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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks buddies itne pyare comments ke liye🤗🤗

Daksh tho naina ke bina nahi rehsakata..kahi par bhi😉..its evident from his eyes..wahi apne FF mein bahar laane ki try kar rahithi..😛.I love him when he takes name of naina in unconscious/ drunken state..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey everyone🤗...long time se none frm me rite...xms he isliye😛...ye wala jaldi me likha he, not exactly my usual 4mat...

Ok so am assuming they are in a hotel somewhere away from all the madness. KP has someone to meet, so he takes Naina along, and they've made it a weekend deal so they can have some time off together...

So KP comes back in the eve, having met his client after lunch (don't ask me before lunch Mr. And Mrs. KP ne kya kiya😳) and finished things up on that end. He's brought dinner (why because he has no plans to eat out at all😆) and a little something for her (bad me reveal kiya jayega😉), walks into their suite, calls out to her- no response.

"Naina?" he calls out again, checks the bedroom, the balcony, everywhere lekin no Naina. KP goes into mini panic mode and pulls out his cell to call her. The phone rings from somewhere nearby. The bedroom? He rushes back in...Sure enough, the phone's on the nightstand! He whirls around, fully intending to make a beeline for the door and go looking for her, when door opens and she walks in, all smiles.

One part angry, one part worried and two parts relieved, he walks up to her in full KP mode.

D : Kaha gayi thi tum...

She tries to explain, mildly surprised at the outburst but he cuts her off.

D : Batake to jati...Phone kar ke ja sakti thi na? Aur phone bhi yahi pe chod diya tumne...Tumhe nahi pata me kitna- tumhe kuch ho jata tho-

N : (placating) Daksh...Daksh pls shant ho jao, me kahi nahi gayi thi...

D : Lekin tum-

N : Daksh...(touches his cheek) Kuch nahi hua tha... (he takes in a deep breath, holding in the rest of his angst with that) Bas me yaha baithke bore ho gayi thi, socha tumhare ane tak choti si walk par jau...

He pulls her in for a tight hug, before she can say the rest. "Walk par."

N : Hmm. Tum kab aye the?

He tilts his hand without letting her go, looks at his watch. "5 minute pehle?"

N : Bas...itna shor-gul panch minute ke liye...

D : (incredulous tone) Mujhe wo panch minute nai, kuch aur hi laga tha...Pagal ho gaya tha me...

N : KP...(pyar se) me kehti hu na tumse...tumhe chod ke kahi nahi jaungi.

D : (gentle squeeze) Jane bhi nahi dunga.

N : (pulls back a little) tum kyu late hue vaise?

D : (sheepish smile) Me bhi...walk par gaya tha.

N : Kitne bure ho tum. (hits him playfully) Khud bhi gaye, aur mujhe daat rahe ho.

D : Nahi wo...actuali me wapis paidal aya tha, bas...

N : (laughs) Chodo na daksh me bas aise hi keh rahi thi... Acha suno, kal sham ko jaye walk par? Bahot maza ayega.

D : (nods)Tum jo kaho. (draws her closer) Bas tum phir kabhi mujhe aise mat darana...

N : I'm sorry...( presses a kiss onto his heart ) Repeat nahi karungi. Promise.

Looks up, smiles at him.

He notices she has something in her other hand, something that's right now being crushed between them...

D : Ye kya hai?

N : (holds it up) Yeh...(laughs gently) Tumhare liye layi thi...(its a bunch of wildflowers she'd picked on her walk back...) Sab dab gaye...tumhari galti he.

He looks at the flowers, then looks back at HIS flower, with her soft, blooming smile and angel eyes...

He draws her in for a kiss.

D : Me bhi kuch laaya tha tumhare liye...(strokes her cheek)

N : (thodi si excited) Acha...? Kya laye ho...? Dikhao mujhe...

D : (shakes his head) Baad mein... (pulls her in for another one)

N : (softly, between kisses) Batao na...

Dakshu smiles "abhi nahi...Baad mein..." and gets back to the job in hand😳...

