Daksh Ki Deewani (Fanfic) Ch 3

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Prologue:

Naina.

She was the only one on his mind. He gave his heart to her. But, she didn't know. When she was taken by the goon's, he had realized how much he loved her, how much she meant to him. He loved Naina.

He was unwillingly in love with the girl who resided in the hearts of his family members.

But, there was no use of that anymore.

He couldn't love her.

Naina was gone. She left. And she would never come back.

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Chapter One:

Daksh stepped outside and walked to Naina's office. Maybe she would come to work? Maybe she hadn't left him completely.

He opened the door and peered inside, but it was empty. Nobody was inside. "Naina," he called out into the darkness.

He sighed.

Where was she? Where was his Naina?

Ka chalegye tum mujhko chorke? he thought.

It was his fault. He knew he should have stopped her when he had the chance. When she told him that she'd leave, he should have stopped her.

He wished she was lying now, more than ever. He did not want her to go.

He left the office, just as Akul (one of her assistant's) came.

"Sir, how are you?" Akul asked.

"Theek hoo," he said, "Where's Naina?"

Akul stared at him strangely.

"She went to her mother," Akul told him. "She gave Akruti her office, and I'm now Akruti's assistant."

Daksh nodded, "Uske ma ke paas? Where is that?"

Akul told him the location and Daksh went running to the train station.

He was on a mission to bring Naina back for the happiness of his family, and he would not leave her alone until she agreed to go back with him.


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It's really bad, I'm sorry guys! My hindi is also awful. What do you guys think of this story? Should I continue or should I trash it?

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Daksh knocked on the door self-consciously, wondering if Naina's mom would open it. He still wondered why Naina lied about her mom that time when Anjali came to Mumbai, but he knew it must have been for a good reason. Naina always put others before herself.

The door opened and an elderly lady (Radha) opened the door.

"May I help you?" she asked him.

"Yeah, I'm looking for Naina. Is she here?" he inquired.

Radha nodded, "Come in."

He followed the elderly woman inside as she called for Naina. It was a big house. It looked as sophisticated as Anjali, Naina's mother.

Naina came down the stairs, and had a surprised expression upon seeing Daksh.

Radha looked at Naina and then Daksh, "Chai?" she asked.

"Rehne dijiay," Naina told Radha, "Me samalti hoon."

Radha nodded and left.

"Tum?!" Naina exclaimed. "What are you doing here?"

Daksh looked at her and felt his cheeks burn.

"Naina," he said, "Mein... mein... tumhe... wapaas..."

"Nahin," Naina interrupted. "I'm staying here."

"Par Naina, sab -- Ai, they all miss you a lot."

Naina shook her head. "You wanted me to go, and now you want me back? What is it that you want Daksh?"

Daksh wanted to say you, but he caught his tongue before he could say it.

"Mere saat chalo," he told her, "Abhi. Samaan lekar Mumbai chalte hai."

Naina shook her head, "How can I leave like this?"

Daksh walked up to Naina, took her wrist and started pulling her towards the door.

"Theek hai, you won't understand that way."

"Daksh!" Naina exclaimed and pulled her wrist away from his grasp. "Tum paagal hogaye! What are you doing?"

Mein to pyaar me paagal hogaye hoon, he thought.

"Sorry Naina," he said sadly. "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to behave this way."

She took a deep breath and nodded. "It's okay. Should I make tea?"

"Nahin, theek hain. Mujhe sirf tumhe yeh kehna tha ki... ki... I forgive you."

Naina smiled, "Such?!"

"Haan, mein bhi overreact karra tha. It was only natural of you to think the way you did."

She nodded, "Toh phir, hum phir se dost?"

He smiled, "Haan."

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I'm sorry for my terrible hindi. :) But, here's ch 2. :D Please tell me what you think! :D

Keep writing dear... Its really good.

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Your story line is fine.

I also wish to join with u.

My story line (abt the precap shown on Friday) just for fun only:

In the letter it is written like this:
"now I am too late for the bus... so I am going without telling u. I don't know when can I return..." Daksh wonders on the letter and he becomes too sad. He feels guilty that it is because of him she left the home. He goes for searching her. He drives to the bus station and searchs there. at last he finds her. Seeing her, he shouts at her without bothering it is a public place "apne apkno kya samajhthe ho? chitti chotkar chale jaye to sab solve jayega? aakar car mein baido". Naina wonders and is staring at him like what happened to this Daksh. She looks around and tells.."Daksh.. mein..." He interprets and tells "Jyada sid mat karna... jaakar gadi mein baido..." Naina tries to tell something to him but he is not ready to listen anything. "You see people are looking at us".. Everybody look at them. At last she obeys him. In the car, he asks "agar mujhse kuch problem ho to ghar chotkar chali jaate hein kya?" Naina tells... "Daksh please.... zara meri baat to suno..." he tells "mujhe kuch nahin sunna hein". Her bus has left the station during this time. She tells "yeh tumne kya kiya... mera bus chali gayi.. . I had to reach Ms Nair's house before 11 O clk. ghar chodkar jaane ki baat mujhe ayi-baba se patana nahin paye... mein ne socha Ms Nair ka ghar se vaapas aakar unhein patane ki... " (my Hindi might be very horrible... what I meant is "What did you do? See, my bus has left.. I had to reach Ms Nair's house before 11 O clk. I couldn't say the matter of leaving house to ayi-baba. I thought to say them after returning from Ms Nair's house.) Daksh wonders... "so you.... you were going to Ms Nair's house??!!!" Naina tells "Anh.." Daksh with a great relief.... leaned to the seat with a smile... Then Naina asks "can I go now?? otherwse, i will be late" He asks "how do u go??, your bus has gone. I will drop u there" Naina tells... "no thanks, I will go by taxi... you have a lot of works here" Daksh looks at her and calls.. "Naina...." Naina looks at him and says "Ok..."

Thank you so much for the replies guys! Unfortunately I don't do PM lists since I don't have that much time on my hands! And ntsindia, your storyline is great! I really like it, and I think that might be similar to what might happen. xD

Anyways, I'm going to continue this story now!

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He looked into Naina's eyes.

"Naina, ab to wapaas awo please," he said, almost expectantly. But, he wasn't expecting much from her. This was Naina. The stubborn girl who he had fallen in love with.

"Are Daksh, kaise? Mein hya aa to gaya. Ab me chhor nahin sakta."

Daksh sighed.

"Please? Ab no kaha to mein chalijaunga. Aur tumhe akela chorunga," he said.

She bit her lip.

"Aane chahti hoon. Theek hai, I'll talk to my mom. Wait here," she told him, and ran up the stairs.

He waited for a good hour, and then she came down with her bags.

"Mangaye," she told him. "It took some convincing, but maangaye. I promised I would visit her."

He smiled happily. Naina was returning to his - to her home with him.

"Toh chale?" he asked.

She nodded and they took the train back to Mumbai.

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Sorry it's short and not good. And my hindi is terrible. If you have any pointers, any tips on improving it, then please do not hesitate to let me know! I would love if you had tips. :D Thank you for everything! :)

Wat happens next? Pls update soon dear.