RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May) - Page 7

In the starting I was red with anger but in the ending I was red bcz of blushing ..amazing ...usss cell ko bhi abhi bajna tha : 😡 nife story carry on

Nice! At least they know that both have feelings for each other! Heated!!

Glad u people liked it.. !!!!

Eeer☺️☺️ Can you my heart pounding 😆

hahahahaaha well the cells rlly know when to ring..i think they've become very dedicated to interrupting :P & ( comment to rachana): rachana...the way things were going, i think u 2 should've shifted to the back sit...poor Kabir would've had too many hurdles to reach u lololol

Thanks alooot everyone for liking the update... Here u go with next one! 😃

Chapter: 11

Kabir's hands touched her bare legs Rachna's eyes were closed, she was clutching his collar more and more tightly, when he was going to make her dress up from her legs suddenly his cell rang..first he tried to ignore the cell's ring...but when it rang again they both heard...

Rachna immediately opened her eyes and she was shocked and didn't know what was happening as well as Kabir was also shocked and not understanding what he was doing with her, he immediately moved himself away from her and attended the phone, whereas Rachna's eyes were wide open, she got tears in shock as well...

Kabir: he..hello..

Pihu: kahan ho tum dono hadd hogayee time dekha hai aur bahir kitni barish ho rahi hai jaldi aao wapis tum dono

And she cuts the call in anger...

Rachna was hell bent in shock and was looking down with tears, than she looked towards Kabir with a blank face

Kabir: Ra..Rachna woh m..m...

Rachna: Kabir!! (she said with tears) and opened the car's door and started walking on road

Kabir(in car): oh shittt yeh kya kar rha tha mein *he also get tears and he followed her out

Till then Rachna had reached so far, it was raining heavily

As she was keeping her steps forward each moment was repeating in her mind (how he kissed her) she rubbed her lips with her own hand while crying (how he kissed her whole body) she tried to wash her body in rain. she forgot she is in middle of a road, she was fully drenched, she kneeled down she cried loudly

Kabir runningly reached her, he saw her in that condition he felt so bad and tried to console her, he went closer to her. Kabir tried to hold her from shoulder

Rachna(shouted): no don't touch me don't touch me (removing his hand and cried a lot)

Kabir(with tears): Rachna listen to me plzzz..

Rachna: No no I don't wanna listen a word (she cried a lot)

Kabir(shouted): u have to listen to me understood

Rachna(shaking her head in no silently crying)

Kabir(in tears) hugged her she also rested herself free because she was in need of a shoulder to cry

Kabir: lets goo

He took her in car and tried to make her calm by holding her hand tightly.

She looked at him with her red eyes and then tried to avoid eye contact

He drove the car and they reached home...

...In hall...

Pihu: kahan reh gaye the tum dono time dekha hai (in anger)

Kabir: wo bhabi raastay mein...

Rachna: dee road block tha aur itni tez barish ho rahi thi

Pihu: yeh kya halat banayi hue hai tum dono ne

For a while both became shocked

Pihu: tum log barish mein bheegay ho na pagal hogaye ho bachon jaise harkatein, abhi bemaar hojayegee tu Rachna

Rachna: dee mujhe sona hai and she left from there

Pihu: isday kya hua hai iska mood kyun off hai Kabir

Kabir: woh dee pata nahi party mein bhi aisee thi ..ok mein bhi sonay jaa raha hun bye

He also left...

Kabir in his room couldn't sleep

Kabir(in mind): yeh kya ho gaya tha mujhe, meine iss tarah Rachna ke saath... (his heart was crying) agar mein ussay sorry bhi kahun tou bhi uska dukh kam nahi hoga.. how can I do this she is someone else's.. (he was having tears) par shayad issi baat ki wajah se mein uske itne kareeb aa gya. Kabir Tripathi 15 yrs in Australia ek bhi aisi harkat nahi ki phir aaj kaise..

Rachna in her room on bed...

