Beete Pal..Angini SS,updated last chapter..pg 14 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 9..

Ragini pacing her room thinking of anmol..kya karoun ..how will I know how is he feeling?..her mother entering her room…ragini what happened you seem disturbed…kahin prem se kuch..seeing her mother's concern ragini felt bad..to herself..how I tell you ma its not prem but anmol..i'm worried about him..bolo ragini is there something wrong between you and prem..ragini..no ma nothing ..everything fine..this brought a relief on her mother's face ..you know ragini till your wedding not over I will get worried.kahin kuch na ho jaaye..take some rest and went out of the room..ragini felt guilty to hide the real truth of her worry to her mother...she opened the drawer and took out her diary..sitting on the edge of the bed,got teary-eyed looking at anmol's pic..you love me so much..i have waited for this moment for 2 years..you have given you so much pain for hurting me..how I tell you aap ka dard is mine also.i had a wish to see you before my wedding ..today you are back for me but I cant take that step towards you..she lay down on the bed keeping the pic close to her heart and her tears rolling down her cheeks..

Anmol on bed resting …his eyes closed but his thoughts are of ragini..tum bhi mujh se bahut pyar karti ho ragini..mera dard tum se dekhi nahin jaati..tum kissi aur ki nahin ho sakti sirf meri ho ..anmol ki ragini..we are destined to be together and this forever and forever..he opened his eyes and looked at ragini's pic on his bedside table..you are so beautiful my ragini and touched her face in the pictureframe..in a soft whisper saying tum aa jaao ragini..i want to see you and you are the only one who can heal the pain in my heart..…I love you so much my angel..aa jaao ragini tumhara anmol intezaar kar raha hein..come my love..

Ragini woke up in a jolt..aap mujhe bhula rahe ho..she got out of bed and kept the pic in her diary.. ab bardasht nahin hota.,I should take a decision and get out of this dilemma…a bit later wiping her tears,mein ne faisla liya and this is the right decision for both of us..my father..mother mean a lot to me and their happiness also…

Anmol coming downstairs and gaurav on phone talking to someone..anmol looked at the entrance and smiled…he hurried up to meet ragini..i knew you will come ..you cant bear staying away from me …its same for me my love I cant stay away from you anymore…I saw the love and concern in your eyes for me yesterday.say you love me ragini…this will heal my every pain..say it my angel..you love your anmol very much..gaurav..anmol with whom are you talking?..anmol..ragini ..i told you she will come and here she and stopped..where is ragini?..she was just here standing..gaurav feeling bad seeing anmol in such state visualizing ragini.so much passion and love of anmol for ragini touched his heart...gaurav..ragini is not here anmol..come sit on the couch..you should not stress yourself so much..tears welling up in anmol's eyes…she will come..my heart cant be wrong about it..she loves me only..she will come gaurav..i'm confident of it..gaurav…I was talking with damini on the phone…this got anmol's attention..she told you they are coming here.. gaurav..anmol you should rest …anmol..dont escape my question ?..are they coming?.gaurav taking a deep sigh..no anmol..she was asking about you and your wound..anmol stared at gaurav and a tear drop escaped his eyes..gaurav…I feel your pain but try to understand..damini was telling me its not an easy situation for ragini..she is at a crossroad with you coming back in her life..circumstances are different now..she is engaged and getting married..her family doing all the preparations for her wedding..anmol..dont say one word beyond that..ragini loves me and she cant marry someone else..i wont let that happenned..i have to do something ..i made a big mistake last time ..not again...it will only be mine and ragini's wedding..saying so, he walked up to the door…gaurav..anmol where are you going?..he just walked out without replying to him..gaurav rushed outside as he knew anmol is not to be left alone in such situation..

Much later ragini all fresh and in a beautiful salwar..kameez outfit in her room..looking in the mirror.you can do it ..it will brought tears and pain but you have to do it ..ragini..i should be strong not weak..she opened the door and got out of her room..going in the sitting room,she got a shock seeing someone she did not expect standing in front of her..

Anmol confident of his heart feeling that ragini loves him and will confess..

Ragini in a dilemma ..what decision she has taken?.

Who has she seen at her house ?.

Do keep reading..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Saveeta.👏👏👏

It was really painful to see both anmol and ragini in an emotional turmoil.😭😭😭

I just loved this ,👏

Anmol on bed resting …his eyes closed but his thoughts are of ragini..tum bhi mujh se bahut pyar karti ho ragini..mera dard tum se dekhi nahin jaati..tum kissi aur ki nahin ho sakti sirf meri ho ..anmol ki ragini..we are destined to be together and this forever and forever..he opened his eyes and looked at ragini's pic on his bedside table..you are so beautiful my ragini and touched her face in the pictureframe..in a soft whisper saying tum aa jaao ragini..i want to see you and you are the only one who can heal the pain in my heart..…I love you so much my angel..aa jaao ragini tumhara anmol intezaar kar raha hein..come my love..

Ragini woke up in a jolt..aap mujhe bhula rahe ho..