... contd ...

click 4 part 2...😊

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb yaar👏

U brought out love of dakshu for naina so beautifully and I can imagine the whole scene😍.😍.loved loved it...Shubha aur khoobsurat banane ke liye.😛.ek jaadu ki jappi in rupu's language🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

lucky...thnk u 2🤗🤗🤗🤗...

mere style me bhi keh deti hu😛

😊😊😊😊😊😊

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Agree with Lucky😊... Super duper hai😛... So sweet and cute Dakshu is.😳... All mixed emotions balanced perfectly.👏...Bechare wild flowers ki kya halat kar di dono ne😆😆 Loved it Loved it.👏...
thank u thank u sweety 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
a jadu ki jhappi from me too 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
rupu...wow...itne sare😳...thnx sweety...tere liye bhi🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys🤗...lo aa gayi me part 2 lekar😊😊😊...nd thoda zyada lamba ho gaya, isliye part3 bhi he, don mind😛

Dakshna are in bed ok...Dakshu upar. He's playing with her hair, picking a stray petal (u kno kaha se rite😛) from here and there, trying to talk her into the next thing on his agenda : a shower, and Naina is about to say yes, ki the phone rings (ha, ha kebab me haddi, i kno😆...par kya kare)...Halfway down for a kiss, Daskhu freezes.

N : Daksh...

D : Mat kaho. Mujhe pata hai.

N : (smiles) Tum normali notic nahi karte ho...

D : Hmm. Par iss bar pata nahi kab se baj raha he...

N : (mildly shocked) Kya?

D : Normali tum notic karti ho, nai?

N : Me...busy thi☺️

D : Haa, me bhi😆...

The phone buzzes incessantly...

N : Daksh...

D : (gets off the bed) acha theek he...kaha gaya? Yahi kahi tha...

Umm guys, mayb it got knocked onto the floor, jus don't ask me how😉

Daksh emerges frm under the bed. "Ye raha."

Naina takes it from him(no complaints, use pata hai kaise neeche gira😛). "Oh no! 11 misd calls!"

Dakshu sits on the bed. "Kiska?"

N : (pushes her hair back) Mrs. Singh. Bahot nervous type ki hai...

He tucks her hair behind her ear. "Hmm."

N : Daksh...tum naha ke ao na, mujhe inhe call karna hi hoga ab...

D : No way Naina...bad me call kar lena. Ab chalo tum.

N : Pls Daksh...rude lagega...wo kabse call kar rahi he...

D : Naina...

N : Please? Me aa jaungi...

He huffs and gets up, muttering. "Wahi floor pe rehne deta use..."

Naina has hit the dial button, and looks up. "Daksh kuch kaha?"

D : Nahi, kuch nahi. Jaldi karo tum.

N : Ha baba...ab jao...

Dakshu is done with his shower and comes out in a white towel...Naina s still on phone...She's trying to calm down an apparently hyper client, and phone tucked between her ear and shoulder, is getting her nightdress and a towel out. Dakshu ke PJs are alredi on the bed...

N : Ha Mrs.Singh...ap bilkul tension mat lijiye...Ho jayega. Me kal sham tak vapis aa jaungi.

Dakshu frowns.

He comes up from behind, puts his arms around her.

N : ...Ap chaho to Monday subhe ko me apko venue dikha sakti hu...(bats his hands off cos she's finding it difficult to concentrate😛) Mrs. Singh, ek minute...

He parts her hair, puts it to one side...

N : Daksh...kya kar rahe ho tum...

D : Call hold pe he? (drops a kiss on her shoulder)

N : Ha...Daksh pls...ek minute wait nahi kar sakte?

D : Nahi. Bahot bat kar li Mrs. Singh se... (nuzzles her neck) Baki ka time mera hai...

N : Daksh...(pleads) adha minute...call hold pe he...

D : Theek he. 30 seconds😉

N : Ha Mrs.Singh. Ha...apni beti ko bhi le ayiyega...(Dakshu starts his badmashi again😳😆😆) Mrs. Singh...me apko kal subhe call karti hu ab...Kuch...important hai. Bye.

Dakshu takes the phone from her, tosses it onto the bed and turns her around.

N : Daksh...Meri phone...

D : Mujse zyada to us phn ko time milta hai tumhare sath.

N : Acha? Tho leke kyu diya?

D : Kab se ro raha tha, taras kha ke neeche se utha diya...wahi rehne deta, to tum mere sath ati...

N : (hits him) Bahot badmash ho tum. Pata nahi MRs.Singh ko kya laga hoga...

D : (laughs) Kyu? Wapis se call karke clear karna hai kya kuch😆...

N : (hits him again) KP...

He laughs, she laughs, and she pulls him down...short, sweet kiss😳...

N : Me bas do minute me aa jaungi ok...

D : Do minute. Usse zyada hua to...

N : Case kar dena😛...Ab jane do...

