Beete Pal..Angini SS,updated last chapter..pg 14 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Wanted to read the ragini confession scene again it was so beautiful to visualize . So happy ragini accepted anmol's proposal .

I was totally in awe reading this ,

Anmol sitting on the edge of the bed with ragini's picture frame in his hand..his gaze never wavering from it..feeling a presence at the doorstep ..he so softly said her name.ragini and looked up…he put the frame on the bed and stood up…their gazes meeting and so much conveyed in this lapse of time…finally ragini took a step forward and anmol doing same…close to each other with both in tears…the moment anmol waited for so long came at last..ragini went in his arms hugging him so tightly…mein houn sirf aap ki ragini…aa gayee houn aap ke paas..aap ke kareeb…I cant stay away from you anymore..I love you anmol..i love you very very much..aap se hi pyar karti houn Aur humesha karti thi and will always love you forever…...mein prem se pyar aur na hi shadi karna chahati houn..i don't love nor want to marry prem..this is what I was saying but my brother …anmol put his fingers on her mouth..shh..kuch mat kaho..let me adore you my ragini..my angel in my arms… he so gently caressed her face and wiped her tears…I love you so much and to think life without you is impossible…saying so, he hugged her more closer to him….no one can separate us now..

Before this ,it was so sad to read anmol and ragini scene in ragini's house it was so painful for both of them.

Gourav and damini should definitely do something for angini and glad they are in love with each other.

Lovely song you posted saveeta ,so apt for ragini.

Wish prem understands the love ragini has for anmol and move away.

Loved it saveeta . Thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Very nice Saveeta 👏👏

Loved it .. I liked the way you unfolded that conversation between Anmol and Ragini as he walked out we did'nt know what was said, and when he told gaurav that she was planing to move on in life and then when Ragini comes out with the actual feelings and her dad tells her to go meet Anmol it was really nice...

The latter was so sweet when Ragini confessed her feelings to Anmol and they had the long lost hug...And so vivid, just felt the same as the hug when he is about to leave and he hugs her...😍



Now lets see what happens when Prem comes back..
Gaurav is also loosing his heart to damini!!😳

Aww I miss Apurva and Parul .. Seriously they are enigma... 😳👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Chapter 12..

Damini..coming out of the taxi…why you brought me at the mall?…gaurav… we met here first time and you made me lost of words.it always brings me a smile on my face thinking about that day and you..damini smiled …I remember that day also…gaurav..only that day not about me…damini lowered her gaze feeling shy…gaurav..wow amazing…damini looked around saying.kya..meeting gaurav gaze, she got it he was talking about her..gaurav.. you are amazing damini..i have not yet said anything and you are feeling so shy..abhi mujhe tumse toh bahut kuch kehena hein…holding his hand in hers,come lets go to the coffee shop..few minutes later ,gaurav thanking the waiter for their coffee..damini I have to share my heart feelings with you today..remember I was telling you about destiny and how anmol-ragini are made for each other..its same for me..after so many years looking for a lifepartner in NY but no one seems right for me..my luck I met the one for me in india..holding her hand,damini I know its only a few times we have met but I have no doubt you are the one for me..the first time I met you, I could not utter any word and my heart made a skip…smiling ,may be you will find me strange confessing my love to you in a coffee shop at a mall...this place is special for me as I met the one who has taken my heart away here and since then got a very special place in my life..in a very soft voice …i love you damini…I will always love you…damini just stared at gaurav speechless..she could only hear her heartbeat ….not getting a reply from her in a teasing voice …this time I think I made you lost of words…damini gave him a shy smile…gaurav…damini will you be my lifepartner? Sorry may be I'm rushing thing ..if you need time I will wait but what he heard brought a big smile on his face…say it again…damini..i said yes and I hope I'm not saying yes to a killer or someone escaped from jail..this reminded both of their first meet and how damini was suspicious about him..this made both burst into laughter…gaurav..oh damini I love you so much and you have nothing to fear..you can trust me..damini ..i know and I love you too..ragini will be shocked to hear this..gaurav..same for anmol…both lost in each other gaze and talks forgetting about their coffee..

Anmol's room..

