes of her ma bapu



The third road is the one

Taken many years earlier

By the mother of a little boy


To give her release forever

And leave behind

The scars that will never heal

And pain that will never die



There is the fourth road

Of social dignity

Prestige and honor


And to personal humiliation

Insult and abuse

Behind the closed doors

In the darkness of night!



Aaj chaar raste hain saamne

Kahin paaon main chubhenge

Rahon ke paththar

To kahin, sar pe pehnegi

Kanton ka taj

Kahin keelon ki sej pe sona hoga

To kahin tootega dil aur bahenge aasoon!


Jahan bhi jayegi, Jo bhi chunegi

Aag ka darya hai, paar kaise karegi

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happychappy thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful, Arshi! Wah... Respect and tears!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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exquisite...u can definitely play with words...i always look forward 2 your views

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Your critical analysis is indeed great. I wish the makers will provide us a logical, rational, relevant plot in tune to modern times. It's only wishful thinking... I guess from the way the plot moves and the character of Kumud (proud, egoistic, adamant, self-sacrificing, etc.) she has already chosen the fourth way. Kumud wouldn't take any help from any one but with unflinching determination she will pursue to reform Pramad. Nonetheless Saras will take some step to alleviate her pain and get her prayers and efforts materialised.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Exactly, this is the story of Kumudsundari.
Why ever this story was named after Saraswatichandra?

There are clashes with depiction of 21st century Kumud and GT's original Kumud in mere external trivialities. I wonder as personalities are both same? Did GT's Kumud possess same sense of integrity and always choosing to do her best in the circumstances presented to her? Would be interesting to read an English edition when it comes out.

I appreciate this Kumud's sense of direction. She chooses the most challenging roads of all. Not taking responsibility is giving up her self worth and thereby loosing her very existence.
Still..
I am not able to comprehend at the moment for many of the logics presented by her(they have Dugba's example in front of them, who has quit her own marriage..still highly respected in Kumud's eye. What makes this Kumud think, she'll be giving heartache to VC by going back..is she implying Dugba here?). Inconsistency arising due to adaptation?
Most of the incongruity are arising due to adaptations I guess.

I hope to figure out Kumud better, in coming episodes

(Disclaimer: I don't endorse anyone meekly putting up with abuse.) As long as their exit limit and safety planned, it is up to them to deal with their lives. At the moment, Kumud is building up safety net around her. She has spelt out her limits of tolerance to her MIL. Will see how she goes further.

I highly sympathise with Saras for his weakness in letting go of her. He has been a rounded personality in his own way in his tragic circumstances.
Anyone would be happy to fall for him. But he is choosing to make his life difficult for his own self. Can't help it.



Edited by Adiani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This duvidha we all know...tell the solution as it is that matters to me in the end...

...and my solution is what i saw in precap

Yes ! fourth is my choice for Kumud and Kumud has chosen it too ...but do it in Saras ki Empowered Kumud way !!!...give the man Pamad bang on and live with pride and self dignity. U have in laws who love u and know what is ur plight

So finally Kumud dearest just be the proud bahu of Dharmadhikari family and who said being a patni is important when u have a pati like Pramad.

May be thats why God gave u all share of love before ur marriage in form of moments u spent with Saras .Make those moments ur power and make dharmadhikari family be proud of u by ur works in household , education and social works, make Sid grow into a respectable man and Pramad ! be good to him for goodness sake.

Rest leave it on God ,they say love makes it way and if ur love is true it will surely find its way :)
Edited by shana0127 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: happychappy

Beautiful, Arshi! Wah... Respect and tears!


Thank you happy, whatever she does, which way she goes, it's going to be tough
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shana0127

This duvidha we all know...tell the solution as it is that matters to me in the end...

...and my solution is what i saw in precap

Yes ! fourth is my choice for Kumud and Kumud has chosen it too ...but do it in Saras ki Empowered Kumud way !!!...give the man Pamad bang on and live with pride and self dignity. U have in laws who love u and know what is ur plight

So finally Kumud dearest just be the proud bahu of Dharmadhikari family and who said being a patni is important when u have a pati like Pramad.

May be thats why God gave u all share of love before ur marriage in form of moments u spent with Saras .Make those moments ur power and make dharmadhikari family be proud of u by ur works in household , education and social works, make Sid grow into a respectable man and Pramad ! be good to him for goodness sake.

Rest leave it on God ,they say love makes it way and if ur love is true it will surely find its way :)

Fully agree. Kumud should take the 4th option which she already took but go about it with courage. And self-respect like Saras said she should. Rest, God will show the way.
I wanted to ask in the Crisp-bytes thread. Where does that leave Saras. He has only one thing with him and that is his guilt about his mistake. What should he do. Immerse himself in social service(Saras of original was so passionate about social welfare)? Take Sanyas? There is nothing else in his life now. No relationships. No support system.
Still cant go beyond the Saras who was fluttered by Kumud and came to Ratnanagari. With that tilak on his forehead, face full of purity and innocence.
Edited by pasumarthisa - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: annete

exquisite...u can definitely play with words...i always look forward 2 your views


Thank you so much annete
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bechara Awwraat is so old fashion and boring ji ..

Kumi k 's i m dukhi cox i m dukhi is annoying ... call me heartless but she sucks and i dislike /hate her

Accha khasa show ko '' jagruut janta '' show banake chod diya 🤢 .. main nahi dete sympathy vote ... 🤢

Aur bhi bura haal ho teri ... toni does not care 😎


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