*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#951

Originally posted by: nividances

Not at all Kelly. I think the show's ending left everyone disappointed. They totally could have shown a more polished ending, but it is what it is. I wrote a bit earlier last week, but I just didn't have the inspiration to finish the update. I've been working on it today with a half-hearted attempt. I hope I get my muse back soon. 😔

Nivi you right we all in the same feeling. I try work on my own stuff but I am too disappointed that I all most cant do noting

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Posted: 10 years ago

#952

Love the update, the engagement, flashback the knowledge that Rachna's parents knew and approved of Rabir's marriage nicely done a chocolate and strawberry moment for me to cover the abrupt ending of the show.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#953

nice update , continue soon .Thanks for pm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#954

Originally posted by: unishaz
good going. continue soon. thanks for pm.

Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed it. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#955

Originally posted by: RaBir
Wow Nivi! First thank you for giving such beautiful update. You get better with each part. I love choice of cloth for Rachna sari is beautiful and earrings actually I have something similar.

Rest of update with engagement and flashback was too good. So Rachna parent know about marriage but they for that same day to sad. All this plan by Mayank to get Rachna for him and gayatri do it to make happy him.

You do good writing Nivi. Continue soon.

P.S. Oh I agree you. SSLK ending too disappoint me also. I no like it so happy you give us Rabir wedding. At least we enjoy here.

Thank you Poonam. I'm glad that you liked this part. Originally it was only going to be the straight-forward conversation between Prakash, Rachna, Kabir, and Karan, but I figured it would be more interesting to intersperse the main parts of their convo with glimpses of the engagement. I hope that I meet your expectations when it comes to writing about the wedding.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#956

Originally posted by: crtkelly
Love the update Nivi. It is wonderful to get what was lacking in the serial in your ff. Love that they decided to go on with the engagement ceremony. You wrote it wonderfully. I also love that Rachna's parents had been aware of and had approved of her marriage. Looking forward to the next update.

Thank you Kelly! I think the approval from her parents about her relationship is the type of closure that Rachna was hoping for all along. Glad you liked that part.

More wedding festivities coming up soon. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#957

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey
amziing update
nice Saree
update soon n pm me
take care

Thank you Meenu!

I loved that saree when I first saw it in the google search. I'm just obsessed with that color. 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#958

Originally posted by: Nuritzur

Nivi you right we all in the same feeling. I try work on my own stuff but I am too disappointed that I all most cant do noting

Oh Nurit I can totally understand how you feel. To have loved a couple so much and then have such an patchy ending was completely unexpected. It left such a bad taste in my mouth that I was angry at myself for becoming so obsessed with a fictional show and couple.

Anyways, I hope you enjoy the Rabir wedding in this story. We all have to just move on and find our own enjoyment. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#959

Originally posted by: sb1410
Love the update, the engagement, flashback the knowledge that Rachna's parents knew and approved of Rabir's marriage nicely done a chocolate and strawberry moment for me to cover the abrupt ending of the show.

Thank you Sharlene! Glad you liked the update.

I think everyone who liked the show is having the same type of reaction about its conclusion.

But worry not, I will try my best to make up for the lack of Rabir romance in the actual show by incorporating it into this story. 😊