He pulls her back to him for another one, and she returns the favour happily...Thodi der bad, both are fuzzy and out of breath and pull back for air...Naina, all cute pink, reaches out for the towel and the nightgown she'd laid out on the bed, and goes off.

Dakshu smiles, turns to the bed- some of the flowers are on the floor...He scoops up one crushed petal and smiles at it, remembering- and then he remembers her gift. So he goes to get it.

He comes back to the bedroom, picks up his night shirt - only to find out that its HER night dress, not his😉...

... contd ...

click 4 part 3...😊

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
kya kahu yaar..awesome.👏.luv this naughty dakshu,😳,kitna pyara hain😍..and this mrs singh kabab mein haddi,aur phone bhi...😡😡

And 30 sec to end a call..too much haina dakshu😉..loved it..🤗🤗the whole scene..thumbs up👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
heylo again🤗 here's part 3...ab iske aur instalmnts nahi ayenge, don wori😆 now u guys kno na ki kitnaaa lamba ho gaya tha😛...hav fun😊...

So he gets her gift (choti si pouch me), comes back to the bedroom, picks up his night shirt-only to find out that its HER night dress, not his...he starts laughing.

D : Naina...

N : (washroom se)Ha baba...bas nikal rahi hu...Kya hu- (there is a short pause) Daksh...

D : (almost laughing)Ha...?

N : Wo...meri nightdress bahar reh gayi...

D : Acha...? Andar kya leke gayi thi tum...

N : Tumhara hai.

D : (laughs)Ha, to kya hua.

N : Daksh...

D : Bolo.

N : Meri night dress do.

D : Dhyan kaha tha tumhara...

N : Tumne distract kiya tha mujhe.

D : Me khud hi distracted tha😛

N : Daksh pls mazaq band karo aur do na...

D : Nahi. Mera wala hi pehan lo.

N : To kya tum mera pehnoge.

D : Kyu? me aise hi theek hu. (sits down on the bed, smiling) Vaise tum khud akar le sakti ho ...

Naina opens the washroom ka door and comes out in this white silk shirt (don't kick me...its modest enough😛...), annoyed. "Daksh tumhe to me-" she stops, stares (he's still in his fluffy towel), then starts again. " Tumne change kyu nahi ki ab tak?"

D : Mera shirt koi le gaya tha (gets up, walks towards her)

N : Acha. (takes a step back)

D : (nods) vapis do, me pehan lunga.

N : (another step back) Aur koi shirt nahi he kya.

D : Mujhe ye wali chahiye.

N : Rehne do, tum aise hi theek ho.

D : Par problem to thodi der pehle tumhe hi thi na😆...(makes a grab for her, misses)

N : (skirts the bed) NAhi. Abhi mujhe koi problem nahi he.

D : Mujhe bhi, Tum isme zyada achi lagti ho😉.(she climbs the bed, grabs the gown and gets down on the other side, he follows suit)

N : Ha, pata hai. Tum to aise hi kahoge. Vaise bhi mere night gowns ki kya halat kar dete ho tum...Tumhari to yahi philosophy hogi ki paise kyu waste karne he nightgown par jab tum-

D : (corners her, finali ; she drops the gown) Jab me, kya?

N : (slightly breathless) 😳Kuch nahi. Hath me kya hai?

D : Tumhari gift (holds it out of reach). Ek shart he meri.

N : (dubious) Kya...?

D : (cutie smile😊)Tum change nahi karogi.

N : Kya? Daksh tum...(small slap on his wrist) Do mujhe. Kab se keh rahe ho ki baad me dikhaoge...

D : Nahi. Pehle tum meri man lo, phir😛...

Naina changes tactics😆..."Please Daksh...?"

Dakshu bechara is in semi meltdown, shakes his head again.

N : (touches his cheek)Please...?

D : Not fair Naina...(opens the little pouch) tumhe pata hai ki tum pls kehti ho to me...

N : Ha, pata hai😛...ab do na...

Dakshu takes out this bracelet, puts it on her wrist (check it out guys...aisa hi kuch : http://www.bulstore.eu/338-493-large/lovely-rose-bracelet-party-gift-purple.jpg😊)

N : Wow...

D : (no-big-deal tone)Theek hi hai.

N : Kya...? Sach me...(holds it up, admiring it) bahot cute hai...

D : Tumne pehna hai, isliye (pyara sa kiss on her wrist😊)

N : Ha, tum to aise hi kahoge.

D : Kyu?

