Vina FF: Love Dobara!! Part 2 Updtd Treat Note pg4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prolougue

"Rachna do it this way" "I am doing it right" "No you aren't, doing like this will make the Dance look beautiful"

And here they were, at Rachna's room practising for the final Dance round.
It was funny to look how the 2 Enemies co-ordinated for just this Dance
"Why I am even Dancing with you?" Rachna was irritated, with Vihaan being his Guruji, and correcting every single thing
"Because I am you Mentor and I want you Dance to be the Best"Vihaan said as if he is a mind reader.
"Arggh okay, show me how to do it, with perfection Mentor"
"Ahh that's good, Look It goes like this"
And he showed her the steps.
"Ha Ha Ha Ha!!He He He"Rachna was laughing uncontrollably, seeing a 6-packed man Like Vihaan doing a Girly step.
"What's so funny?" roared Vihaan
"Y..yy..o..ur S..te..e..p..ss" Rachna spoke still Laughing
"Whatever, Now do this" Vihaan ordered her, still shaking his head, like shaking away this funny incident.
"Okay, this foot, then this" Rachna was doing Vihaan's step gracefully
"Then this swirl and...ahh"
And she was about to fall.
Rachna closed her eyes to meet the fate of ground, but before her Back could touch it...
Vihaan caught her by Back and saved her from falling
Rchna opened her eyes and were lost in his...
How was it? It is a Prolougue..I will start after getting good response..
Index
Part 1 Dil Dosti DANCE!!
Part 2 The Touch of Love
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!!!! That was mind-blowing!!!! I love it!!!! 👏 👏

I have a feeling this will be fun-filled! 😆 Please continue soon! 😳

I will add you! Can you please PM me? 😳
Edited by MSN_Vanny - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome prologue apurva...👏

it was indeed a very dreamy take by you

and plz PM me too...i would love to be read your updates...😉

best of luck for further updates, hope they will be a nice as this one😊
Edited by riva2987 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg what s it with the FF writers!!! you guys are making me fall for Vihaan more and more 😊. First it was the smirks then Vanny points out the dimpled chin then now you talk about the 6 packs. Ab mera kya hoga 😆.

Super fun update!! This was just the appetizerwaiting for the first part. Do update soon!
Edited by vibz88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great prologue, sounds very good
oww please continuee and pm me 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohh and im sorry because i cant write long comments, im bad in this😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😲 Me, Rivz and Vibz had reserved one after the other?!! 🤣 That's telepathy! ❤️ Love you guys!!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow it is very good so far.It's cute!
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Part 1

Dil Dosti and DANCE!!!
He slowly took her hand in his, and they rthymatically danced to Romantic Tune playing in the background.
He twirled her gracefully.
Her dress swished the floor.
He pulled her close, his hands on her Back,
and her Hands on his shoulder, thier free hands adjoined.
Everthing was so Beautiful, so Lovely, so Dreamy
He opened his Mouth to say something...
"RACHNA!!"
Rachna came out from her trance with her Jerk, has she been Imagining all these things? Was she Imagining Vihaan dancing with her?
"Rachna! Ohh My God! where are you lost my jaan?" It was Gunjan shaking her out of her Dreamland, wait did she say dream land, NO..
"Nothing Gunjan, just thinking something"Rachna lied, there was no other option...
"What about?"Rachna questioned, she was not going to give away easily
"I..I w..was..THINKING..aa..ab..abo..ut..eh.."Rachna tried to act normal
"About the Dance we are preparing!"It was from Vihaan, with a smirk on his face.
"Where you popped from Mr. Vihaan"Rachna asked
"I was just here, Now that's not my fault some people walk, lost somewhere" And he again smirked.
How Rachna wished to wipe off that stupid smirk off his face.
"So Rachna Madam, I hope you haven't forgotten you Dance Paractise!!!"
"Oh I forgot to tell you we couldn't practise today"Rachna suddenly remembered and grewed a Bit sad.
"Because some Guests will come, and they will be disturbed"
"Oh Rachna I have an Idea, I have seen a Dance academy, we can rent a room there and we all 4 can practise"Gunjan jumped at her Idea
"Great! Gunjan"Rachna patted her
"GG Great Gunjan Ha ha ha "It was Vihaan
"What's so funny, Vihaan"
"What was so funny in my steps Rachna!"
"That was Different"
"So this is"
"No"
"Yes it is"
"You.."
"Come on, It just a joke"
"But on my sister"
"Jokes are allowed on Gunjan?😆"
"They are not! from you"
"Why are being so possesive?"
"She is my sister"
"I asked something else"
"Why do you ask such things, don't you know..."
"Enough! Enough! What was the reason of the fight and what it is now?" Gunjan had to interrupt, this was getting on her nerves, ths is not the thing of just one day...Everyday she has to face with this MINI Encounter.
"Rachna come with me, there is a class to attend, and Vihaan just come on time"Gunjan dragged Rachna along with her.
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"Now Please Vihaan, today don't try to be my Guruji, correcting every step, you know it's irritating"
"What I do is just for you benefit, If you don't want I will Leave"
"No I didn..."
"Okay now leave it let's practise"
1,2,3 turn..swirl
1,2,3 catch bend and pose
There was a lift, a Catch Bend , pose , swrils , turns , runs , and much more.
Ever possible effort was made to make the Dance look Beautiful.
And*sigh* it was from her Mentor, which is Irritatiom
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"Okay Rachna, tommorow is Costume practise"
"Yes I know"
"Ohh really😆"
"Yes..What's funny in it"
"😆"
"You wait...!!! And the TOM and Jerry chase Began with sighs from Rajeev sir and Gunjan, what could they do about these two!!
How was it? I know Crap
PLease let me know you opinions on this
And you know the Prolougue was my first post in this forum...
Love you Guys
Apurva
Edited by ApurvaLovesARVI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww I just could not stop smiling throught the update.

Oh Rachna hates him but daydreams about him 😆. I just adore this arrogant smirk wala vihaan 😳. The fighting sounds so real 👍🏼 Waiting for the next part
Edited by vibz88 - 12 years ago

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