ITS ALL ABOUT RACHANA FF chap 10 ON PAGE 37 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear mehak I waiting for next part
Pls pls pls update very fast
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is this your first FF 😲 Doesnt seems so 👍🏼

Loved both the chapters.. Just amazing . Love Rajeev more in your FF than in the show 😡 Now dont make me fall for rajna, jaldi se kabir ki entry karao please 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ITS ALL ABOUT RACHANA FF

CHAPTER-3

Rajna was still locked in a heavenly embrace, seeking and finding the love they had been pushing aside for so long .Suddenly Rajeev came back to his senses and tried to break it . rachana too responded with her out of the world smile on her cute face which was a blessing for Rajeev to see since after so much time he was able to see her happy which made him feel more content . To avoid the awkwardness Rajeev shifted his gaze away from rachana to walls of the room and suddenly he stopped at the wall clock.

Rajeev : oh its 3 in the morning ,my flight is at 6 . rachana let me get ready and pack some of the things left and then I will drop u home before leaving for the airport.

Rachana nodded with a slight smile on her face.

Rajna was in car and although there was silence in all the journey but both the souls were content and suddenly the car stopped with a jerk .

Rachana: why u stopped the car sir?

Rajeev :(bend towards rachana with a naughty smile and rachana closed her eyes being surprised on Rajeev act)rachana we reached your home and rajeev opened the car door.

Rachana opened her eyes and looked at her house gate and then met Rajeev eyes and had a LOL moment .both get out of the car .rachna was walking but suddenly come towards Rajeev.

Rachana: Is going away from here necessary Rajeev sir ? i promise that I will still move on and will meet yours and mom dad expectations.

Rajeev: No I want to stay...(after a great pause) in US only .and I have some work there.(holding rachana shoulders) rachana I know that you are strong and wise enough to pay heed to my words but now its my time to move on from here as wannna take only delightful memories of this city ok.

Rachana nodded in a yes and started walking towards the gate but again come back and hugged Rajeev

Rachana : thanks a lot sir for everything.

Rajeev: (kissed her forehead ) believe in yourself rachana and bye now or else I will miss my flight .

Rachana: Bye sir

Rajeev drove away his car for the airport and rachana too walked toward her home.

Rajeev at the waiting room with his diary

Rachana , u made my last night in benaras so beautiful and mesmerizing. i never wanted to tell you all that but see how the destiny make us puppets who dances to its tunes . I know rachana that you wanted me to stay but I am not that strong specially now . Only my heart knows how I gather that strength to say you that I wanna go. You can think me as cold and hard hearted at that time but I couldn't be a wall of sand which will fall apart in front of u in no time .

And although I had given you so much lectures how to move on but the funny thing is that I don't know whether I will also be able to do that or not .But the most best part of this journey with you is that I have convinced you to move ahead for yourself and your career and I know u will do that. Wish u all the best for your life and may in future u get a person who love you forever and may your relation would face no barriers.

BYE RACHANA

And Rajeev is finally gone .

Rachana in night with her diary

Rajeev sir thanks you stopped me from doing a blunder with myself .if you wished ,you would have told me but you controlled yourself just for me .thanks a lot .i don't know whether I loved you or it was just an infatuation but my respect and admiration for you in my eyes have increased more from the last night incidences .the best thing I learnt in the night was that I have to be confident in my capabilities and am no less than anybody else. So never think low about yourself rachana .u lack nothing and just believe your potential . I assure you Rajeev sir and mom dad that I will reach my goal with my hard work.

SVC COLLEGE

After some days , London design school offered a degree course in fashion designing for which there was a competition in svc college .rachana and gunjan saw the london school notice on the board. Rachana participated in the competition and with her hard work she got the admission in London school along with full scholarship .this was the best moment of her life as she put her first step. towards her goal. she even mailed Rajeev regarding her admission to London design school .

IGI AIRPORT

Mayan came with rachana to drop her to the airport . rachna hugged gunjan and mayank and went inside the airport to take her flight . rachna was waiting at the boarding room when she saw Rajeev mail on her phone

Rachana , congratulations for your achievement and . now I will wait for the day when you will design for me ,just kidding .all the best for your journey in design school and congratulations once again .have a safe flight. best wishes rachana

Rachans smiled seeing the mail.

Rachana (in her thoughts) new journey ,new place ,new people and I will handle this all alone .its a start of a new chapter in my life for which I am little nervous but excited too .london,I am coming to explore myself.

And finally her flight took off to London, the place which has wrapped so many surprises for her and the wait is now just for rachna to explore it one by one .

