RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May) - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sanjali

Awesome

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Edited by RabirLover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Freaking awesome! can't wait 4 their date.plz update soon


Thanks alooot!!!😊😊 Glad u Liked it!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: yellowpurse

mein soch rahi hoon ki ande ya tamatars ke badle...thanda thanda fridge-wala😉 pani throw karo😆 that scene was too cute! how romantic...planning a date for his dear rachana? kya baat hai! bacha bada ho gaya hai😆 great update! as always...will eagerly wait to for the next one :)


😆 thanks alooot dear..!!😊 abhi aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya 😉
Edited by RabirLover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 13:

...Kabir's room...

Kabir roaming in confusion: Oh God Kabir hadd hai, tum aaj date pe jaa rahe ho aur tumhein yeh tak nahi pata ke tumhein Rachna se kya bolna hai 😕!! btw mein pehnoon kya!?

He started taking his clothes one by one out of the cupboard
Kabir (to himself):😡😡😡 what the hell yaar kuch acha nahi hai!

"tum jo bhi pehnogay tum pe acha lagega"😛😛

He heard the voice coming from his back and turned around
Kabir: Oh really? thanks😛😛 matlab mein bohat handsome hoon haina Rachna 😉
Rachna: ehem mujh se zyada nahi 😆 btw jaa kahan rahay ho😕?
Kabir: kyaa😡😡 tumhein yeh abhi tak nahi pata
Rachna: nahi tou😕
Kabir: Rachna tum kaise bhool sakti ho itna important day hai humara😛
Rachna: lekin kya hai aaj mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha😕?

He came closer to her and whispered lightly
Kabir: mein aur tum aaj date pe jaa rahe hain😉
Rachna: kyaa?? 😲 lekin mein nahi jaatee kisi ke sath date pe😕
Kabir: ohoo Rachna mein konsa jaata hoon, sirf tumhare saath hee tou jaa raha hoon😉
Rachna: Kabir lekin mujhe bohat darr lagta hai😕
Kabir: come on Rachna tumhari koi suhaag raat nahi hai ke tum mujh se darr rahi ho😆😆😆 (then he thought what he said😆😆)
Rachna: whatt? 😲😲 Kabir!! 😡lekin mein tum se kyun darungee😳
Kabir: tum darogee bhi aur phaso geee bhi 😉😳😳
Rachna: Kabir just stop behaving like some romantic king! mein jaa rahe hoon😳😳

Someone caught her hand😳😳
Rachna: ab kya hai? 😳
Kabir: tum aaj saaree pehnogee hai na😳
Rachna: lekin mujhe wo pehannee nahi aatee😳
Kabir: mujhe kuch nahi pata tum aaj saree pehnogee kyunki mein bol raha hoon samjhee😳
Rachna: Ok😳 ab jaane do mujhe
Kabir: aur haan agar help chahiye tou mein kar sakta hoon😆😆😆
Rachna: 😲 jee nahi mein dee ki help le sakti hoon ok😳 thank you so much ab chodo
He left her hand and she ran out from there

Rachna entered her room...
Rachna: Oh no! mere pass tou koi saaree hi nahi hai

Pihu enters Rachna's room...

Pihu: kya hua tu yahan aise kyun bethi hai?
Rachna: dee mujhe saree pehannee hai!
Pihu:😆😆tu aur saaree! khud ko sambhalogi ya saree ko
Rachna: dee please mazaak mat karo, please meri help karo na!
Pihu: acha baba ruk mein dekhtee hoon, meri bohat si new sarees hain jo meine abhi tak pehni bhi nahi hain..
Rachna: dee woh red waali do na uska blouse mujhay bohat pasand hai😛
Pihu: Rachna tu bhi na.. yeh wala blouse pehnogi.. mein tou change karwa rahi thi issi liye rakhi thi
Rachna: haan na dee romantic bhi tou lagna hai😉
Pihu: chal jaldi ready hoja late nahi ho rahi 😃
Rachna: haan dee okk😛😳

Kabir wore a black 3 piece suit and Rachna wore a red saree😉 she was looking damn gorgeous in it, and the sleeveless blouse was further enhancing her beauty. 😳When Kabir saw her in the saree coming downstairs, his jaw dropped wide open😳

Pihu: ehem ehem Kabir baad mein dekh lena😆
Kabir:😃haan bhabhi bilkul
Rachna: woh chalein..😳
Kabirt: haan ok 😳 lets go. mein car door tak leke aata hoon.

He left..

