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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting eagerly for the next update...😊😳
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Beautiful update mehak, sorry for late reply, something iscoming between vihaan and kabir, and we have to wait little more to name it, it seems.

waiting eagerly for next update.
Edited by uma88 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi mehak I m back
I read your all updates
Amazing now I like all charcters
Rachna is so modern I like her
Thank u so much for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
mehak pls update soon
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ITS ALL ABOUT RACHANA FF

CHAP-7

Rachna was lost in thoughts thinking about her close dance with kabir .she felt so confused regarding her ease while dancing with kabir so close that she even didn't realise that she drank around 3-4 glasses of cold drink .Suddenly vihaan step towards rachna .

Vihaan: rachna I never saw this side of you .you danced very well with kabir .

Rachna : really Vihaan ? you liked my dance ? aww so sweet.

Vihaan: ya rachna you danced vey gracefully

Rachna : thanks , lets go and have a dance ,we will enjoy a lot

Rachna hold Vihaan hand and start pulling him towards the dance floor when suddenly she was about to fall but Vihaan hold her thinking whats wrong with rachna .

Vihaan: rachna , be careful are you alright ?

Saying this Vihaan let rachna sit on a seat who was holding her head which was aching a lot .

Rachna: yeah, I am alright but am having a severe headache Vihaan .

Vihaan find something fishy and asked her .

Vihaan: did you drink or eat something ? did anyone offer you something? tell me rachna .

Rachna :(in almost semi-unconscious state )no one offered me anything but I just have 3-4 glasses of soft drink .

Vihaan started looking the glass from which rachna was drinking that was on the bar table and smelled it and got hell shocked.

Rachna : oh shit! Rachna how can be you so careless ? silly girl ! you had Bacardi and not soft drink and that too 3-4 glasses . didnt you find the taste somewhat different ? where were your mind?

Vihaan was telling all this with anger and concern and worry too when suddenly rachna think to walk and as she took a step she was about to fall and got unconscious but Vihaan hold her in his arms gazing her with a look of concern in his eyes,

Vihaan : rachna , get up gal .

When Vihaan saw that she has swept into an unconscious state , he took her in his arms and called for maria and kabir but they were busy in their dance and even Vihaan voice couldn't reach as in so much darkness and noise he was even not able to see both of them .so he decided to took her out to the car .he took her out till the parking lot and laid her down in kabir car at the back seat .

Vihaan: rachna , are you ok? can you hear me ?

But nothing was happening to that poor gal .vihaan sprinkled little water on her face but she had a hangover and that water wasn't enough for her to get back into her senses .vihaan saw her hairs disturbing her beautiful face and slightly tucked her hair in the back of her ears. When he was getting out of the car ,he saw rachna naked legs little above the knees because of her dress going up a little . He resist himself while looking towards her beautiful and sexy legs and rushed to call kabir and maria locking rachna in the car.

The trio rushed to the parking lot and kabir just drove off the car to his home as his house was the nearest place for them .

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IN THE CAR OUTSIDE KABIR HOUSE

All reached to kabir house and was just getting off the car when suddenly maria realised that it was around 11:45 in the night.

Maria :hey guys ,I forgot that hostel rules allow all the girls to come till 12 and since rachna cant be taken in this state there , atleast I have to go and handle all otherwise there will be a huge problem for both of us .but even I cant leave her alone here .what to do ?

Vihaan :maria ,you are right and you should go and please trust us .i sure on god that I will not let anything happen to her. You try to come soon in the morning with some of her belongings.

Kabir: Vihaan is right maria ,I will drop you to hostel and Vihaan please let rachna inside the house .

Vihaan nodded and lifted rachna in his arms and went inside the house .

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KABIR HOUSE

Vihaan make rachana lie down in the guest room and covered her with a blanket .he smiled a little when his gaze set on the beautiful innocent face with a smile on it even in this situation .vihaan was just sitting there and admiring her and thinking that how rachna become so careless and what so important she was thinking that even she didn't realise that she is having liquor and that too in such huge amount.

His thoughts and admiration were broken by kabir who came running towards the room thinking how rachna is now.

Kabir: oh , she is sleeping .thats good .i shouldn't left her after the dance .She must be lost in my charm Vihaan

Kabir winked Vihaan and Vihaan was about to hit him in fun. Suddenly Vihaan phone rang .

Vihaan : what? i am coming in half an hour .dont worry dad.

Kabir : what happened ? you seem tensed .

Vihaan :yeah ,mom having too high blood pressure and also got some injury in leg because of falling down from some stairs .kabir ,I am afraid and have to go .

Kabir: no, don't worry ,I will take good care of her and in the morning maria will also come so you can go buddy.

Vihaan thanked kabir and giving a cute look to kabir left his house .

After sometime kabir came in simple jeans and black vest and sit on the couch with a cup of coffee near rachna who was sleeping and many thoughts starts spinning around his mind.

