RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May) - Page 6

Originally posted by: nividances

Yay! I'm the first one to comment!! 😃

Loved it! Especially the horse scene...I could just imagine Rachna hugging Kabir and her hair flying everywhere!! Too good yaaar...update soon!

Originally posted by: awesome-raji

hey can't wait or next part .. what will kabir do??😉😆

very nice update 👏👏

thanks for the pm😛

Originally posted by: yellowpurse

getting better with every chap...agree with the person above..the horse riding was rlly good...although i can picture all the scenes, that one was really nice ;)

great update! post again soon :) & thanks 4 PM

Originally posted by: angelinasingh

thank u so much for the p.m.
OH!! rachna forgot her top...will Kabir make her wear his shirt.😉😛

Originally posted by: MythilyRaman

Loved the the horse riding... wonderful chapter.. Update soon 😛 Thanks for PM

chapter 8:

Kabir started removing his shirt...😛 Rachna confused and feeling embarrassed...and looking down.. he moved towards her she was moving backwards with a scared look...he kept on moving towards her she moving backwards and finally she got blocked by the wall..

Rachna(confused): tum kya karnay walay ho mere saath

Kabir started laughing loudly😆: hahhahhahahh Rachna tum mujhay kab samjhogee

Rachna(confused): matlab dekhoo mein tumharay saath yeh sab...

Kabir: mein bhi tumharay saath woh sab nahi kar raha, lo yeh meri shirt pehan loo jab tak nisha and tina wahan se aayein and winked at her

Rachna sighed relief: oh Thanks but Koi baat nahi mein wait...

Kabir: ab lo bhi no bahanas jaao change karlo thand lag jayegee tumhein

Finally she took shirt from him, she was about to say: tha..

Kabir:jaao bhi ya yaheen change karogi

Rachna: shut Up!!! Kabhi mat sudharna apni harkaton se

By saying this she left.. he kept on grinning

Kabir: kitni innocent hai while smiling

After sometime their friends joined them and they all had lots of fun together...

Kabir: guys I guess now we should leave warna buhat late hojayegee

Tina goes near him

Tina: come on Kabir can't we stay here tonight

Kabir: no because is baar permission nahi hai

Rachna: haan I guess we should leave now...

At same time Kabir's cell rang...

Kabir: hello

Om: kahan ho Kabir?

Kabir: pa'pa hum bas nikalnay walay thay

Om: nahi aaj mat nikalna 😛 baahar weather buhat kharaab hai subah ko jaldi nikalna

Kabir: Pa'pa lekin...

Om (interrupted): aur Rachna ka khayal rakhna woh kabhi is tarah kisi ke saath bahir nahi gayi

Kabir: jee pa'pa

And he cuts the call

Rachna: kya hua?

Kabir: woh pa'pa ne kaha hai ke baahir weather kharaab hai aaj raat yaheen stay karna hoga

Tina: yayyy wowww kaash aaj mein kuch aur wish managteee

Rachna became little tense...

Mayank: wow phir tou buhat mazaa aayega chalo guys bahir chaltay hain...

Kabir went towards Rachna

Kabir: Rachna don't be tensed hum subah jaldi nikal jayenge I promise

Rachna: nahi actually mein pehlay kabhi is tarah

Kabir: jaanta hoon and trust me tumhein koi problem nahi hogi mein hun na chalo ab

Rachna smiled little

At night they all had dinner together and had lots of fun, everyone went to their respective rooms but Rachna wasn't able to sleep, she decided to spend some time alone near the pool area, she was sitting and looking at the stars...Kabir went out to take water, he saw Rachna there, he also went near her

Kabir: hmmm tou kya ho raha hai itni raat koo

Rachna: woh kuch bhi tou nahii aisay hi stars dekh rahi thi

Kabir: stars matlab tum buhat romantic ho hai na

Rachna: nahi tou kisne kaha

Kabir: mein ne and winked at her

Rachna: Kabir tum bhi na ajeeb ho har waqt mazaak

Kabir: but am serious

Rachna: what kuch kaha

Kabir: woh nahi touu kuch bhi nahi...

There was a little silence for few moments...

Rachna was playing with water he was adoring her...moonlight was falling on their faces

Kabir: Rachna

Rachna: hmmm

Kabir: ek baat poochoon I hope u won't mind

Rachna: haan poocho na

Kabir: tumne kabhi kisi se pyaar kiya hai

She was shocked for a moment on this question...

