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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: smrth

And perhaps last of that pappy smile SC and tender eyed Kumud until Sundar Giri. Liked them today too, as well, found them so vulnerable even within a narrative canvas😭...these two are only reasons that make me defend some shoddy work and wasted potential, time and again...😳
In bet'n they gave one quarter of four Feras under the Moon and Diya! Unilateral- nevertheless! Rest will be on Sundar Giri.😊


What is sunder giri smrth? Feeling a little lost on that!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@hotdogg,

Sailing in the same boat dear!

This close to packing my bags and moving out

A show that started out with a bang already whimpering!

So the hug happened, but we are talking Saras Kumud here

He couldn't keep his hands off her even when they were not supposedly in love

She couldn't resist him even when she kept pushing him away

Last night I expected the passion, the intensity depicted in touch also


I expected a constant physical contact,

Kabhi gaal ko choona,

Kabhi chehre se lat ko hatana

Kabhi gardan sehlana, to kabhi gale se lagana

Kuch pal mile hain aaj bahut din baad

Aaj tujhe choo kar, saanson main bhar loon tera har ehsaas!


And KC, the less said about it the better, this beats even the Gau Hatya and haveli

Just lead chemistry and a few lovey dialogues are like a marriage pandal,

Glittery shiny but will last for a day or so, to make it a long lasting building it needs a

solid foundation of a story, that is consistent and logical, and flows seamlessly through events,

characters, is intelligently thought out and challenges the mind and touches the heart .

Sorry Mr SLB, and the team of cvs, you score a big 0/10 on all the above for the KC idea.


At this point for me the show is already on life support, brain dead, either the coming couple of weeks it revives or I may just move on and may the show RIP - rest in pieces




Edited by arshicritic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved danny kumari part! samud chemistry was thandi..mazaa nahin aaya..looked forced and half baked..for me 7/10..danny kumari 10/10!..why i feel Gautam is not enjoying any close ya touch waale scenes with mrs. Grover..i think the separation track will be apt for the current situation as long as danny is not paired with kumud!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandygill

loved danny kumari part! samud chemistry was thandi..mazaa nahin aaya..looked forced and half baked..for me 7/10..danny kumari 10/10!..why i feel Gautam is not enjoying any close ya touch waale scenes with mrs. Grover..i think the separation track will be apt for the current situation as long as danny is not paired with kumud!



Yes missed the close touch between samud but this seems to be the best we can expect.

Married couples take 7 years to develop the thandapan yeh to abhi se hi!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshicritic



Yes missed the close touch between samud but this seems to be the best we can expect.

Married couples take 7 years to develop the thandapan yeh to abhi se hi!



completely agree arshi, romantic show ki thande waale scenes deke band bajaa di..i really wish that this show had sustained the atmosphere that it created in the beginning..now it seems dragged, forced romantic scenes, logic ki waaat scenes, i don't know if u feel the same, but i have a feeling that slb and star plus r planning the closure on this serial fast, that is why they r moving the story ahead..or they could be experimenting some different track to see viewer's reaction! too early to figure out what future this show holds!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Typing from phone tough so pl read hotdogg post and my reply on
Prev page would like ur reaction to it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandygill



completely agree arshi, romantic show ki thande waale scenes deke band bajaa di..i really wish that this show had sustained the atmosphere that it created in the beginning..now it seems dragged, forced romantic scenes, logic ki waaat scenes, i don't know if u feel the same, but i have a feeling that slb and star plus r planning the closure on this serial fast, that is why they r moving the story ahead..or they could be experimenting some different track to see viewer's reaction! too early to figure out what future this show holds!



Agree...

** slight rant follows ***

The earlier sizzle and chemistry is fading..

Post PMS, both look constrained, clinical and cautious...Gautam more so... I can almost hear Gautam think...ok now I have to hold her...move my right hand here..place it there...done...now move my left hand there...done...now start speaking my lines...