Rachna(in mind): woh mere itna kareeb agya meine ussay roka kyun nahi meri bhi galtee hai mujhe Kabir ko rokna chahiye tha, meine kabhi kisi ladkay ko allow nahi kiya itna kareeb aanay ko phir aaj kaise? (she got tears) and she tried to sleep

All night both of them couldn't sleep.

Morning...10am

Kabir: aaj mein itna late kaise uthaa (he freshen up and went downstairs)

Sugandha: Kabir sab theek hai na? tu kuch pareshan lag raha hai

Kabir: ha..haan maan sab theek hai (and he started eating his breakfast)

Pihu (on phone): haan pa'pa sab theek hai, ab Rachna bilkul theek hai ok bye

Kabir: bhabhi kya huwa Rachna ko?

Pihu: kal raat jo tum dono ne kiya yeh tou hona hee tha na

Kabir(shocked): what.. matlab

Pihu: arrey ussay fever hogya hai don't worry!

Kabir (sighed relief): kya lekin ab kaisee hai woh?

Sugandha: theek hai ab tu naashta kar.. aur Pihu tum Rachna ka breakfast ooper leke jaana

Pihu: haan maa yahi soch rahi thi...

Rachna in her room on bed was still in her night dress and lost somewhere in her mind, when she heard the door knock.

Rachna: yes come in

Kabir was on her door, he entered the room, he couldn't see in her eyes neither she could in his..

Kabir: kaisi hai tumhari tabiyat?

Rachna: hmm m fine (looking down)

Kabir: matlab tum aaj college nahi jaaogee

Rachna: haan wo fever bohat zyada tha...

Kabir sat near her...

Kabir: Rachna I know tum kya soch rahi hogi mere baaray mein but trust me mein aisa...

Rachna Interrupted: Kabir mein kuch nahi soch rahi, tum bhi bhool jao waise bhi am going back in a few days, sab theek hojae ga...

Kabir(his tone raised): kaise bhool jaaun mein nahi bhool sakta jo kuch kal raat huwa aur woh kyun hua yeh bhi tumhein samajhna hoga

Rachna: Kabir plzzz jo hogya woh hogya I don't even want to remember it (

she got up from bed and went near window wth tears) pata hai meine apni life mein kabhi kisi ko itna close nahi hone diya, par khair its okk.. mein jaanti hoon meri bhi mistake thi (and she wiped her tears)

Kabir went towards her

Kabir: Rachna idhar dekho tumhein kya lagta hai mein yeh sab kuch normally karta hoon ghalat fehmi hai tumhari I swear meine aaj tak kabhi bhi aisa kuch nahi kiya (he held her from her arms and turned her around)

Rachna: Kabir plzzz koi aajayega tum jaao yahan se..

Kabir: nahi aaj mein nahin jaaunga yahan se bina baat complete kiye huway samjhi tum

Rachna: kya baat? konsi baat? just go from here

He held her tight from both her arms

Kabir: I can't.. I can't live without you...I love You I love u More then mY Life kal raat jo kuch bhi hua it was just because I was scared to loose you, that's why i couldn't control my feelings

Rachna(got tears she was looking in his eyes): jhoot tum kisi aur ke hooo

Kabir: Nahii mein sirf tumhara hoon aur tum sirf meri ho Understoood

Rachna(with a little smile and tears): lekin tum tou kisi aur se pyaar karte ho na
Kabir(in tears): No trust me mein sirf tumse pyaar karta hoon

He hugged her tightly and she also held his shirt tight...

Kabir(while hugging): I love u Rachna I love u sooo much

They broke the hug and he kissed her on her forehead...Rachna was soo happy she didn't know how to express it

At the same time suddenly...they heard a voice

Pihu: Rachna Kabir!!!!

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i'm so happy..thank God u ended the misunderstanding...i actually hate these kinds & was going to mention it in the last post but then thought how would the story go on...and when I 1st started reading this part I was sooo disappointed & in disapproval with Rachana's reaction...her shouting & blaming Kabir.. but then again, by mid u made sure she realizes that if she wants to blame, half is her fault too.

I am glad Rachna realised, whether it was a treat or a crime, she was a 50% partner 😉.

awesome! loved it! lets see what happens next! waiting!