What an angelic beauty she is while sleeping. Seeing her this state no one can believe that she can be a wild tigress too .and by the way the girl has guts , she had so many glasses of Bacardi. well she looks beautiful like this . I wish she could be like this only like sleeping beauty and I could see her all the time like this and maybe I could ...he gave a pause and then shrug off the thought that came to his mind. well, kabir be ready for tomorrow, she is gonna burst out on you like anything and you have to handle her all by yourself. So ,get a sleep but how can anyone sleep seeing this beautiful girl in front ?but admiring her kabir too dozes off to sleep.

MORNING

Rachna got up but as was expected she was horrified seeing herself to an unknown place and that too nobody in the room .she removed her blanket and went to see where she is. She was about to open the main door when kabir came in front of him with lemonade and a tape too .

Rachna : kabir,you? how I am here ? what you did to me ?

She was asking all the questions a girl would asked in this situation when suddenly kabir put a tape on rachna mouth.

Kabir: now you are looking gorgeous and its better to see you like this

Kabir told her all the events happened and even assured her that nothing wrong has happened with her. Although rachna listened and believed him but started crying and hugged kabir

Rachna : kabir ,I just hurt my religious sentiments ,I hurted my parents too. i should have never gone to the nightclub.

Kabir: (consoling her ) don't worry gal , its not a big deal and you did it by mistake so don't worry.

Till then maria also entered and give rachna her belongings and asked her to get ready and come along with kabir. Rachna got ready and went with kabir to college.

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LONDON DESIGN SCHOOL

Kabir and rachna reached college and meet Vihaan.

Vihaan: hey rachna,are you are alright now?

Rachna : yeah Vihaan, and thanks Vihaan for yesterday. I hope I didn't said or done anything stupid.

Vihaan:oh not at all rachna .

Kabir: well rachna , I think Vihaan arms and back must be paining after lifting such a heavy object and if not ,then he is saved by gods grace.

Kabir and Vihaan laughed seeing each other and rachna was like giving a killing look at both of them.

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IN NIGHT AT KABIR RESIDENCE

Kabir was lost in rachna thoughts

Rachana is a very nice gal. she is modern yet attached to her values. she is like an angelic beauty for me. although we have become friends but somewhere I have started liking her.what are you thinking kabir? just propose her or else someone else will catch her. So then, lets start mission rachna kabir and hope you succeed in it .

VIHAAN RESIDENCE

Vihaan was too confused and was trying to find answer to the flow of emotions and attraction towards rachna.

I always find rachna different from other girls and respect her a lot .i feel very attached to her .i feel happy and content seeing her happy and smiling. What are these new feelings going on in my heart and mind. I am having sleepless nights and the one thing I keep thinking or keep coming in my mind is her innocent face and the cute smile. Oh god! What is happening to me ? I have to talk about this to kabir first.

RACHANA HOSTEL

Rachana in diary

Rachna, you are getting attracted towards kabir. maybe it can be infatuation or liking of his charm but remember rachna it can be very much possible for him to make fun of your feelings. although he has become your friend but still you know that he is still a great flirt in college. And maybe the closeness of us that might be so important must be normal for him as his lifestyle is very different for you rachna .so BETTER MAKE A LITTLE DISTANCE with him .remember you have come here to settle yourself .

And the trio fighting with their flowing emotions dozes off to sleep waiting for the surprises the next day will bring to them.

PRECAP- KABIR INFORM VIHAAN ABOUT HIS DECISION OF PROPOSING RACHNA AND KABIR SHOUT I LOVE YOU RACHANA .

PHEW THATS ALL FOR THIS CHAP .GUYS CRITICISMS ARE WELCOMED AND AM SORRY BECAUSE OF SUCH A LATE UPDATE BUT DUE TO SOME UNAVOIDABLE AND UNEXPECTED CIRCUMSTANCES I COULDNT UPDATE .A HUGE APOLOGY BECAUSE MAY BE MY UPDATES WILL BE LITTLE IRREGULAR TILL NEXT WEEK.

AND ONE THING MORE THAT THIS CHAPTER MAY BE NOT THAT MUCH GOOD AS I WAS ANOTHER TRANCE WHILE WRITING IT .SORRY FOR ALL THE ERRORS

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anks209

Waiting eagerly for the next update...😊😳

SORRY FOR THE DELAY AND I HAVE UPDATED NOW HOPE U WILL LIKE IT AND WAIT FOR YOUR COMMENT TOO😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saravathi

waiting pls update soon


SORRY FOR THE DELAY SARANYA and will wait for your precious comments 😳
Edited by mkakkar93 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: uma88

Beautiful update mehak, sorry for late reply, something iscoming between vihaan and kabir, and we have to wait little more to name it, it seems.

waiting eagerly for next update.

THANKs for liking it and ya something is on the way but what it will cleared soon and updated and sorry for the delay😳 i am happy u liked it and will wait for your comments eagerly
Edited by mkakkar93 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PINky733

hi mehak I m back
I read your all updates
Amazing now I like all charcters
Rachna is so modern I like her
Thank u so much for pm

hey welcome back very happy to see you again ad thnks u liked all my chaps and characters too and very happy u liked it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PINky733

mehak pls update soon
I m waiting

sorry for the delay and ya updated😳 hope you like it and will wait for your comment

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