Rachna: pyaar...as such tou nahi pyaar ki kiya feeling hoti hai am totally unaware but haan kabhi kabhi lagta hai koi mujhay pasand karta hai (she tried to lightened moment)

Kabir: oh means tumhari life mein koi...

Rachna: arrey tum aisi baatein karkay mujhay pareshan mat karo btw aaj mr. Kabir Tripathi ko itna serious dekh ke am shocked and surprised

He smiled little...

Kabir: woh har insaan ke do roop hotay hain tumne tou abhi mera doosra roop dekha hee nahi (while making his face close towards her)

She looked in his eyes and felt something different, she was blushing...

Rachna: I guess ab mujhay chalna chahiye

She was about to leave when he held her wrist...Rachna shocked... he also stood up...

Kabir(in mind): I guess am feeling something for u..

He move closer to her and whispered: apna aur mere shirt ka khayal rakhna bohat khoobsurat lag rahi ho (then he left her wrist)

I guess I should leave warna I don't know...

By saying this he left Rachna shocked and blushing ...

Rachna went running towards her room and sat on her bed, thinking about Kabir's words

Rachna(in mind): oh God Rachna kya hogya hai tujhay kya pata who kisi aur ko pasand karta ho

Kabir in his room was also thinking about her (in mind):lekin Rachna ne kaha someone likes her means someone is already in her life lekin mein yeh sab kyun soch raha hoon

And tried to sleep

Next morning...they reached back..as RaBir entered the house

Pihu: Kabir Rachna mein ne bola tha na kuch bhi mushkil ho saktee hai

Kabir: bhabhi hum sab ne tou bohat enjoy kiya aap kyun pareshaan ho rahi hoo

Rachna: haan dee sab theek tou hai

Pihu: acha ok Kabir jaao jakay fresh hojaao Rachna tu mere saath chal...

In Rachna's room

Rachna: dee kya hai aap itna kyun pareshaan ho

Pihu: Rachna sach sach bataa kuch gadbad tou nahi hui na kal

Rachna: nahi dee kya hogya hai

Pihu: Rachna mein jaanti hoon Kabir acha ladka hai woh aisa waisa kuch nahi karega but mein usskay doosray friends ko nahi jaanti aur yeh kya

Rachna: kya (confused)

Pihu: yeh Kabir ki shirt hai na

Rachna: woh haan dee mere kapde geelay hogaye aur saari raat itni barish ho rahi thi ke sookhay bhi nahi Kabir ki shirt pehan nee padee

Pihu: Rachna tu bhi na apne kapde kyun nahi leke gayi

Rachna: galtee hogayee dee kya hogya acha ab aap jaao mujhay fresh hona hai...

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CHAPTER: 9

...In afternoon...

Rachna was coming downstairs in a cute chudee daar dress with her wet hair open, Kabir was sitting on the dining table eating an apple, as he saw Rachna he bite his finger..

Kabir(shouted): aah aaouchhh

Sugandha: kya huaa

Pihu: kya hua

Kabir: woh woh kuch nahi

Rachna came downstairs

Rachna: kya hua dee why he shouted?

Kabir: woh meine abhi stairs pe chudail dekh lee thi

Rachna: what mein aur chudail

Kabir: arrey mein ne kab kaha tum chudail

Rachna: shut up stairs se mein hi aa rahi thi

Sugandha: Kabir kyun tang kar raha hai ussay

Rachna: aunty he always do this to me

Kabir: arrey chudail ko chudail hee tou bolunga na by saying this he started running

Rachna: Kabir I won't leave u!! she started chasing him

Sugandha: yeh dono na humesha bache hi rahenge

Pihu: haan maa dono pagal hain...

On the other hand Rachna was chasing him and they reached out to the lawn

Rachna: Kabir stop there I m telling u

Kabir: oh really kyun hahahahah

Rachna: Kabir I will kill u

She was about to catch him when her leg got stuck in a water pipe and she was about to fall when Kabir held her but they both fell on grass. Kabir was on top of her

Rachna: arghh Kabir leave me

But he was busy in staring at her, she noticed and than also got lost in his eyes

They came back to senses only when they heard Pihu's voice...

Rachna: Kabir woh..

Kabir: hmm wait

They got up not looking in each other's eyes, both were blushing..

Rachna: haan dee aayee

Kabir followed her

Pihu: yeh le Rahul ka phone hai

Rachna: Rahul ka (she took phone with a big smile)

Kabir (confused): kon Rahul bhabi?

Pihu: arrey Rahul Rachna ka childhood friend hai aur bahi dono sath job pe bhi hote hain

Kabir: oh acha... he became a little sad

...At night...