And Jennifer thinking...ok lets get this over with mister...put your right hand just there..hold...dont move it further any inch...or else...now put your left hand there...hold...now I am going to come closer...hold still and dont move...speak...

A couple who love each other, whose decks have been cleared for marriage and who were attracted to each other from the very beginning (Mr. Ehsaas / Eyes / Photo) would be looking forward to being physically and mentally close..

Where is the intimacy depicted for such a couple, intimacy which always largely first develops through physical closeness, later followed by meeting of minds and then a deep bond of love?

Even if the sequence was to be reversed i.e. mental meeting first, without the physical there is no way intimacy will ever develop in a couple..

Of all the people, SLB knows it very well...but still...

The earlier gestures of spontaneously grabbing her hand, moving her hair away from her face, caresses, the quality of their first hug...which were so simple but yet so magical and powerful ...gone forever...

You may not want to show deeper levels of intimacy, but you could still depict some of the earlier ones...kuch nahin to at least show them once holding hands yaar!

Post PMS its only mental union all the way all the time...all the silent communication through phone / skype chats is all good concept...but all the time?.. These two have barely touched after PMS...as if it was some bad memory...

Its now like
1) Ram - Sita... all prim and proper...largely mental union with no hint of a physical union

and not like
2) Krishna - Radha...earthy, fun & frolic, love & hate...with equal balance between mental & physical union

These two started out as #2 but are now a sanitized & extreme U rated #1

Can't figure out if its due to CV cues or due to the controversies around contracts / intimacy clauses etc.

Either way,. thats another hole in this ship...


Edited by hotdogg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Post PMS, both look constrained, clinical and cautious...Gautam more so... I can almost hear Gautam think...ok now I have to hold her...move my right hand here..place it there...done...now move my left hand there...done...now start speaking my lines...

And Jennifer thinking...ok lets get this over with mister...put your right hand just there..hold...dont move it further any inch...or else...now put your left hand there...hold...now I am going to come closer...hold still and dont move...speak..
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Hotdogg! very well written! good thing u have written it, if it was me i would have got chappals from so many of u! well, jokes apart, i knew this was coming, both of the seem to be extremely uncomfortable, especially Gautam who is becoming extra cautious and wants to get the scene done somehow half heatedly..very difficult to get the artificial chemistry/smile on the face when there is no connection and all there is is restrictions..and very rightly said that this is another hole in the ship!
Edited by mandygill - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Agree Hgg @ PMS reference. All is so sanitised. Even one reference from her- yesterday, has a ring of casualness from both- while one would expect an electric spark lit their face at mention. Dialogues, though competent, too much reliance is not getting the desired effect.😕

@ arshi,
Sorry, Sunadrgiri would fall in 'original alert'...suffice wud be to say...GMT had not kept them unmarried after all. They were virtually married there- literally and metaphysically. Even PM'U'...u for union...I think source inspiration for SLB's PMS! But let me stop.
Edited by smrth - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandygill

Post PMS, both look constrained, clinical and cautious...Gautam more so... I can almost hear Gautam think...ok now I have to hold her...move my right hand here..place it there...done...now move my left hand there...done...now start speaking my lines...

And Jennifer thinking...ok lets get this over with mister...put your right hand just there..hold...dont move it further any inch...or else...now put your left hand there...hold...now I am going to come closer...hold still and dont move...speak..
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Hotdogg! very well written! good thing u have written it, if it was me i would have got chappals from so many of u! well, jokes apart, i knew this was coming, both of the seem to be extremely uncomfortable, especially Gautam who is becoming extra cautious and wants to get the scene done somehow half heatedly..very difficult to get the artificial chemistry/smile on the face when there is no connection and all there is is restrictions..and very rightly said that this is another hole in the ship!


U r kind of right Mandy, till about a couple of weeks ago, I would have disagreed with you, and tried to get you to go a little easy on the show, but right now, I agree with you and hotdogg.

Smrth did say a few days ago about the show sinking so low that it would be an automatic detox

Well, we are almost there! After last night I am also inclined to believe all the problem between leads stories!

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