RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May) - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bismillah5985

WOW amazing story read all 14 prts nice to c rabir diffrent frm th actual program keep up ur gud wrk n plzzz update soon n thnx



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Posted: 11 years ago

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Haayyy!!!! amazing!!!! update sooon!!!



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Originally posted by: sandjanarai

Really Nice. Please update soon!!!


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Originally posted by: sheenshreesen

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Read all 14 parts

Amazing updates
Plz continue soon
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Originally posted by: -Eris-

nice ff .. continue soon :)


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey everyone! Firstly sorry for the delay secondly thanks for your lovely response. Here is the next chapter, hope u like it! :)

Chapter 15:

Pihu was searching for Kabir but couldn't find him in his room
Pihu(in mind):kahan chala gya itni subah subah? 😕
As she got out from his room, she saw the terrace door open 😲

On the other hand...

Sun rays were falling on Rachna's face
Rachna: 🥱 yeh curtains kisne kholay hain... and she open her eyes, she was shocked to see thatt she was on terrace and Kabir sleeping on her lap.
Rachna: 😲 subah hogayee Oh no aur hum yaheen per hain
she became tensed
Rachna: Kabir uthoo!! (while shaking him)😲 Kabir!! 😡
Kabir: 🥱 kya hai yaar sonay do na
Rachna: 😡 haan jaake neechay sojaana abhi acha khaasa dose milega tumhari wajah se
he woke up yawning 🥱
Kabir: kya hai Rachna 🥱 kyun pareshan kar rahi ho?
Rachna: mein pareshaan kar rahi hun? subah hogayee hai!! 😡
Kabir: pata hai mujhay tou whats new roz hee hotee hai 🥱
Rachna: Kabir i guess tum apnay senses mein nahi ho dekho hum kahan hain
Kabir: kahan hain😲 Oh Nooo 😲 shittt

Both stood up
Rachna: ab kya hoga agar kisi ne dekh liya tou 😲
Kabir: 😕ek minute pehlay mein jaa raha hun phir tum neechay aana
Rachna:kyaaa?? 😡 taake mujhay daant milay hai na
Kabir: Oh God agar humein yahan saath dekh liya na is condition mein tou hum dono ka murder hoga 😡 tumhein bachaa raha hun aur kuch nahi
Rachna: yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua hai
Kabir: acha meri wajah se, meine tumhein bola tha ke tum mere ooper apna sir rakh ke so jaao
Rachna:😲 aur tum ne jo kiya woh 😡
Kabir: acha acha ab lado mat mein jaa raha hun...
(while leaving ) aur yeh lo apna
Rachna: kya? 😕
Kabir: tumhari nighty ka upper aur kya 😆
she looked at herself
Rachna:😲yeh tumharay pass kaise aaya? 😲
Kabir: kyunki meine pehna hua tha 😆 kitni idiot ho zahir hai tum jab ladayee kar rahee thee mujh se us waqt gir gaya tha chalo mein jaa raha hun and kissed on her cheeks
Rachna:😳😳

when Kabir reached the stairs he saw Pihu 😲 he was damn shocked 😲
Pihu:😲 tum itni subah subah ooper kya kar rahe the? 😕
Kabir: wo..woh aisay hee neechay uljhan ho rahee theee..
Pihu: uljhan? 😕
Kabir: bhabhi aap batayen na kya hua 😃
Pihu: wo tumhein mohan bula rahe the
Kabir: oh acha mein bas abhi aaya fresh hokay
Pihu: acha ok mein tab tak terrace ki lights...
Kabir: wo..woh nahi bhabi meine kardi hain, aap chalein na neechay 😳
Pihu: hmm.. mein zara Rachna ko dekhun wo pata nahin...
Kabir: Rach..Rachna...woh tou jaldi uthee thee meine usse dekha tha
Pihu: acha lekin abhi tak kya kar rahee hai?
Kabir: fresh ho rahi hogi na 😃
Pihu: tumhein bada pata hai kya baat hai 😉
Kabir: meine tou aisay hee guess kiya
Pihu: acha theek hai jaldi aao neechay mein breakfast ready kar rahi hun
Pihu left
Kabir: ok.. thank God! 😃

...


At breakfast table

Kabir passing mysterious smile to Rachna 😉 Rachna was confused..
when everyone left the table
Rachna: kya hua aisay kyun dekh rahay ho? 😕
Kabir:kyunki aaj kuch alag honay wala hai 😉
Rachna: matlab? 😕
Kabir: matlab yeh ke sirf tum aur mein...😉
Rachna: kahan?😕
Kabir: ghar pe aur kahan 😃
Rachna: Kabir seedha seedha bolo!! 😡 😲 tum kya karnay walay ho?
Kabir: mein abhi bemaar honay wala hun 😉
Rachna:kya?? 😲 yeh konsi bemaari hai jo bataa ke aatee hai? 😲
Kabir: Oh hooo buddhu mein abhi bemaari ka natak karnay wala hun 😉
Rachna: tou is mein itna romantic kya hai? 😡
Kabir: romantic yeh hai ke maa papa bhai aur bhabhi jaane waale hain family friend ki wedding pe aur mein bemaar honay wala hun... (Rachna interrupted)
Rachna: aur mein bhi jaa rahi hun wedding pe woww kitna mazaa aayega! 😃
Kabir: 😡 khabardaar jo tum ne aisa kiya! tumhein college ka buhat kaam hai na tum nahi jaa rahee hai na 😳 haan bolo
Rachna: nahi!
Kabir: haan!
Rachna: nahi!
Kabir: theek hai jaao phir mein bhabi ko kal raat wala sab bataunga ke tumhari nighty... 😉😆
Rachna: Kabir!!😡
Kabir:comeon Rachna plzzz!! 😳😉
Rachna: ok😳 par agar kisi ko pata lag gya tou? 😲
Kabir: nahi lagega sachi mein 😳
Rachna: ☺️