N : Kyunki tum thode se pagal ho...lekin mujhe tumhara pagalpan bhi bahot cute lagta hai...(peck on his cheek)

D : Ha, pagal hu...(head butt😍) Tumhare pyaar me...lekin ek bat kahu...(toying with her damp hair) Abhi iss room me sabse zyada cute to tum hi ho...

N : (cute pink😳) Chup karo KP. Phir se shuru ho gaye tum...

D : Are...acha theek he, muje ek cheez dikhao jo tumse bhi zyada pyara hai...(she opens her mouth, but he cuts her off, smiling) mujhe chod kar.

N : Tumhara naam nahi lene wali thi😛.

Daksh gives her an oh-really expression. She smiles, turns his face to a portrait on the wall, of this pyaari si, cute si angel smiling down at them.

D : (smiles) Pyaari hai, (leans in, and soflty) par tumse zyada nahi.

N : 😳Thank you...

D : Itna dry thank you? Nahi chalega...

Naina shakes her head No, smiling.

D : Kyu?

N : (soflty) Koi dekh lega.

D : (looks around, den back at her) Kaun?

She looks at the portrait, then back at him, still smiling.

Dakshu smiles, covers the angel's eyes with one hand, pulls Naina closer with the other...

She puts her arms about his neck, and gives him one soft peck on his lips, but he's having none of that...pulls her back to him...

Dheere dheere his other hand comes down too, and he pulls her closer still...and Dakshna are lost to the world😍, as the angel on the wall looks on, smiling...

ohk...done...all parts😛 pata hai zyada lamba ho gaya, but i jus cudn help t😊...acha dis s t frm me 4 sum time nw...xms, xms all around😛...
loads f smil😊s,
aish
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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd...
Daksh also realises that they had been on floor😉 romancing😳

Naina; samaj mein aagaya na ki kaha par hain...Mujhe yakeen nahi hota ki raat bar hum yahi par..😆..
Daksh; kyu, acha nahi laga floor pe romance.😆.😉.(naughty tone winking at her)
Naina; maine aisa tho nahi kaha.😳 (naina gets up)..lekin sab tumhari wajah se(
Daksh gets up; maine kya kiya?😲
Naina ; kya zaroorat thi gud gudi karne ki...
Daksh; haan..kya zaroorat thi gudgudi karne ki.😆...tumne bhi tho kiya..aur movie dekhne nahi diya..😉
Naina stands up ; maine dekhne nahi diya ya tumne? badmaashi tumne shuru kiya tha( takes of pillow and goes and sits on bed)
Daksh also gets up and..picks the pillow, bed sheet and and settles on bed..
Daksh; aur tumne khatam kiya.😉...aur rahi baat movie ki tho tumne mujhe, aur maine tumhe dekhne nahi diya..kyu ab hissab bara bar haina..😛

Saying this daksh falls on bed..looking at naina..

Daksh; waise swt hrt tumhare gusse ki wajah kya hain? gud gudi kiya iss liye ya movie dekhne nahi diya ya phir floor pe...😲
Naina looks at him ;gusse ki koi baat nahi..lekin...
Daksh; pulls her on to him😉; Lekin??

Naina; ( spreads her arms around him)ye soch rahithi ki tumhare smart dimmag mein gudgudi karne ka idea aur FR ka idea itni dher se kyu aaya..?😆😆

Daksh is surprised at naina's answer;😲 and says; hogaya satya nash..poori tarh se bigad chuki ho tum😆...mujhe pehle se bigadliya aur ab tum bhi...

Naina; lifts up her head; sab tumhara effcet hain...😛
Daksh;smiles; acha..! tho chalo phir se floor par chalte hain aur..😉
Naina; chup karo daksh//( gives him a small hit and hugs him)

Daksh;( playing with her hair); waise kal morning walk par chale?😉
Naina; good idea..chalte hain..jabse yaha aaye hain..bahut late ut rahe hain
Daksh; aur tumhe pata hain na late kyu ut rahe the?😆

Naina' lil shy;😳 haan pata hain.( lifts up her head and looks at daksh),,.aur ab tum sone doge tabhi ut payenge kal jaldi
Daksh; tumhe nahi lagta ye dialogue mujhe kehna chahiye😆..kyunki asal mein tum mujhe sone nahi detina.😉...Naina gives half kp look..
Daksh; bas bas...mrs kp! ab sojaaye??.

.naina smiles and nods her head and hugs him tightly..🤗 ditto with dakshu.. both slip into sleep...🥱🥱

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