New OS: I can't lose you!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: Cameryn

Awesome loved it.. 😊 😊
Episode bana do isse...

Please read my FF and give feedback..please...you are my Guru now..😛

Thanks dear!!😃

@ bold
U r too funny. I am not ur guru,😳 😆 Be my buddy😃 n post the link i will surely read it. I love to read fiction.😛

Originally posted by: sia224

Awww this is so beautiful !!!!! 👏

Nice to read this after the gloomy episode yesterday and i really wish that this is what happens in the show.😊

Thanks Sia for liking it!! Keep reading n encouraging me.😳 I wud also like to see something like this too but CVs never read my OSs i guess!!😆

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Thanks dear!!😃

@ bold
U r too funny. I am not ur guru,😳😆 Be my buddy😃 n post the link i will surely read it. I love to read fiction.😛

Tum in Sab bachon ki guruji ho!.. 👏 ..guru ji!..what a nice name for the teacher!

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Ok counting on u manju!!
Thanks again for liking my work.
Btw check ur thread. I replied to it!!😃

Originally posted by: archanamanav

Hello ji 🤗
What a wonderful make up session yaar!..I am selling ur story Han!..these people need ideas coz they copy from movies otherwise!..ha ha!
Very nice Han..I think Saras dude needs to go after and fix this ..coz his girl is not in right frame of Mind..
Very nicely written Han..
Yes!..open place main hee milni hai ab!.. 😆

Awww my better half!!🤗 U love this make up session? Seriously?? Then u deserve thousands of hugs!! Thank u.

Oh these CVs dont read my work at all yaar mein kya karoon??😡 I have to bheja fry u ppl to read it!!😆
@ bold
🤣 My Saras will never meet Kumud alone before marriage now!!😆

Originally posted by: archanamanav

Tum in Sab bachon ki guruji ho!.. 👏 ..guru ji!..what a nice name for the teacher!

No no i dont want to b Guru ji!!😆 I am fine as the sweet 16 crazy gal!!😛

Of course yaar!..make up session is top class!..coz I am sure her answer is no if he asks ki does she really wants him to stay away!
I think that line would defo fix her!
Oh the other day u were patting ur back na!..coz it came on tv!
U know what I think they planned to show PMS without saras proposing Han!..that would be disaster of a guilty feeling I tell u if that happened!..
I am sure they read here Han..
Yea Saras is terrified I tell u ..only open space day time mulakat Han!..crowded area is a plus!.. 😆

Jaanu🤗 This is the loveliest make up session SaMud can have. Loved loved loved it. I remember you saying once you are more comfortable with French than English but i am impressed honestly. You are either being too humble or kidding. This piece of work is fab and the language is simple yet it goes right to the heart. You are very good in expressing feelings, keep it up buddy. I have bookmarked all you OS on SaMud.
5 ⭐️ for the french teacher👏
Coming to the story now:
Loved the portrayal of emotions in the beginning. Loved how you justified Kumud's harsh behavious towards Saras but absolutely loved your Saras. I would expect the same from him. He is way too sensible and loves Kumud too much to let go easily.

Originally posted by: archanamanav

Of course yaar!..make up session is top class!..coz I am sure her answer is no if he asks ki does she really wants him to stay away!
I think that line would defo fix her!
Oh the other day u were patting ur back na!..coz it came on tv!
U know what I think they planned to show PMS without saras proposing Han!..that would be disaster of a guilty feeling I tell u if that happened!..
I am sure they read here Han..
Yea Saras is terrified I tell u ..only open space day time mulakat Han!..crowded area is a plus!.. 😆

Hi dear how are you?
Your friend is on a roll isn't she?
I remembered her OS too when Saras was proposing. Cool Jaanu.
Saras terrified to be alone with Kumud now. Hahaha!! Sure he will the poor chap after the drama Kumud made him witnessed😆

Originally posted by: archanamanav

Of course yaar!..make up session is top class!..coz I am sure her answer is no if he asks ki does she really wants him to stay away!
I think that line would defo fix her!
Oh the other day u were patting ur back na!..coz it came on tv!
U know what I think they planned to show PMS without saras proposing Han!..that would be disaster of a guilty feeling I tell u if that happened!..
I am sure they read here Han..
Yea Saras is terrified I tell u ..only open space day time mulakat Han!..crowded area is a plus!.. 😆

Oh yes my OS Trust me had some glimpses of what was shown on TV when Saras was proposing. Just s coincidence of course!! 😆 but still I can cash a lil big on it right? 😛
Now there will only b PDA nothing gonna b private! 😉