Anmol..my beautiful ragini ..i can keep you close to me forever and not let you go away..with a soft kiss on her head..i have something special for you..he made her sit on the edge of the bed..he opened the drawer and took out the jewellery box..he knelt down in front of her and opened the box.in there shining a beautiful diamond ring…softly and so lovingly looking in her eyes .anmol proposed to her..will you marry me ?...ragini overwhelmed by such sweet gesture of anmol and without any fear confidently said ..yes I will marry you…anmol gently held her hand and slid the diamond ring onto her finger..anmol kissed the back of her hand..this brought tears of happiness in her eyes …anmol..ragini I want to do everything the right way ..i know first time all was rushed and I was such a …ragini put her hand on his mouth and stopped him from completing his sentence..woh ek beete pal tha ….its the past and we must make each moment of our present and future memorable..anmol kissed her hand again..you are really my angel..i love you and you are right, I will make our each day together memorable..tumharee ek aur keemti cheez hein mere paas..ragini..kya..he took out another box and opened it..a drop of tear escaped her eyes…anmol…i have kept this so preciously with the hope I will tie it back around your neck with all the vows ….your mangalsutra ragini.this only belongs to you my love…I hated myself when I entered your room after you left and saw the mangalsutra among the other jewelleries you kept on the dressing table..mein bahut bura kiya tumhare saath..ragini..please aap aisa mat kahein….yeh judaai has made our love grow more for each other..hum ek dhuje ke liye hi baane hein ..ab hum kabhie judaa nahin houngein..anmol kept the mangalsutra safely in the drawer and helped ragini to stand up..holding her close in his arms..you are right my love we are made for each other..ragini sirf anmol ki hein..he brushed a soft kiss on her cheek..he intertwined her hand tightly in his.come lets go as I cant wait to ask your hand in marriage to your parents...ragini smiled wholeheartedly and both got out of the room..coming downstairs both got a shock … anmol put his hand around ragini's shoulder keeping her close to him..

Prem clapping his hand wow what a scene..my fiancee with her ex husband…I hope you still remember ragini.. …we got engaged and will be marrying soon..anmol..prem we can talk about it…things have changed now and ….prem..there is nothing to talk about and don't interfere in my personal life…ragini is my future wife and I'm here to take her home..lets go ragini..anmol kept his firm grip on ragini's shoulder..she is not going anywhere prem and I'm telling you once more lets talk about all this ..ragini's brother came in and in an angry tone..you have crossed every limit today ragini..you agreed to marry prem and doing this cheap act in front of your would be husband..he raised his hand to slap ragini but anmol stopped him..dont you dare hit her…ragini's bro..i'm her brother …i can slap her and I have every right to do so .you are nothing to her but a complete stranger..anmol..then you are mistaken ..ragini is still my wife and has always been mine though we divorced..i love her and she loves me not prem..

No need of these harsh words.. we can discussed all this in a civilized manner…prem…to ragini's bro..lets call the police..he can be rich business tycoon but such cheap act of his can put him behind bars..ragini looked at anmol with a fear on her face..anmol..dont be scared ragini ..nothing will happen to me…ragini's bro..theek hein ragini..we will leave but one thing you will never be happy with the guilt you have to bear all your life..if something happens to our mother you will be responsible for it..she is admitted in hospital and fighting for her life..ragini..ma ko kya hua…ragini's bro..its all because of you since your divorce her health deteriorated and now going against your family for the same guy….ragini..anmol mujhe hospital jaana hein..anmol..i will take you there..dont worry..the car keys…ragini..gauravji gave it to you in the room before leaving.anmol..yes…wait I'll get it..he rushed upstairs …prem and ragini's bro seized this opportunity to separate them..prem came closer to her and put his hand tightly on her mouth silencing her..with the help of ragini's bro pulled her out of the house..anmol ran downstairs shocked not to see ragini but he could only hear the sound of screeching tires…anmol..damn ….no one will separate us ragini..your anmol will get you back..

A reunion ..confession of love..marriage proposal..separation..

Who are the mastermind behind this plan of separating anmol-ragini?..

Will update soon ..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Fantastic saveeta 👏👏👏,it was both happy and sad moments.

Gourav damini scenes were too GOOD .Loved their sweet conversations.👍🏼

Finally gaurav proposed to damini ,and damini too accepted it .😍

WOW I was all smile reading my angini scene😃 ,it was so touchy.Both have so much love for each other , but so sad destiny separated them , but no looking back ,All is Well now.😃

I was completely in awe reading this moment,😍

Anmol..my beautiful ragini ..i can keep you close to me forever and not let you go away..with a soft kiss on her head..i have something special for you..he made her sit on the edge of the bed..he opened the drawer and took out the jewellery box..he knelt down in front of her and opened the box.in there shining a beautiful diamond ring…softly and so lovingly looking in her eyes .anmol proposed to her..will you marry me ?...ragini overwhelmed by such sweet gesture of anmol and without any fear confidently said ..yes I will marry you…anmol gently held her hand and slid the diamond ring onto her finger..anmol kissed the back of her hand..this brought tears of happiness in her eyes …anmol..ragini I want to do everything the right way ..i know first time all was rushed and I was such a …ragini put her hand on his mouth and stopped him from completing his sentence..woh ek beete pal tha ….its the past and we must make each moment of our present and future memorable..anmol kissed her hand again..you are really my angel..i love you and you are right, I will make our each day together memorable..