Pihu: Rachna sunn
Rachna: haan dee bolo😊
Pihu: dekh maan papa ko abhi tak tumhare aur Kabir ke bare mein kuch nahi pata sambhal ke ok
Rachna: haan dee aap fikar mat karo😛

On the way both uttered not a word, they were just blushing😳😳

Rachna: Kabir
Kabir: hmmm
Rachna: hum kahan jaa rahay hain?
Kabir: hmm abhi bata diya tou surprise kaise hogaa😉
Rachna blushed: Kabir yeh jo na tum mujhe baar baar aise dekhte ho mujhe bohat darr lagta hai
Kabir:😆😆😆hmm ab tumhein uski aadat daalni padegi
Rachna: haan lekin..😳
Kabir: chaloo aagayi humaari destination😛



Rachna:😲wowww kitni beautiful place hai😳
Kabir: ab chalein 😳 warna breakfast ka time hojayega
Rachna: hmm haan chalo😳😳

As Rachna tried to walk...
Rachna: aah ouch *she was about to fall* *Kabir caught her from her arm*
Kabir: kya hua?
Rachna: kuch nahi aise hee shayad.. Oh No😲
Kabir: kya hua?
Rachna: woh meri heels...
Kabir: don't be sad, mein hoon na! *and he lifts her in his arms*
Rachna:😲Kabir 😳utaaro mujhe!
Kabir: nahi tum bohat achi lag rahi ho aise mere baahon mein😳
Rachna blushed
They kept on looking in each other's eyes

Rachna: Kabir neechay paani hai..
Kabir: pata hai mujhay 😳 now shhh...

Keeping having eye lock they reached their table, and he made her sit on her chair
Rachna was blushing hard..

and then he sat opposite to her..
Kabir: Rachna kaisa laga yeh sab? 😛
Rachna: bohat khoobsurat hai 😛

A waiter comes...

waiter: sir aap kuch lenge?
Kabir: hmm haan 2 smoothies and Rachna kya khaogi tum?
Rachna: mein chinese
Kabir: haan aur 2 chinese
waiter: ok sir. *and he left*
Kabir: Rachna i wanna tell u something..
Rachna: kya? 😳
Kabir: u r looking damn beautiful 😳
Rachna: thanks 😳
Kabir: ek aur baat *he held both of her hands* mujhe kabhi bhi ghalat mat samajhna uss raat jo kuch hua...
Rachna: jo kuch hua woh mein kabhi nahi bhool paaoongi ☺️
Kabir: 😲
Rachna: tum mere itne kareeb aaye aur meine tumhein roka bhi nahi.. kyun nahi rok paayi yeh bhi mein jaanti hoon.. 😳kyunki...
Kabir(interrupted): kyunki humne mehsoos kiya ke hum ek doosre ke baghair nahi reh sakte ☺️hai na?
Rachna: haan☺️
Then he left her hands and put one of them in his pocket..
Rachna: 😕
He took out a box...
Kabir: Will you be mine forever? 😳😳



*Rachna shocked*
Kabir: Bolo Rachna..
Rachna just nodded her head without uttering a word and blushed ☺️
Kabir: 😳😳 *He took her left hand and made her wear that ring and kissed her finger*😛
Rachna looking at her finger: wow its really beautiful!! 😛 thanks thank u soo much!!
Kabir: lekin tum se kam 😛

Mean while the waiter came with the ordered food and served them elegantly, they had the dinner and it was time to leave...
Rachna: Kabir i loved this place a lot! 😛
Kabir: hmm agar kaho tou raat yaheen reh lein *and laughed*
Rachna: Kabir tum na sudharna mat chalein ab late ho gaya hai bohut
Kabir: hmm chalo

They reached back home...

...at door...

Kabir: Rachna
Rachna: haan
Kabir: thank u so much for the wonderful time 😛
Rachna: 😳 thanks u also *she hurriedly kissed him on cheeks*
Kabir: 😲
She was about to get out of the car when he held her hand and pulled her back towards him
Rachna: Kabir kya kar rahe ho stop😲
Kabir: tumne jo abhi kiya wahi tumhein wapis de raha hoon
*And he kissed her on her cheeks, Rachna turned totally red.*
Rachna: chodo na..😳
Kabir: dil nahi kar raha
*she pushed him away and open the car's door and 😆*
Kabir: 😳koi baat nahi baad mein dekh lunga tumhein

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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
haiii
☺️is this enough in the comments? lol jk.

Rachna: Kabir lekin mujhe bohat darr lagta hai😕
Kabir: come on Rachna tumhari koi suhaag raat nahi hai ke tum mujh se darr rahi ho😆😆😆 (then he thought what he said😆😆)
i was thinking the same thing!!! y the heck scared?😆 oh, and also like the line where he's like main help kar doon kya (saree pehen ne mai :p soo cute & naughty.

it was all very sweet and beautiful...thanks so much! a really nice treat :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Hai Meru...tumne to maar hi daala 😆

Just loved it! Romance hi romance and proposal also!?!? 😳

Too much...can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Very cute and nice update I love it. So lovely and romantic make me blush. Rabir r just cute can't wait for next part now . I hope we will have some romance in the show as well between them I just can't wait😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Wow! u r awesome. what a romantic place.its was so so so romantic.plzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Romantic . Love Kabir's naughtiness 😉.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love Kabir here.. so naughty and romantic update soon

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