A BIG MANSION IN LONDON

In London , a big mansion is showed which very much look like a villa and a person would die to live in giving a feeling of attainment of heaven .

As we go inside ,a servant is shown knocking on a door holding a tray

Servant: Sir may I come in? your breakfast is ready and here sir with your favourite black coffee with no sugar.

A voice came from inside : come in please and put it on the table

The servant came inside and do as it was told and left the room but the person whose voice was heard dint seem to be seen anywhere .however the room was many a times better than a five star hotel suite with a huge glass window giving the scenic beauty of the swimming pool along a golf ground beside it .there was a king sized bed on which gentle morning rays of sunshine were making their way along with a guitar and piano on the other side of the room which was making the room a heavenly bliss.

Suddenly a person came out from the bathroom and went towards the big window shield facing the swimming pool. The person walked was clad only in a white towel which was slung loosely around his hips and lower body and seemed wet as if he has taken a warm shower right now. His shoulders and upper arms bulged while his long torso was lean and chiseled. His lean torso, narrow hips and the outline of muscular thighs could make any girl weak on her knees , he had a defined frame ,broad shoulders with an alluring presence . he was not looking less than a greek god to die for as a trickle of water had run down his sculpted body . his naked torso was sufficient to seduce any girl that would have come in his way .suddenly the servant shouted from outside

Servant :sir vihaan sir has come down and waiting for you

the person moved and faced towards the door as he showed the contours of his chest down towards his defined abs and greek bodyand told the servant .

voice: tell Vihaan that kabir will be down in few minutes

and finally the wait is over as kabir tripathi got ready for the day ahead unaware of whats going to happen with him

PRECAP-KABIR SAW RACHNA AND ASKED

KABIR: HI MY NAME IS KABIR TRIPATHI YOURS ?

RACHNA(IRRITATED) - GAON KI BEHENJI (MEANS VILLAGE GIRL)...

PHEW ATLAST I INTRODUCED KABIR .A HUGE APOLOGY FOR MAKING YOU ALL WAIT AND DELAYING THE UPDATE AS I HAVE TO THINK HARD TO INTRODUCE HIM SINCE I HAD SO MANY IDEAS BUT FAIL TO DECIDE WHAT WILL BE APT FOR HIM AND JUST CONCLUDED TO WHAT I HAD WRITE.SORRY IF DISAPPOINTED SOMEBODY AND CRITICISM IS WELCOMED AND SORRY FOR THE ERRORS TOO .

A SPECIAL THANKS TO SARANYA FOR ENCOURAGING ME THROUGHOUT AND BEFORE THIS FF 😳
Chapter-4 page 15
Edited by mkakkar93 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: PINky733

Dear mehak I waiting for next part
Pls pls pls update very fast

SORRY WAS THINKING TO INTRODUCE KABIR IN CHAP 4 BUT INRODUCE HIM IN CHAP 3 ONLY BECAUSE OF THE DEMAND THATS WHY GOT LATE IN UPDATING HOPE U WILL LIKE IT
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: saravathi

update update update😉

REALLY SORRY SARANYA I WOULD HAVE UPDATED IN THE MORNING BUT THERE WAS NO NET CONNECTON THAT TIME
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: MahimaSingh

Is this your first FF 😲 Doesnt seems so 👍🏼

Loved both the chapters.. Just amazing . Love Rajeev more in your FF than in the show 😡 Now dont make me fall for rajna, jaldi se kabir ki entry karao please 😆

THANKS FOR LIKING IT WAS WAITING FOR YOUR COMMENTS AND YOUR WISH MY COMMAND KABIR INTRODUCED 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I M SO sorry to update now but hope you will enjoy it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ooomyyygoddd
I am in short of words
somebody help me please
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
First about Rajna
A pause btwn precap was writers touch lol,I was reading imagining Rajna when I read that pause I laughed seeing ur intelligence..That was really cute
Then
wall of sand
u r too poetic,I loved that
pls don't call me ur mentor n all,I have lotsss to learn from u
Rajiv is gone but still their friendship continues
Rachna has built up lot of confidence bcoz of him that's gr8
Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rajiv is gone..yupieee😆
My fav hero's Vihaan n Kabir
yes yes yes😳
Kabir's intro was top class
wowww that shirtless description will def make all girls go week as u said,So he is too rich
I was going red when I read that chest bulging n all that I cant explain how I feel...I should control now
Precap:I expected this a bit when u sent me pm on Kabir's entry..But What Rachna would do..Who will fall in love First
really interesting story
I am a big fan of ur writing mehak,its really true
Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago

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