Yeh dosti ( Foursome Bidaai FF ) Updated Chapter 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Sara first update was awesome please continue soon. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its great and liked it and their pasts making more interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plzzz update soon r daily update kr dya kro na
nd um very exited about ragini character ...hw they all met nd then wht happen cnt w8 more plzzz update soon ...loving my ragini
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please continue soon lovely chapter

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow really nice.different concept.eagerly waiting for ragvir meet and to know ragini's past.Wow I just love this.my sweetus are so cute and different in this.ranvir changing jobs like clothes and ragini pretends to be stone hearted but i know ragini is such a sweetheart.Do continue and please pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey sara plzz continue yaar.
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it was morning. It was 5 o clock

Sadhna wake up. she was reallly excited. she was keep thinking what will happen. how will be the place. how will be my collegues ect but at the same time, she was really scared that is she gonna get selected or not. Sadhna was praying that she gets selected. After praying, Sadhna got ready in a hurry

Sadhna: omg its so late.

Sadhna take out her car and she was on her way to plasma plaza

Scene shifted to ranvir house.

Ranvir was still on bed snoring. Ranvir mom enter the room

ranvir mom: wake up beta. its too late

ranvir: mom plzz. gave me 1 minute

ranvir mom: nooo beta wake up. you have to go to the interview

ranvir: okay mom

Ranvir wake up and got ready. then he take out his car and was on his way to the place

ranvir: dont know why was I so exicted. c'mon I wanna sleep more. I dont want to do this damn jobbb.

Scene shifted to ragini house

ragini was looking outside the window. Suddenly she realize. suddenly someone knock at the door. ragini went to open it

ragini: hello

neighbor: ragini did you forgot. you have to go to the interview

ragini: No I remember

neighbor: then get ready or else you will be late

ragini: neighbor di mind your own business. I know what to do. it will be better if no one interferes

neighboor: sorry ragini

ragini shut the door and she went to her room and got ready. She was on her way to the place

scene shifted to alekh house

Alekh was hiding under the bed becuase he dont want to go to interview. suddenly his dada screamed

dada sahab: ALEKHHH

alekh: jeee dada sahab

dada sahab: Get ready.

alekh: okay

alekh got ready. he was in rush and he was on his way to the shop


Sadhna was the first one to reach there.

sadhna: where are other people. Dont know who are these. its their first interview. cant they come early. well who cares. I am here. OMG OMG I am damn excited

sadhna sit on the chair and she was waiting. she was feeling bore.

suddenly she heard a noise of another car.

sadhna stand up and she ran outside to see who is it.

it was alekh.

sadhna rush and went by the car. Suddenly she heard a dog bark. Sadhna got damn scared.

sadhna hold alekh hand.

sadhna: bachaaooo

alekh: OMG You are scared of a dog???

sadhna: yesss

Alekh: How are you gonna become detective.

Dog went away

Sadhna: Why. to become a detective. you need to be passionate about it. you need to be excited about it. If you have these qualities then you can easily become a successful detective. as of confidence. well it comes when you become detective.

alekh: Ha yeh bhi sach hai

Sadhna went away.

suddenly another car stop. it was ranvir car

ranvir: Hi dude

alekh: Hi

ranvir: your name

alekh: my name is alekh

ranvir: niceee my name is ranvir. so you are also hear for interview

alekh: yeah

ranvir: who is inside. making so much noise

alekh: ohh shes a crazy girl. shes too excited to be detective

ranvir: wooowww. I love crazy girls

alekh: ohh you are flirty.

ranvir: yupp

Both of them went inside.

ranvir could not stop himself. He went close to sadhna.

ranvir: Hi

Sadhna: Hi.

ranvir: waisa what are you doing today

sadhna: ohh alot. So much work that cant tell.

sadhna was keep speaking on and on

ranvir: ohh okay. thanks I am coming in 2 mins

ranvir then stood by alekh. both of them said in ears.

ranvir and alekh: Kitni paakkoo hai. Miss latter patter.

suddenly another car stop. it was ragini.

ragini came inside.

ranvir went towards her.