...
Kabir coughing so hard 😆
Sugandha: kya hua?
Kabir: kuch nahi maa shayad fever hai aur cold bhi
Sugandha: tu ultee cheezain khayega tou yehee hoga na, chal araam karlo raat ko shaadi pe bhi jaana hai
Kabir: maa mujhay nahi jaana meri tabiyat theek nahi hai plzz
sugandha: acha shaam tak dekh lena agar mann ho tou
Kabir: nahi maa aap log jaao plzz
Sugandha: nahi phir mein nahi jaati Pihu chalee jayegee 😛
Kabir: nahi nahi maa aap meri wajah se matlab mein theek hojaungaa aap jaao plzz
Sugandha: theek hai jaisa tu kahe..

Kabir laughing in mind...


...

Pihu: Rachu yeh saree dekh kaisi hai? aaj tum yehee pehan lena 😛
Rachna: dee kis liye?
Pihu: arrey hum shaadi pe jaa rahay hain 😛
Rachna: lekin dee mein kaise? kal mera exam hai itna sara kaam hai kaise hoga? 😕
Pihu: oh chal koi baat nahi mein ruk jaati hun waise bhi maa tou jaa hee rahi hain
Rachna: nahi nahi dee! m..mera matlab uski koi zaroorat nahi aap jaao na mein theek hun
Pihu: tujhay akela kaisay chor ke jaun
Rachna: dee kuch hee ghanton ki tou baat hai

Mean while Sughanda enters Rachna's room

Sugandha: arrey tum bhi nahi chal rahi? Kabir bhi nahi chal raha aisay tou..

Pihu understood and she gave an angry look to Rachna

Rachna:😲aunty mujhay bohat kaam hai na
Pihu:maa mein ruk jaati hun
Sugandha: arrey nahi tu chal... sahi hai, Kabir aur Rachna hee ghar pe rahengay mein khaana banwaa deti hun
Pihu:lekin maan
Sug:lekin wekin kuch nahi tum log ki nayee shaadi huee hai sba log poochangay chalo jaakay tayaar ho

Rachna gave stern smile to Pihu

sughanda left

Pihu: Rachna mein jaanti hun yeh tera aur Kabir ka plan hai 😡
Rachna: nahi dee sachee mein pakka mujhay kaam hai
Pihu: Rachna dhyaan se samjheee

...
At night everyone left for wedding only Kabir and Rachna were alone at home 😉

Kabir (in his mind): Dr Rachna Garg aaj tou buhat mazaa aane waala hai..
he entered in Rachna's room

Kabir: oh hello meine naatak karnay ko bola tha yeh nahi bola tha sach mein kaam karnay ke liye beth jana
Rachna: ab mein kya karun agar mujhay sach mein kaam karna pad raha hai 😆
Kabir: chodo yeh sab tum mere saath chalo
Rachna: kahan? 😕
Kabir: mere room mein chalo 😳
Rachna: kya lekin kyun?? 😲😲😲
Kabir: kyunki mein tumhara faida uthanay wala hun! 😉
Rachna:very funny and throwed pillow to him
she was about to leave when the light suddenly went 😲
Rachna: Kabir yeh kya hogya? 😲 light chalee gayee
Kabir: oh haan shayad koi problem hoga ek minute mein dekhta hun
Rachna: nahi mein bhi chalungee
Kabir: ok chaloo lekin araam se gir mat jana
they were on stairs
Rachna(scared held Kabir's arm): Kabir mujhay buhat darr lag raha hai😭
Kabir: ohoo Rachna daro mat hum bas puhanchnay waale hain kitchen

they reached the kitchen
Kabir: candles candles candles yeh rahee 😃 chalo jalaao
Rachna lightens the candles😛

Kabir kept on staring her
Kabir: woww kitni beautiful lag rahee ho😳
Rachna: 😳 chalein

Kabir gets closer to her
Kabir(husky voice): kahan? 😳
Rachna: humaray..mera matlab tumharay room mein 😳
Kabir: kyun yeheen ruktay hain na 😳
Rachna: Kabir chalo naaa
she was about to leave when Kabir held her dupatta
Rachna's heart skipped a beat 😳😲 he pulled her dupatta slowly and she was moving close to him finally she touched his body, he made her face turn to his face and took the candle from her and kept it on table. Rachna was unable to meet his eyes, he caressed her hair from her face and grabbed her from waist 😳 she held his shirt and closed her eyes
Kabir(whispered): buhat darr lag raha hai na
Rachna: matlab? 😕
He kissed her cheeks softly, Rachna's heart beat raised so high and then he kissed her lips softly with so much passion, she also started responding him. After a long lip lock they broke and Rachna blushed

and suddenly light came back

Kabir: ehem shayad light issi liye gayee thee hai na 😉
Rachna☺️: Kabir
Kabir: hmm ek aur kiss doon
Rachna: nahi! (she pushed him and started running)
Kabir: tum nahi bachogee ab!

He started chasing her, they were running all around the house and finally he caught her and pushed her on a pillar 😉
they were lost in each other's eyes and Kabir kissed on her lips again ☺️ and then on her cheeks
Kabir: i Love u 😳
Rachna: i love u too ☺️ ..but chhoddo ab mujhay warna tum.. 😳
Kabir: tumhein nahi pata meine khud ko kaisay sambhala hua hai 😳
Rachna (pinched him): Kabir 😳 chalo ab mujhay bhook lagi hai
Kabir: ma'am pizza order kiya hai, aata hee hoga 😳

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Edited by RabirLover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yay you're back!! Loved this chapter! Love the chemistry between Rachna and Kabir!

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