*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1)

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: RaBir
"destiny brought Rachna to Benaras, weaving the beginnings of a love story that would join together two people who were already entwined together by the darkness of their pasts."

This part best Nivi. I love those words.
I like update good to know about Kabir past. So sad about what all gayatri do with Kabir and Karan. Poor kids but I happy that Rachna know now. Tell next about Kabir dad please it request.

@Bold, Totally agree with you. Nivi definitely has a way with words👏

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Nurit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#662

Wow Nivi! what an update

Look like piyush re enter episode did good to you (who I lie to. it did to all of us)

I like how his father care about his sons and keep them away from Gayatri

I think after Gayatri having an affair with this unknown man she was try to kill their father and he fake his dead. but I sure he was around to be sure that every thing is ok with them.

I like how Kt talk to Gayatri like a young angry man. (too bad he didnt act like this in the show when she destroyed his wedding with rachna)

I think his father back now to keep an eye on Gayatri and that Rachna and Kt Wedding will done with out any disgusting.

I just love this part:

"Years of isolation left Kabir Tripathi shoved into some deep corner of KT's body until of course, destiny brought Rachna to Benaras, weaving the beginnings of a love story that would join together two people who were already entwined together by the darkness of their pasts."

Like dadi say she is pari... she Kt Pari

Thank you nivi for the lovely update

waiting for the next part. thanks for pm me

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 10 years ago

#663

Beautiful and emotional the nerve of that woman, greed no love for her children torture a six year old, only care about materialist things, wealth, and power, having affairs, wow what an example of motherhood and a perfect wife. KT's dad seems to be planning to bring about her downfall and justice for his sons.loved the fact that KT shared his past.

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meenakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#664

suprbb update

lone too

update son n pm me

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Selina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#665

Awesome update nivi

Kabir's mom is so horrible

Thanks 4 the pm

Happy new year

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@nividances

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Posted: 10 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: unishaz
awesome. lovely. thanks for pm. continue soon.

Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: crtkelly
Nivi, read your earlier post that you were going to post another update, and waited...now I can go to bed 😆.

Going to digress first...I agree Piyush's return to SSLK too much! All my favorite flashbacks, and then the end ... and the preview , I'm in RaBir heaven already, like I'm sure you are😉

Anyway, back to the update:

Hat's off to you Nivi. I really enjoyed learning Kabir (and Karan's) backstory. Oh those poor children and that woman😡.

So I'm guessing she was either a threat to or perceived threat to their dad. Perchance did she arrange the accident, or did their father stage it himself...please update soon and let us know.

Thanks for the PM.

Piyush's return has brought the life back into SSLK. I now wait eagerly for the clock to turn 8:30 so I can switch on the tv and watch SSLK (my dad has lost access to CNN for that half hour nowadays). 😆

Thank you! Glad you liked the backstory, and I completely agree with you that Gayatri is just 😡. But she is just an extension of what we saw in the actual show so many moons ago, which makes it easy for my to draw my character sketch of her, though I feel that I've made her a bit more evil in this FF than she was on the actual show. What do you think?

All good predictions from you, let's see what happens in the next update. 😉

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@nividances

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Posted: 10 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: RaBir

Your story too god Nivi I cannot stop read. Going to read next update now.

Thanks so much Poonam! 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: RaBir
"destiny brought Rachna to Benaras, weaving the beginnings of a love story that would join together two people who were already entwined together by the darkness of their pasts."

This part best Nivi. I love those words.
I like update good to know about Kabir past. So sad about what all gayatri do with Kabir and Karan. Poor kids but I happy that Rachna know now. Tell next about Kabir dad please it request.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I will try my best to update as soon as possible and unveil the mystery as well. 😊

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@nividances

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Posted: 10 years ago

#670

Originally posted by: crtkelly
@Bold, Totally agree with you. Nivi definitely has a way with words👏

Thanks so much to you both for the compliments! 🤗

It really makes my day brighter to read such encouraging words even when I know that my posts often have errors and I have a tendency to unnecessarily drag out the scene/story. 😳

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