RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May) - Page 8

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please pm me when you've updated the next part?

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Originally posted by: yellowpurse

i'm so happy..thank God u ended the misunderstanding...i actually hate these kinds & was going to mention it in the last post but then thought how would the story go on...and when I 1st started reading this part I was sooo disappointed & in disapproval with Rachana's reaction...her shouting & blaming Kabir.. but then again, by mid u made sure she realizes that if she wants to blame, half is her fault too.

Awesome update! put the next one up soon! can't wait to c what's in store :)

Originally posted by: usrfan

I am glad Rachna realised, whether it was a treat or a crime, she was a 50% partner 😉.

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

awesome! loved it! lets see what happens next! waiting!

Originally posted by: sanjali

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please pm me when you've updated the next part?

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Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Awesome!!! Plz plz continue

Chapter 12:

Pihu: Rachna Kabir !!!

RaBir get shocked.

Pihu enters the room and keeps the tray in her hand on a table

Pihu: kya ho raha hai yeh sab?? Kabir mujhe sab kuch bataao kya ho rha hai yahan?

Rachna: dee who kuch nahi hum tou aise hee..

Kabir(scared): haan bhabhi hum tou bas aise hee.. mein na Rachna ko tang kar rha tha aur iss ne ro diya, isliye issay console kar diya, hai na Rachna

Rachna: hahhaha haan dee

Pihu: Rachna tum kab se mujh se jhoot bolne lagee hooo

Rachna(shocked): dee mein jhoot..

Pihu: haan I am sure tum dono mujh se kuch chupaa rahay ho bataao mujhe abhi issi waqt... meine sab kuch sun liya hai bataao mujhay Kabir kal raat kya hua thaa?

Rachna: dee kuch bhi tou nahi aap aise hee..

Pihu: tum chup raho mein Kabir se baat kar rahi hoon... Kabir bataao mujhe kal raat kya huwa tha??

Rachna: dee aap aise zidd kyun...

Kabir(interrupted): Rachna I guess humein bhabhi ko bata dena chahiye..

Rachna(shocked): kya nahi Kabir please!

Kabir: Rachna please ek na ek din pata tou lagna hai na

Rachna shaking her head in no

Kabir: relax Rachna trust me

Pihu: jaldi bataao, aaj mujhe tum sab kuch bataao ge.

Kabir: bhabhi woh kya hua ke hum party mein gaye the wahan Rachna ka mood kharaab thaa phir meine ussay cheer up...

Pihu(interrupted):Kabir come to the point yeh mazaak ka waqt nahi hai!

Rachna: mein batati hoon na dee..

Pihu: Rachna chup kar Kabir bataao jaldi!

Kabir: woh bhabhi actually kal raat mein aur Rachna... (looking towards Rachna, Rachna was giving him looks to not tell)... woh I mean meine aur Rachna ne kal raat

Pihu: uff jaldi bolooo!!! (in anger)

Kabir: woh kal raat hum dono ne (Rachna closed her eyes)..kal raat hum dono ne realize kiya ke we are in love with each other (Rachna sighed with relief)

Pihu: kyaaa!!!! Are u serious (happy happy) means tum aur Rachna..

Kabir: haan bhabhi sachi God promise iss baar koi mazaak nahi kar raha...

Rachna (blushing)...

Pihu: hmmm chalo koi tou acha kaam kiya tumne (and winked at him)

Rachna: dee aap bhi na..

Pihu: ehem btw tu itna kyun dar rahi thi mujhe bataane se

Rachna: aise hee darr lag raha tha pata nahi aap kya sochogee

Pihu: hmm sochna tou ab sab ghar walon ko padega

Kabir: matlab??

Pihu: matlab sab ghar walon ko batana tou padega naa (smilingly)

(Pihu in mind: am sure sab bohat khush hongay) and hugged Rachna

...afternoon...

...At dining table...

Kabir(slowly): bhabi baat suno na..

Pihu: kya hai?

*Rachna confused*

Kabir: mujhe aap se ek zaroori kaam hai.. please lunch ke baad gayab mat hojana!

Pihu: hahaha nahi hungee gayab!

Rachna: jiju yeh kya ho rha hai, humein kyun nahi bata rahe yeh log

Mohan: pata nahi mujhay bhi kuch nahi pata...(confused)

Mean while sughanda and Om also joined...

Om: Rachna beta aap ne apne papa se baat ki?

Rachna: haan uncle kal hee baat hui thee aaj tou nahi..

Om: acha aaj baat kar lena. He was trying your cell but it wasn't responding.

