RaBir FF Chapter 10 UPDATED.

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

owww great part,
i like nitya 😊

great atlast they danced, for a moment i was sad because i thought that the day would end without their dance...

sooo sweet he gave ger the locket,

just hope it is the marriage only with kabir..

thanks for pm

and about the story, this can be long as you want..

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linu82

@linu82

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Oh my god i m blushing, blushing, it was so sweet. Everything was perfect, u describe so well the scene that i can visualize it. Continue the story as long as u can, i ll be there to read it. Hope we will have scenes like that between them. Very nice update, cant wait for the next part now. More i read ur ff, more i want to see rabir interacting in the show like that. [;)]

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brat2008

@brat2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

That was ufffg Romantic

I really want all the scenes in the series too. It will turn out to be awesome😉

Nithya is playing Cupid here 😆 How sweet😃

Rachna & kabir dance would be so dreamy to watch😃.

Pls don't stop writing the FF. am here to read waiting eagerly😆

Omg ! All that romance I can visualize each scene

Fantabulous writing dear, keep it up👏👏👏

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Silvy

@SilverBell

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+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Waiting For The Next Chapter.
And Rachna's Marriage's Is Getting Fixed.
With Adi??

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vishwa

@yellowpurse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

it was amazing! special mention for the end part because it was so pleasantly unexpected...we're so used to guys having ego issues, come true with/sort out their feelings this fast and act on them. It was really interesting that kabir just made the move (thanks/dance)...and again with bracelet...

oh, and this line cracked me up: "Adi is taken away by his colleagues or frnz...(wtever)... "

and as for how long we want the ff...to go on & on & on & on... :p

Edited by yellowpurse - 11 years ago

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oishi

@Oishiii

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

awesome update dear👏👏

sooo romantic😳😳

i have little confusion

is adi in love with rachna???

update soon😛

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angelheart19

@angelheart19

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Thanks for the pm. You are a amazing writer and the story is great .👏.Really want this to happen in the show also. Waiting eagerly for the next part..

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Kikidramagirl

@Kikidramagirl

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Seriously they should just hire you as the writer for Rabir scenes. I was blushing throughout the whole thing ☺️

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Colt.Pixy

@Colt.Pixy

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: usrfan

Why put the blame on Kabir (as if, pehle sub log sharafat ke murat the) 🤣 🤣. Drooled over Rajiv before. Now Kabir 😆 .
@Sharita. Even I am reaching there (graying). I am not bothered to dye. In this regard, I am a follower of Mallika Sherawat. If you have it, flaunt it 😉 .

abey yar, rajiv ufff

I was watching snap shots of hockey time recently on zs page. both are in attitude man ☺️ I have missed chance to drool over rajiv so vasuling all here 🤣

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Colt.Pixy

@Colt.Pixy

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#140

wow angel
what an update
pouring hot water, she shouting, he keeping his hand on her mouth

kabir in towel, she gets embarrassed
, then dance ☺️

waiting for update

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