Ranvir: Hi

ragini: whatever

ranvir got scared and he went towards alekh.

ranvir: Kya yaar yeh kaisa girls hain.

alekh: Yeah one is miss latter patter and the other is...

ranvir: lets think of her nickname. ohh yeahh

alekh: are you thinking the same I am thinking

Yes yes

both said together Miss bhoott


People start coming.

The interview time finally started. They were calling 4 candidates each.

The first four candidates were Sonika, sonia, raj, roopali. All four were rejected

Candidates kept coming. But everyone was getting rejected.

then finally it was sadhna ragini ranvir alekh turn. All four went inside.

There were 3 senior detectives who were asking questions.

one of them was Mr taarun. he was mainly the person rejecting people.

Mr Taarun: So Sadhna Alekh ranvir ragin. why do you want to be detective

Sadhna: Hi sir. I am studying about detectives. I wanted to be detective from childhood. I am really really passionate about this job. Life is like mystie. its fill of twists and turns so I think its the only and only job where we could solve the mystire of our life.

Alekh: Detective is actually in my blood. my all family is detective.

Ragini: For me I want to give punishment to all those who are criminals. For me becoming detective is really important

Ranvir: I do in life what I wanted to do. I do whatever interest me. So I thought why not to take this up.

Mr taarun: Interesting. some of you say, you want to become detective because you always wanted to be and you loved being detective. Some of you say you want to gave punishment to criminals. some of you say you say its just your crush. you just want to do it for now. Some of you say its on the blood of your family.

But these are not the accurate reasons for me to hire you all this job.

Alekh said in his mind: Good waisa bhi who wants to be detective.

Ranvir also said in his mind: Who cares, I could take another job

But sadhna said.

sadhna: sir then what are the accurate reasons to become detective

Mr taarun: Miss sadhna. Qualification plays the biggest part

Ragini: Sir as far as I know. There should be passion

Sadhna: Yes sir there should be the interest

Ragini: Qualification comes afterwards

sadhna: Yes when we take up job. we get experienced

Ragini: And thats when qualification comes.

sadhna: I think we have all the reasons to become detectives


Mr taarun: Okay we will see. How many cases you four will solve with your so called lagan. All four of you are selected. But you have to solve at least 10 cases successfully to stay on this job

Sadhna: Done sir

Ragini: Hmm okay done

Alekh: Kaha pass gaya

mr taarun: did you said something

alekh: No I mean yeah we will

Ranvir: chalo yeh bhi kartha hai. okay sir.

Mr taarun: you four will work together from now.

Mr taarun gave them the certificates. Your job starts from now

Ranvir: Nowww whattt????

Alekh::: whattt the...

Mr taarun: yes from now. Go take shower, get ready and start your workk. From today. Its 8 o clock. From 9 o clock. I need you here.

All four suddenly dissapear.

All four of them went to their home. They got ready and reach at the plasma plaza back.


Mr taarun: Hmm fast service. this is your four first case. this case is very complicated. All four of you need to go to goor goour village. A lot of strange things are happening there and some people beleive there are witches. All four of you need to find out whats going on there and you all need to solve the case

Precap

Ranvir said to alekh.

ranvir: we both have to go with these two. WHAT A BORE.

Alekh: yeah ranvir

Ranvir was driving the car. He forgot the way.


Voiceover: what would happen to them. what is written on their luck. All four of them are tied together with each other whether they like it or not. What would be next turn on their life? well wait and watch and see Yeh dosti.



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow sara it's just too beautiful chapter chapter Sadi was excited and alekh was hiding below the bed (so funny). Loved ranvir as usual late latif and really wanna know the reason behind Ragi's bitterness
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hayeee thanks rachuu. so happpy you liked it. I am gonne continue tommrow if there was not much homework lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woww sara woww awsm fab chp
luvd all my four grt amzng chp
sadi misss chatterbox amzng how ranveer
excuses frm her haha grt nd alekh under d bed
omgg i cnt blv. Ragi so bindas gud yr
luvd alevir's all conversation nd luvd all dialogues
updt sooon

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