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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: IAmAaru

chand 1234 : WOW! thanks for giving me such feedback! goona update soonish! hopefully big update! <3


Waiting for the upd! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Enjoyed reading the 2nd chapter! :)
I can see the story progressing. Keep updating dear :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aaru, why you no reply me?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: .Destiny.

Aaru, why you no reply me?


Haww Meri Monkey EMO :*
I wanted to give a BIG WAALA UPDATE AND THEN reply to you!!!😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Am really sorry for mera LATE updates.. Kinda in the middle of the exams! And I Know I give you chotu chotu updates.. but.. I tried writing a long one this time! agle time I will make this more longer PAKKA Promise!
I dedicate this part to My Partner Prachi aka RK aka Destiny.. without whom I would have have never have had confidence in me or would have never continued writing1 love you so much!

Chapter 3 The Glint in Her Eyes

'Saras beta'. Those were the first words that Vidyut kaka uttered when he saw the tall handsome man entering into his room. Saras was shocked to know that his kaka still recognized him after those long years of separation.

'kaka..'

'tumne kya socha ki mein tumhe pehchaan hi nahi paunga...tu jitne bhi bade ho jaye.. mere liye to tu abhi bhi woh chota sa ladka hai jo roj mere god mein beithke khana khata tha'

Tears swelled up in his eyes to hear such love in his Kaka's voice and eyes. It made him hope a little that a little love still existed in this world. He went and sat near his Kaka.

'Kaise ho app ab?'

'Mein to ab bilkul theek hoo.. ab tujhe dekhe ke aisa mahsoos kar raha hoon jaise mujhe kuch nahi hua hai...Dekha saraswathi..mene bola tha na .. mera beta hume kabhi bhi nahi bhoolega...' he called out to maasi maa as she entered the room with a glass of water in her hand .

The smile on her face, the love in his kaka's voice all made him realize that things were not all bad in his life. And he pitied himself that he had missed out the most good time in his life just living with them.

The Dubai life had made him such a mechanical man.. not caring for anyone.. after his mother's death he had become more stubborn, more cruel and harsh .. even with his father. But just coming here.. and being in the house that his mother grown up brought such peace into his mind.

After the usual casual exchanges and a lot of laughter with his Kaka , maasi maa came in.

'Arey saari baatein ek din mein hi khatam karegoge kya.. itne door se aaaya hai.. kuch der toh isse sone do...'

'ha ha.. ye to mein bhool hi gaya.. Ja beta.. nahake .. kuch khake.. soke yaha phir se aa ja na..'

"kaka.. fikar mat karo.. mein to yaha kuch din rahke hi jaunga..' Saras added with a smile 'Aap abhi rest karo.. mein jaldi hi aaunga'.. he added and left the room with Maasi ma.

He entered the room which maasi maa told him.. his old room.All those memories came flooding back into his eyes. He closed his eyes ... the smell of it brought him back memories.. his mothers face and sound dominating the scenes... he had wanted to forget all that but now he knew that these were the memories that made him live on.

He was made to come back into the real life scenario when he heard a voice shouting

'Arey.. koi hai waha pe.. ek minute ke liye to yaha aao.'

The voice was sweet but yet harsh, calm but yet hyper, womanly but yet childish... He looked around for the source .. and he saw a shadow standing in the small room that was previously his toy room. He entered it and saw that it was filled with his old stuffs. He turned to the right and saw the source of that sound...with a broom by her side.. constantly rubbing her eyes in irritation.. He saw the pink dupatta... his heart raced...her slightest movement made her paayal clicker. ..the sound drawing him near to her..

'Koi hai toh mere aankh se ye raakshash kko baahar nikalo warna mein raakshasi ban jaungi'!

The dialogue made him smirk a little and he slowly turned her . His hands automatically pulled her by her waist and he made her open her eyes and he slowly blowed into it not wanting to hurt her by his slightest action. She slowly opened her eyes , batted her eyelashes for some seconds.. making sure that she was okay and finally she opened her eyes.. her eyes... He felt that it was the best thing that he ever saw.. they where slightly brown but from an angle it became stark black that made them look more beautiful. It had a hidden glint in it and he knew that he is going to fall in love with the glint sooner or later..

'Kumud...'

Massi Maa's sound seemed distant but it was more than enough to awaken him from the trance that he had fallen into..and he became quickly aware of the fact that he was standing a little too close to her and withdrew his hand from her waist. Suddenly her name struck him and he looked at her in quizzical manner..

'kumud? Woh jo mere aam ke peeche hamesha padi thi?'

"Kyun.. mein WOH aam ki ladki nahi ban sakti?'

He just looked at her with a boyish smile and said

'Sach.. tu koi aam ladki nahi hai..'

He went out of the room leaving her completely taken aback and to her surprise blushing like anything by his last sentence!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
First one to comment ;) UNRES

Awww Cute and Short Update (kabhi lamba bhi likha kar)

But its very sweet ..'Aankh se rakshash ko nikalo varna Rakshasi ban jaungi" 🤣 ...SO sweet I love the portrayal of SARAS in it ...Bingo Update :) :)


Edited by Sumana123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
It was sweet :) Update soon! SaMud <33
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
It was feel good update!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yayyy , mill gaye dono !!!
I simply loved the update and thank god lamba update diya :P
It was lovely dovely update !!! <3
Awesome !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vidyut Kaka recognized Saras...nice😃
The voice was sweet but yet harsh, calm but yet hyper, womanly but yet childish... He looked around for the source .. and he saw a shadow standing in the small room that was previously his toy room. He entered it and saw that it was filled with his old stuffs. He turned to the right and saw the source of that sound...with a broom by her side.. constantly rubbing her eyes in irritation.. He saw the pink dupatta... his heart raced...her slightest movement made her paayal clicker. ..the sound drawing him near to her..

^^I love the way you've described stuff in this paragraph😉

His hands automatically pulled her by her waist and he made her open her eyes and he slowly blowed into it not wanting to hurt her by his slightest action. She slowly opened her eyes , batted her eyelaashes for some seconds.. making sure that she was okay and finally she opened her eyes.. her eyes... He felt that it was the best thing that he ever saw.. they where slightly brown but from an angle it became stark black that made them look more beautiful. It had a hidden glint in it and he knew that he is going to fall in love with the glint sooner or later..

^^Awww😳 I can imagine hw the scene wud be *dreams*
nd I luv their convo!😆
Thnx fr the PM!😃
Upd soon!! ;)

Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago

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