Yeh dosti ( Foursome Bidaai FF ) Updated Chapter 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This FF is more based on Friendship of four people than love. Dont worry guys you will see love but first friendship


this story is based on 4 detectives!!!!!!!!


Sadhna- Fun Loving girl. She takes life as a raaz and wants to learn all tricks of life. Shes a detective


Ragini: Beautiful girl but had an very very ugly past. Her Bad past made her detective


Alekh- Never wants to be detective but he has to become detective because of his family. All people in his family were detectives so he was force to take this.


Ranvir- Never care about his life. hes mast in his own life. No interest of doing anything. he change his professions like some one change their cloths



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww Sara Very unique FF . Damnn Interesting . hahaaa I lovedd Ranvir's reason 2 be Detective . he changes his profession like Any1 changes his clothes ? TOO GOOD 🤣 . Watnggg Eagerly for this FF 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Sara Nice CS continue with first part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow salekh dtctv grrttt dear... Really very unique ff. Cont soon..
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thanks guys will soon update
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A new day began. On the new day, there was a small house. Next to the small house, there was a small garden and across the house and the garden, there was a lake. The house was seprated and apart from the whole world. It was the only house in the place. A boy lives in that house with his mom. That boy was really careless. he do not care about anything. He leaves his life on the hands of his luck. He says joh hona hai woh hoga. Despite his mom explains him that beta work but he doesnt care. His mom runs small boutique from where they get their earning. The boy loves to work but he dont do one thing for a long time. He change his work in every two months. His name was Ranvir Mehta


Ranvir was sitting on the couch reading newspaper. His mom came to living room and ask him

Mom: Ranvir beta what are you doing

Ranvir: Nothing mama, just reading newspaper.

mom: What are you reading?

Ranvir: Mom I am planning to take up a new job.

Mom: Ha but you will leave that also in one month or two

Ranvir: If it interest me then I will not.

mom: acha whats the job

ranvir: DETECETIVE JOB!!!!!!!!

mom: detective job. what are you talking about?

Ranvir: In this newspaper, its says they are searching for 4 detectives to work together on different cases. I will go there tommrow for interview. I am sure I will get selected.

mom: Okay beta, theek hai. jaana zaroor.

ranvir: Love you mom. you are the best

Mom: Love you too beta


Scene shifted to a building apartment. A very dark, spooky, scary apartnment where a beautiful, pretty, nice but yet very sad lonely and mean girl lived. She became rude and mean due to her circumstances. Her name was Ragini Verma. Suddenly someone knock on apartment door. The girl was in deep thinking. first she didnt hear but when the person knock that door loudly. she began to shiver. she got scared to dealth. But she managed herself and become strong. she wore her stone heart again. she went outside and open the door. her neightbor was outside

ragini: hi what are you doing here

neighboor: ragini you was searching for detective job na

ragini: yes

neightbor: here you go. they called 4 people for an interview tommrow at plasma palaza. if you want to go and take interview then its okay

ragini: acha thanks

ragini shut the door


ragini began to talk to herself. she began to scream. I WILL GET THIS JOB FROM HOOK TO CROOK. I WILL GAVE A PUNISHMENT TO ALL THOSE WHO THINK POOR PEOPLE ARE WEEK, WHO HATES THEM, WHO DO WHATEVER THEY WANT WITH PEOPLE WHETHER ITS RIGHT OR WRONG. I WONT LEAVE THEM.


Scene shifted to a Big house. It was really big. it was not less than a palace. The house was really beautiful. servants were working on the house from full swing. There were many many rooms but one room was strange. It was pink. a very girly room. the walls were pink. the bed, desk, and everything else was white. it was simply beautiful. it was not less than a princess room. Well the girl was princess. well she was not less treated like a princess. She open her mouth and then as soon as possible, the thing appear. Despite of having so much, she didnt have an attitude. She was very ambatious girl. she had an big dream. She wants to become detective and her name was Sadhna avasthi.

Sadhna turn on the tv and she start switching the channels and she suddenly stopped because she heard a word detective. her heart beats stop. For moment that word made her speechless. Then she heard on reporter said. A big companie named Telescope Tani company is searching for a four detectives. if you are interested then tommrow morning come at plasma plaza.


Sadhna start jumping. Her aunt came to her room

aunty: sadhna what happened?

sadhna: Auntty. I am so so so so happyyy. Telescope tani are looking for four detectives. just imagine If I be one of them

aunty: surely beta. But dont make your dreams your life.

Sadhna ignored then aunty went outside

aunty: God Please please help this girl. She has gone though alot. Dont let her dreams break.


scene shifted to an very tradional house. it was big but it was really tradational. It was old fashion. Everyone who lives in the house were crazy. everyone there was wearing black suits. Had a telescope on their hand. Many people lived in the house. But One person was very strange. he was strict but crazy. he was the head of the house. he was keep calling one name and that name was none other than alekh, Yes Alekh kashaps. Alekh was very scared of his dada sahab.. As soon as Dada sahab called alekh. Alekh appeared

Alekh: Jee dada sahab.

Dada sahab: Alekh You got a golden chance to take the rasam forward.

Alekh: Jee dada sahab

Dada sahab: Jee Alekh. Tommrow at Plasma plaza. they are searching for a four detective and I want you to be one of them

Alekh: Par dada sahab. you know na that I dont...

Dada sahab: Bas enoughh. YOU HAVE TO BE DETCTIVE

Alekh said yes and he went back to his room. Alekh said to his onw self

Alekh: You have to take permission to even take a breath in this house. Dada sahab and whole family knows well that my dreams are different. I do not want to be detective and turn crazy like these people.


Time began to pass. Everyone slept.


Precap: Sadhna reaches the Plasma Plaza. She was the first one

sadhna: ajeeb hai abhi tak aur koi interview ke liya aiya bhi nahi. But still I am happy. I would be first one. Me soo excited


Voice over: What would be the destiny of these four. What would happen when these four would come together and face each other. What is Ragini past. what happen which made her such a arrogant person? What is sadhna past. Why does her happiness show sadness. Is she happy or pretending to be? Why is kashaps are like this? Why does alekh feels so much restless in his house? what is his dream? Why is ranvir so careless? Is he careless like that or does he has some reason too?

All four will be detectives but with diffrent reasons? Someone has dreams to be detective. Someone past force them to be detective. Someone is being detective for time pass. Someone family is taking over them to be an detective.


what would happen next. well dont forget to tune into Yeh dosti.



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow sara what a lovely update it is quite different. I loved the first chapter please update really soon. Really wanna know the ragini's horrible past
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Originally posted by: Prishna_DBPS

Wow sara what a lovely update it is quite different. I loved the first chapter please update really soon. Really wanna know the ragini's horrible past


thanks yaar. so happy you likedi it. will update soon.😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sara lovely Awosome Update . lovedd the 1st chapter . And Very excited 2 know the actual reasons of Ranvir,Ragini , Sadhna , Alekh that Why they are like this . Continue soon .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowee kool yr sadi princessd hyeer ofcourse she us
shes bubbly here luv her sooo mch my shona
nd alekh forcd to worm mmmccchhh bechara yr
nd ragvir were also tooo guddd luvd demm
very nice chptr gv updt sn

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