Anmol imagining ragini and talking to her was a heart breaking scene .😭Where is he going 😕and Waiting to see what decision did ragini take .😕


Hope the person standing in front of ragini is not Prem.😔


Saveeta you ended with so many suspense ,please continue soon.😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome cont soon. I wish ragini wasnot in such a cross road
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome saveeta, suspense is killing me. plz cont, soon, thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful savee..
Anmol and ragini both in pain...
Hope anmol's wish come soon..
I am very exited to read the next part. Continue it soon dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@krithka..jyothi..rozy..zee..thanks for reading and lovely comments..🤗
it means a lot to me ...you all appreciating the short story of angini..afterall they are magical this jodi.. ...😊
i just hope you will like wat's coming next so stay tuned.
i will update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U are so mean ...😆
Poor Anmol he is in pain still he is dreaming of Ragini .. and imaging her everywhere inspite of her not there to heal his wound

And Ragini at crossroad she knows her heart wants to be with Anmol, but she is also commited to Prem beung engaged with due respect to her parents...

Now we are at the edge of the seat wondering who came knocked at the door...

I am sure its Anmol magar Kya pata Prem wud land up also remebering his fiancee... Or Gaurva to give a talk to Ragini ...

Dekthey hai agey kya hoga..
Anmol baby I know you are over ur guilt trip soon something good will happen for you 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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saveeta , waiting for your update 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: krithikas

saveeta , waiting for your update😍


yas krithika.. Thatz y i visit IF today.. Bt busy.. But i don't want to miss savee's update..
shanaya28 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first i'm sorry friends for not updating earlier..have been very busy these few days..woke up early today and wrote the new update.hope you will like it..😊

Chapter 10..

It was complete silence in the room..ragini could not believe anmol was standing in front of her..both having an eyelock…anmol pain so visible on his face.ragini observed the litte dark circles under his eyes which means he has not slept well..this broke her heart even more…silently saying to herself..aap ka dard .i cant bear it now…she took a step forward when her brother stopped her..where are going?..i will deal with this guy.what he thinks of himself?...2 years ago he dumped you like an excess baggage from his life.he did not have the guts to drop you home..where is your ego today anmol sareen to burge in our house?..i think you must have got it selfish .mean rich people like you are not welcomed in our house..the door is there you can leave now…ragini's eyes welled up with tears watching anmol so quietly listening to all the harsh words…

Finally anmol spoke up.i accept all my mistake done 2 years ago to ragini…circumstances were such that I took one wrong decision and I regret it each day in these 2 years..i know it has hurt ragini and you all but today I'm here to ask for forgiveness for all the wrongdoings of the past..anmol looked at ragini's father and folding his hands..aap mujhe maaf kijiye….i'm repenting for that sin done to ragini and today I'm back to give her the respect and love she deserved as my wife 2 years ago..though we are divorced ragini is and will always be my wife…I seek your permission to marry ragini again with all the rituals..ragini's father looked at ragini who had tears rolling down her cheeks..he was the only one who understood her feelings ..mein samajh gaya ragini and about to say something to anmol when his wife stopped him..kuch mat kahiye..jo aap soch rahe ho I know it but this cant happen now..you may be forgetting ragini is getting married to prem …we have bear lots of insult and humiliation when he divorced ragini..aap bhool sakte ho ya maaf kar sakte ho par mein nahin..i'm with my son and he is right..he is not welcomed here..tell him to go and leave us alone..after so long happiness is coming back in our daughter's life..i wont let him to destroy it…ragini's bro..have you not got it?..go away…

Anmol…I will leave not without hearing the answers of my questions to ragini...tum baatao ragini …tum kya chahati ho.you know how much I love you…my heart says you love me too…will you marry me or prem for whom you don't have any feelings?..ragini completely on the spot could not utter a word..gazing at anmol and silently pleading him not to do this to her..anmol..no ragini you have to decide once for all.you are in pain and I'm going through same..we have to end our pain being away from each other..tel me is it yes or no ragini?..

Outside gaurav waiting and also restless muttering to himself kahan ho damini ..a few minutes later damini came and gaurav rushed to her..damini.kya hua..aap mujhe yahan kyun bulaya…wait what are you doing here?..oh no don't tell me anmolji is here..gaurav.yes damini that's why I called you..i could not stop him from coming ..he was so hurt when I told him ragini not coming to meet him..damini his love for ragini is so genuine.the passion and immense love for her is beyond explaination..i'm just scared what if ragini says no to his marriage proposal… damini…I agree with you anmolji loves her a lot but what happened 2 years back..will her family trust him again?..the situation is so complicated..she is engaged to prem and the wedding is nearing..above all her mother's health is so fragile since her divorce..ragini is at such a crossroad..she has never been able to forget her past..har beete pal ka lamha usse yaad hein…anmolji has always had a special place deep in her heart..i just want ragini's happiness…she has suffered a lot and sometimes will shut herself in a nutshell with the memories of the past..her tears.her pain I know it all..i know also the one who can bring her happiness back is the one who has given her pain and also loves her immensely..anmolji..taking a deep sigh,I just hope ragini gets the courage and take the right decision..she looked up and saw gaurav staring at her so deeply…damini feeling a bit awkward with the gaze of gaurav on her..aap mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho..why are you staring at me like this?gaurav…anmol always talked about destiny and today I believe in it too.the one up there knows what he does..kisse kab milna hein he knows it all..destiny..damini confused by gaurav's talks..what are you talking about?..whom will meet who?...gaurav…i will tell you later when they saw anmol coming outside…

Gaurav ..anmol what happened?...tell me…anmol choked with emotions ,just asked gaurav to drive him home…he entered the car and his tears streaming down his cheeks..gaurav…I will call you later..i must go now…damini..haan aap jaao...she looked at gaurav driving off with anmol and said yeh tu nein kya kiya ragini..what have you done?...

Anmol asked for forgiveness and proposed ragini in marriage again…

What has ragini said to anmol with him leaving in tears?..

Will update soon…

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