Vina FF: Love Dobara!! Part 2 Updtd Treat Note pg4 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantastic update!!! 👏
Edited by MSN_Vanny - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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himm
it hink rachna & vihaan wil be one of my favourite couples😊

this was good, please pm me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it... Its super cute when vihaan nd rachna fight at little things.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Auww i just came across this FF! How sweet Vihaan and Rachna, I think slowly I am falling in love with them
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww...i love how it's turning into hate-love relationship..thank u so much, u do have some great writing skills..kudos👍🏼👏

edited and updated my comment on PG1😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: riva2987

awww...i love how it's turning into hate-love relationship..thank u so much, u do have some great writing skills..kudos👍🏼👏


edited and updated my comment on PG1😊

Thank you but that's not the truth..I do not have great writing skills...It's just an odinary writing peice nothing special about it😳😳
But thank you for commenting and everybody else
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ApurvaLovesARVI

Thank you but that's not the truth..I do not have great writing skills...It's just an odinary writing peice nothing special about it😳😳
But thank you for commenting and everybody else


babe, seriously...if u are hooking the people with story then definitely means u have some great skills...and i was toh gripped with the storyline😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you very Much😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Warning:This Update is No Good, Don't waste your precious time reading it.
If you think I can write some mere words and You are bieng bored then read this Crapy Update.
Part 2 The Touch of Love
"Rachna please don't Panic, and stop chanting your these Mantras"
"Vihaan, I am very nervous I don't know how I will do it"Rachna wiped the sweat beads off her forehead.
"Rachna see, Listen everything will be OK if you will stop Panicking, put a smile on you face and the Dance will be beautiful"
"I am trying to...I need to go to washroom"Rachna stood up
Vihaan had to do something. It is just 3 hours to go for the "Fresher of the Year" competition and Rachna was nervous like Hell.
As he was her Mentor he had to take care of her and do every possible effort to make the Dance WIN!!
But why he was caring so Much about Rachna's Dance?
He was taking the Dance as If it didn't get good his right arm would be cut off.
"Vihaan I have to get ready"Rachna was Back from the Washroom.
"Yes, then get ready"
"Vihaan..ahh I have to get Ready, I have to change my cloths for the Final practise"
"So what's the Prob..."Vihaan paused as he thought what she meant.
"Ohh I am so Sorry Rachna...I was just..."
"Okay Okay Now go..."
"I don't Mind staying here, Anyways"Vihaan flirted
"You...Just after this Round finishes I will Fry you and eat with sauce"
"My Pleasure young Lady!!"Vihaan bowed like a Gentle Man
"Now go Out"Rachna pushed him out the door and smiled at the incident
" He is a Joker, But he is nice"
"I heard it"
He is standing near the Door?
"Vihaan just go and change too, you are also in the Dance have you forgotten the fact?"
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"Ahh I can't to it"Rachna was tired getting her Back button to the hook.
"What will I do now? I can't go like this outside, Gunjan is in the other room...Yes Vihaan!"
"Vihaan!" Rachna shouted getting very close to the door
Her heart sank getting no reply. Has Vihaan gone? No! No!
"Vihaan!"
"What happened Rachna Madam?"
"Vihaan no time of you jokes now, I am in a problem, get Gunjan here fast"
"Rachna? Gunjan isn't here tell me what happened"
Ohh Now Rachna had no option except to Tell Vihaan.
"Vihaan I can't tie the Back Button"Rachna opened the Door.
"Don't worry I will help you"
"What?? You??"Rachna was bewildred
"There is no one out there to Help You..Please turn nothing will happen don't worry"
Rachna had to turn, No other option seemed available at the Moment.
Vihaan moved his had forward near her Back to tie the Button
Shiver ran through her Body feeling his touch on her Back
It took more time than required, But that happens when you are in such a situation...😳
How was it dear readers? Have I made to your Expectations? I personally feel I have written worst that the previous part.
I haven't proof-read...so Sorry
Edited by ApurvaLovesARVI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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babes u r doing great👍🏼 , loved how story is moving forward...and the interaction between rachna and vihaan is so cute...

keep updating more😊

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