Kabir: kon hai yeh Rahul, kya Rachna aur wohh... haan maybe kyunki us din lag raha tha Rachna likes someone ..oh god but mein kyun soch raha hoon uske baray mein

On the other hand Rachna in her room was keep on blushing thinking about the afternoon incidence... someone knocked the door and she came back to senses...

Rachna: yes come in

Kabir: hi may i..

Rachna: haan aao na

Kabir: kya kar rahi thi

Rachna: kuch bhi tou nahi padhnay ki koshish par mind kahin aur jaa raha hai

Kabir: matlab love shove ka chakkar hai, hai na

Rachna: kya?? 😲 (to tease him) hmmm.. ho bhi sakta hai nahi bhi

Kabir (became a little sad): ohh sorry means mein ne disturb kar diya

Rachna: nahi tou tum betho na

Kabir: hmm btw tumhein sorry bolne aaya tha

Rachna: sorry kyun kis baat ke liye

Kabir: woh afternoon mein...

Rachna: oh its ok mein ne mind nahi kiya

Kabir: btw ek baat tumne bataayee nahi yeh Rahul kon hai

Rachna: arrey haan woh mera childhood friend hai pata hai hum itne close friends hain koi soch bhi nahi sakta (telling joyfully)

Kabir: oh acha actually mujhe nahi pata tha

Rachna: kya, kya nahi pata tha

Kabir: arrey woh Rahul ke baray mein

Rachna: hahahah Kabir tum bhi na ajeeb hee ho tumhein kaise pata hoga jab ke mein ne bataya nahi

Kabir: ek baat puchon

Rachna: haan pucho na

Kabir: tum itni khoobsurat kyun ho (he didn't know what he was saying)

Rachna: kyaaa!

Kabir: m..mera matlab hai tum beautiful ho ya beautiful ban ne ki koshish karti hooo (while laughing)

Rachna: Kabir mere khayal se tumhara dimagh kharaab hogya hai ya tumhein buhat neend aa rahi hai

Kabir(slowly): hmm shayad

Rachna: kyaa

Kabir: kk kuch nahi

Suddenly Kabir's cell rang

Rachna: ehem ehem kon hai itni raat ko (winking)

Kabir: shut up Mayank hai (showing her tongue) and left

Rachna (grinning to herself): Kabir tum itne ache kyun ho itne caring oh God study kar loon warna kal meri khair nahi

Kabir in his room

Kabir: haan yaar bol

Mayank: kya kar raha tha

Kabir: kuch nahi Rachna se baatein

Mayank: kya is waqt ohooo kya baat hai tou kya baatein ki aapne

Kabir: shut up yaar Mayank I think she is already committed

Mayank: kya yeh tujhay kisne kaha

Kabir: kisi ne nahi but mujhe lagta hai

Mayank: hahahahha Kabir tu aur tere stupid khayal btw sach sach bata kya chakkar hai bol bol mein ne dekha tha apni aankhon se kaise tu uski care kar raha tha

Kabir: shayad tum theek keh rahe ho but sach mein yaar mujhay kuch samajh nahi aa raha aisay pehlay kabhi feel hee nahi hua

Mayank: ohooo bechara majnu

Kabir: oh god tu nahi sudhrega chal bye mein sonay jaa raha hun

And they cut the call

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A few months passed and they started to feel even more for each other, by time their feelings grew so strong that they could identify that they were in love with one another. Kabir decided to confess his feelings to Rachna

Kabir *roaming in his room* : kya karun kya karun.. I guess aaj mujhe Rachna ko sab bata dena chahiye that what I feel for her..

*He walks towards her room*

Rachna: yes come in!

Kabir:hii

Rachna: hii

Kabir: kya kar rahi thee?

Rachna: kuch nahi aise heee Rahul se abhi abhi baat ki thi, acha chodo tum bataao koi kaam tha?

Kabir: haan woh mujhe tumhein kuch batana hai..

Rachna(confused): batana hai.. kya?

Kabir: actually mujhe tumse kuch share karna hai...

Rachna(expecting the 3 golden words): haan bolo na (while blushing)

Kabir: mein aur tum...

Rachna: tum aur mein... (blushing)

Kabir: mera matlab hai mein tumse...

Rachna: tum mujh se ??

Kabir: mein tumhein pa..

*As Rachna's cell rang*

Kabir: tumhara cell

*Rachna on phone*

Rachna: Oh sorry sorry love u sooo much...

Kabir felt she was talking to Rahul, he stepped back..