Rachna: ok uncle.

...After the lunch, in kitchen...

Kabir: bhabhi sunoo naa

Pihu: Kabir kyun mera sar khaa rahe hoo

Kabir: woh aap se ek baat poochni thee..

Pihu: kya?

Kabir: Rachna ka favourite colour konsa hai?

Pihu: ohhh mein kyun bataun tumhari GF hai na (laughing)

Kabir: bhabi plzz bataao na!

Pihu: hmmm acha acha ussay Pink colour pasand hai

Kabir: aur uska favourite food?

Pihu: yeh bhi mein bataaoon? ek baat bataao jab tumhein kuch nahi maaloom tou propose kyun kiya (hahahhaha)

Kabir: bhabi please aapko mazaak soojh raha hai please bataao na!!

Pihu: haan ussay Chinese pasand hai... wait a minute yeh sab kyun pooch rahay ho?

Kabir: woh mein soch raha tha ke aaj mein aur Rachna dinner kahin bahir karenge akele sirf mein aur woh..

Pihu: ohhh lekin sooo sorry am not going to allow her for dates(hahhahah)

Kabir: bhabi please dekho mera plan spoil mat karo...yeh surprise hai.

*Mean while Rachna entered*

Rachna: kya horha hai?

Pihu: k..kuch bhi tou nahi

Rachna: Kabir I know tum mujh se kuch chupa rahe ho bataao mujhe!

Kabir: array sachee kuch bhi nahi

Rachna: ok mat bataao 😡...dee papa se baat karo meine baat karli hai.

Pihu: acha okk.

Pihu left... Kabir got naughty 😛 he was giving Rachna naughty looks.. 😛

Rachna: aisay kyun dekh rahay hoo?

Kabir: kaise dekh raha hoon?

He started moving towards her with his damn killer looks.. Rachna started moving backwards

Rachna(blushing): Kabir please dekho stop there!

She kept on moving backwards and Kabir was moving towards her, in end she collided with the refrigerator at her back.. he kept on coming closer and closer to her

Rachna(blushing and getting nervous by time as he came closer and closer): Kabir please stop, koi dekh lega.

He moved his face towards her ear, she closed her eyes and he moved his hand towards her waist, he didn't touch her yet, and then he whispered

Kabir(husky voice): mujhe kuch chahiye

Rachna opened her eyes...she found his face too close to her

Rachna: k.k...kya... (looking in his eyes)

Kabir: woh sirf tum de sakti hooo

Rachna: m..m..matlab...

Kabir: matlab mujhay paani peena hai tum hatogee nahi tou fridge kaisay khulega (and laughed out loud)

Rachna(sighed with relief): huh Kabir tumm... (and she ran away from there)

Kabir: pagal hai poori...

Mean while Mohan entered

Mohan: ehem ehem oh bhai kya baat hai apne aap mein kyun has raha hai?

Kabir: na..nahi tou...

Mohan: acha sunn teri bhabhi kahan hai?

Kabir: woh room mein...

Mohan: acha

As he was about to leave...

Kabir: bhaii ruko rukooo

Mohan: kya hua?

Kabir: woh aap kabhi bhabi ke saath date pe gaye ho?

Mohan: kya??? 😲 hahhahha yeh kya hota hai bhayee haan hum date pe nahi dinners pe gaye hain idiot

Kabir: bhai kuch idea doo naa mein kya karun?

Mohan: Kabir tu date pe jaa raha hai lekin kiske saath?? (winked)😉

Kabir: ladki ke sath obviously

Mohan: oh god zahir hai.. ab tu Mayank ke sath tou date pe nahi jaa sakta lekin bataa hai koun ehem?

Kabir: Rachna (winked)😉

Mohan: kya Rachna aur tuuu! woh bhi date pe!! impossible! restaurant walay bolengay bhaagooo yahan se (laughing)

Kabir: bhaai aap mazaak udana band karo mera

And he left from there

Rachna in her room blushing and blushing...

Rachna(in mind): oh god aaj Kabir ne meri jaan nikal dee thi, meine samjha pata nahi kya karne wala hai woh...Rachna tu bhi na kya kya sochtee hai

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Freaking awesome! can't wait 4 their date.plz update soon

mein soch rahi hoon ki ande ya tamatars ke badle...thanda thanda fridge-wala😉 pani throw karo😆 that scene was too cute! how romantic...planning a date for his dear rachana? kya baat hai! bacha bada ho gaya hai😆 great update! as always...will eagerly wait to for the next one :)