*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1) - Page 84

Originally posted by: nividances

Glad that I managed to surprise you with the twist.

I will post the next update quite soon, hopefully by tomorrow. 😊

Excellent, looking forward to it. Funny enough I started working on the next one ( that unconventional proposal) on my lunch hour at work, so I am pretty sure how it will go. Hope to be posting my next one tomorrow as well 😊

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Excellent, looking forward to it. Funny enough I started working on the next one ( that unconventional proposal) on my lunch hour at work, so I am pretty sure how it will go. Hope to be posting my next one tomorrow as well 😊

What a twist Nivi! So Rachna parents save Kabir dad. But why gayatri didn't find him until now? Want to find out what happen next. Excited for tomorrow update.

Also again you put everything nicely.

"It seems that destiny had begun to build the path for a love story that would begin in Benaras exactly 10 years later, joining together two strangers who were already unknowingly seamlessly entwined together by the darkness of their individual pasts."

You write this line before but it make more sense now. Beautiful I like how you connect all thing together.

Originally posted by: RaBir

What a twist Nivi! So Rachna parents save Kabir dad. But why gayatri didn't find him until now? Want to find out what happen next. Excited for tomorrow update.

Thanks Poonam. Glad you liked the twist. Yes Gayatri didn't know about Prakash until now...there's a reason for it. Will try to post the next update tomorrow. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: RaBir

Also again you put everything nicely.

"It seems that destiny had begun to build the path for a love story that would begin in Benaras exactly 10 years later, joining together two strangers who were already unknowingly seamlessly entwined together by the darkness of their individual pasts."

You write this line before but it make more sense now. Beautiful I like how you connect all thing together.

Thanks for picking up on that. Glad you like the small connections I put in...I think they make the story flow better. Thank you so much for the huge compliment! 😳
Acha lagta hai sunke...makes writing and posting the updates more worthwhile.

Wow nivi great writing.

great
with every part it is getting better and better...

great work

Another piece to the puzzle, both families at connected because of this horrific past. Amazing update.

Originally posted by: Nuritzur

Wow nivi great writing.

Just love it

So the banding between Garg and Triparti start long ago.it was really nice how you connect all the parts together.

So I think Gayatri kill Rachna parents after she know that they help Kabir Father.

but I think maybe he tell him all about her/

any way amazing update.

can wait for the next part

Thanks so much Nurit! Interesting predictions, though I think you may be surprised by what I have coming up. Like I said before I try to make things connect so the story flows well which means that a seemingly pointless flashback or specific dialogue in one part could be a crucial part of the story in the future. I don't know, maybe I make it more complicated than it needs to be but that's just how I am. 😛
The next part will be posted later today.