Kabir: I guess I should talk to u later bye!

He left with a sad face

Shail: acha sun ab jaldi wapis aa tere liye ek surprise ready hai!

Rachna: maa kya hai mujhe koi surprise nahi chahiye bye bye

Cutting the call she thought what Kabir wanted to tell her, she decided to go to his room.

Kabir (on phone): u know how much I miss u plzz be back soon I can't live without u..

Rachna heard this, all her dreams shattered.

Rachna(in mind): mujhe doubt tou tha but I think its true Kabir already has someone in his life. *Her eyes welled up with tears and she went back to her room*

On the other hand...

Nimisha: bhai aap bhi na had karte ho, chalo now cheer up warna mein bhi rona shuru kardungi!

Kabir: acha baba nahi karta aisi baatein, bas ab khush! chal bye goodnight.

All night both of them couldn't sleep.

Kabir(in mind): Why did I fell for her jo pehlay se kisi aur ki hai *he got tears in his eyes*

Rachna(in mind): I knew Kabir had a Girl Friend then why did I... *Tears rolled down her eyes, she wiped them away and tried to go to sleep*

...Next morning...

Rachna: dee woh driver kahan hai plzz ussay bolo mujhe late ho raha hai.

Pihu: haan tu ruk.. arrey Kabir tum Rachna ko drop kardo plzzz driver pata nahi kahan hai..

Kabir: sorry bhabhi mujhe kuch kaam hai and he left

Rachna felt being ignored and noticed a sudden change in his behavior

Rachna(in mind): Kabir ne aisa kyun kaha *she got tears*

...

Kabir (on phone): nahi yaar Mayank I can't...

Mayank: come on Kabir aaj mera birthday hai tumhein aur Rachna ko aana hi hoga mujhe kuch nahi pata byee!

Kabir(in mind): ab kaise bolun Rachna ko jabke meine ussay ignore kiya morning mein.

He went to her room

Rachna: Kabir (she got a smile on her face)

Kabir: woh aaj Mayank ka birthday hai, bohat zidd kar raha tha ke hum dono ko aana hai tum ready rehna.

Rachna : ok (she smiled)

She got ready. She wore a one piece black dress, she was looking gorgeous in it.

...At Mayank's party...

Mayank: Come on guys lets dance!

Kabir: haan chalo guys!

This time he left Rachna alone, Rachna felt he was ignoring her, she was very hurt.

Being hurt she decided to dance with Ashish, Kabir saw her dancing with him, he got jealous, in jealousy he drank some pegs. Rachna didn't know that he was drinking.

It was 12 am when they were reutrning home from the party, it was raining heavily, RaBir were in car, not talking to each other, Rachna had tears inn her eyes but she was hiding them. Suddenly the car stopped.

Kabir: Oh shit ab kya hogya yaar!

He got out of the car and opened it's bonut, looked in and came back.

Rachna: kya hua(being tensed)

Kabir: woh car heat up hogayi hai...thoda wait karna padega... mein ghar call karke doosri car mangwaa leta hun.

Rachna: hmmm...

Rachna was getting scared of the thunder's loud noises, she rounded her arms around herself.

Kabir: oh no, signals bhi nahi aa rahay, I guess we would have to wait.

Rachna: ok

He closed the car's door and rested his head back on the seat.

There was a silence between them, while resting his head he noticed she is getting scared of the storm's loud noises. When suddenly a loud thunder struck, she hugged herself and closed her eyes tight.

Looking at this Kabir without saying a word hugged her, she hugged him back 😳😳and tried to hide herself in his chest😳, holding his coat tight and clutching it. He hugged her more tightly, they remained like this for a few minutes.

she looks in his eyes while half hugging he also looked in her eyes with so much love and tried to kiss her😳😳she closed her eyes he also closed his and kissed on her lips slowly slowly with sooo much passion 😳 not allowing her to go away he lost her senses she also lost her sense and she kept her eyes closed. Both just wanted to live that moment, to be with each other, to have that time to last forever... he was kissing her lips for long time😳 and she was clutching his collar ,while kissing her his hand reached her back and his fingers tried to open her zip😳. when she rest herself back on her seat while closing her eyes and he kissed her hands and arms she was breathing so high😳😳😳 and keeping
her eyes closed while kissing her arms his lips reached her shoulder and tried to lower her strips he while kissing her shoulder make her strips down till shoulder and kissed her bare shoulder and she hold him frm hairs and wth his other hand he touched her bare legs and tried to up her dress when...suddenly Kabir's cell rang...😆😆😆😆