SaMud ss P & P

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Pamalo

@Pamalo

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Posted: 12 years ago

HEY every1 im writing my 1st ss so plz bear with me.😳 in this ss saras had 4given kumud 4 the lake incident & had started 2 fall 4 her.

CHAPTER-1

Saras in his room:

Kumud bahot acchi hai woh courageous hai aur innocent bhi,natkat hai aur mature bhi.thoda gusse wali bhi hai aur proud bhi lekin bahot sweet bhi.Uski awaaz,ghunghru,kam...ahem ahem baatein mujhe yahaan lekar aayi aur jab meine uski chehra dhekha toh aisa laga ki sabse khoobsoorat ladki hai ye(mom se bhi jyada).Thank god meine kaka se nahi bataya ki mein usse reject karne aaya tha.Ab mujhe kumud se batana hoga ki maine apna fisala badal liya.Kal subha usse bata doonga lekin ek PROPOSAL ki tarah.Par ek proposal kaise karenge Sunny se poochna padega usse toh bahot experience hai😉 nahi nahi woh kuch jyada hi keh dega mein khud apne tarike se karuga.Kya kumud mujhe accept karegi?Obviously usne meri aankhen dhek kar hi haan kar di woh kyun mujhe accept nahi karegi.Kal teerece par usse bula kar keh doonga.😃

precap:

kumud rejects his proposal😭.

o.k.guyz i noe mujhe chappal tamator padne wali hai.sorry i noe i wud hve disaapionter u ppl.Only if u ppl want i'll continue this warna im stopping it here itself.

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megz10

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Posted: 12 years ago

hahaha...no chappal tamatr...dear...i relli want yu to continue!!!

it was nyc!!👍🏼

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Pamalo

@Pamalo

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: megz10
hahaha...no chappal tamatr...dear...i relli want yu to continue!!!
it was nyc!!👍🏼

thanks megha bt i'll seee the response & then 1ly will continue

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kajal juneja

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Posted: 12 years ago

it awesome pls cont soon and pm me too!

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Pamalo

@Pamalo

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Posted: 12 years ago

so guyz here is the 2nd part.

CHAPTER-2

Next morning:

Saras comes out of the room & sees Kumud showing aarthi to krishnaji.He thinks''mein Kumud ko bata deta hoon ki woh mujhe terrace mein aadha gnta badh mile".She comes with the aarthi plate to him

saras:Kumud mujhe terrace mein aadha ganta baadhmilo mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.

without waiting 4 her reply he went off.She was angry tht he didnt wait 4 her reply yet confused.

Kumud in mind"arre aise kaise jaa sakta hai usne mujhse poocha bhi nahi ki kya mein aa sakthi hoon ya nahi.par woh mujhse kya baat karna chahta hai?

HALF-AN HOUR LATER:

Saras is waiting &Kumud comes

Kumud:kya hua tumne mujhe yahan kyun bhulaya?

Saras:Kumud actually meine bahot socha tha aur meine yeh decision liya hai ki mein tumse shaadi karunga kyunki mujhe tum pasand ho aur i noe tum meri is phaisle khush hogi hi haina afterall tumne pehle hi haan kar di na.

Kumud is 1st happy bt hearing the last line she got angry

Kumud:How dare you tumne mujhe for granted liya kya pehle naa kiya aur ab haan keh rahe ho kyatumhe kya laga tum kuch bhi karogr aur mein kuch nahi kahoongi nahi Mr.Saraswatichandra tum is rishtey ke liye haan keh sakhte ho par mein nahi.Meine kaha na is rishtey ke shuruwat tumhare naa se huwa aur khatam meri naa se😡.

Saras:Kumud mera kehne ka woh matlab nahi tha woh mein...

Kumud:Bas mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai chale jao yahan se mere saamne bhi mat aana..

And she runs from there and Saras stands there heartbroken🥺

Saras i mind''yeh meine kya kar diya mein yeh kehna chaahta tha ki mein usse pyaar karta hoon aur mein yeh kya keh diya aur toh aur ab woh mujhe aur galat samjh rahi hai.Mujhe pehle hi Sunny se pochna chahiye tha ki kaise propose karte hain ab mein kya karoon😕?Yahan rukkar usse manaun ya chale jana chahiye...nahi mein kahi nahi jaaunga Kumud mein tumhe manakar apna banakar hi rahunga yeh mera vaada hai tumse.

Come on Saraswatichandra tum yeh kar sakthe ho.😊

PRECAP:GUMAN'S ENTRY😈

Guyz plz share ur views plz tell me hw it was criticisms bhi manzoor hai aur actuakky mein yeh ss ka naam &P isiliye rakha cz i', gonna base this on JANE AUSTEN'S PRIDE & PREJUDICE NOVEL.