What a thrilling end to the update 😲, so sad ragini taken forcibly by prem and her brother.What will anmol do now , wish he saves from them soon.😭

You always end with a suspense saveeta 😔, waiting to know what will anmol do now.😭

Edited by krithikas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
@krithika..rozy..thanks for reading and comments..
will anmol save ragini ?..who else has a hand in separating anmol-ragini?...
the story nearly reaching its climax..will update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 👏 wonderful update savee...

ragini's brother and prem are trying to separate angini...😡
wiling to to read the next part dear... continue it soon...
thnak you for such a wonderful update savee.. 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 13…

Damini..aap ka phone..pick up the call…gaurav..let it ring …I will call back later…I don't want to divert my mind from you…have I said how much I love you?...damini shyly said haan so many times ..now pick up the call its ringing again..it can be anmolji…gaurav..why will he call me?..he forgets everything in ragini's thoughts and now she is close by his side..damini breathed a deep sigh, you are too much…please pick it up its again ringing..i'm sure its anmolji…gaurav..you said that please so sweetly that's why I'm answering that call..damini..smiling stop being romantic now answer it..gaurav..hello….anmol..what happened?...relax I'm coming.. wait for me..damini..kya hua..anything wrong?..ragini is fine…gaurav…anmol is very disturbed…come lets go,I'll tell you in the car..…going out of the coffee shop,gaurav came to a halt….damini..aap rukh kyun gaaye ..gaurav..kanchan….damini repeat same..kanchan..who is she?..gaurav looked at damini..sweetheart its not what you are thinking..damini..i have not said anything…gaurav …your eyes said it all….i have no GF nor any EX ones..my first love is and will always be you damini..look there she is kanchan and I'm surprised what is she doing in india?..he related all about her and about her love for anmol…damini…prem…yeh yahan kya kar raha hein..he was in Singapore…damini..gaurav both at the same time …are you thinking the same?...gaurav..i'm sure there is something wrong …how these two know each other?.we should not waste time lets go and meet anmol…about to go when gaurav came to a halt again..damini..ab kya hua?..gaurav..i cant believe it…this smells a big conspiracy..anmol will be very furious and hurt how his own has backstabbed him…holding damini's hand ..come sweetheart we must help anmol-ragini…

Minutes later gaurav..damini came in and saw anmol pacing the room…anmol..finally you are here..prem and ragini's bro have taken her away…gaurav.how all this happened?..anmol related all to them..anmol..damini do me a favor go home and look after my ragini..tell her not to worry..her anmol is here to save her ….gaurav...i have something to tell you but promise me you will listen calmly..anmol ..what's the matter?..we saw kanchan..prem together and the third person joining them you will be shocked…anmol…who?..gaurav..your mother….all three together..guess you got the hint…anmol..my mother…all this is her doing…she never loved ragini and ruined my happiness…I divorced ragini because of her …she did this plot with kanchan and that prem…everything clear now..she confessed her love to me in NY and here prem asked ragini in marriage…completely hurt..can a mother be that cruel gaurav?..ruining his own son happiness…not this time..she will not succeeed and I wont let her separate us…damini.. i will go and see wat's happening there and let you know…gaurav…the taxi is waiting outside….i will wait for your call..he kept looking at her going outside..turning around anmol gaze was on him…gaurav..i will tell you later but for now we must think what to do next … I cant believe it we did not get a clue about kanchan true intention…anmol..they will pay big time for their sins gaurav….first I must know how is my ragini?...gaurav..dont worry damini will be there with her…anmol..gaurav I really hate myself ,again ragini is being hurt because of one mistake I did 2 years back…all this because of a mother and family who has no love for me…he got teary-eyed…now when happiness coming back in our life these selfish people planning to destroy our relationship..they don't know true genuine love cant be destroyed...gaurav…. we will teach them a big lesson and make them pay for their sins…

Ragini…I'm ashamed today to call you my brother…you stoop so low..pitaji will be heartbroken hearing about your cheap act..every brother want their sister's happiness but you..shame on you…he raised his hand to slap her..stop your nonsense talks or…ragini..or else what?..you will raise your hand on me..after what you did today what can I expect more from you?..ragini's bro..i don't care what you think about me ..i only care about the bundle of notes I'm getting to separate you and that anmol…money has always been mine and my wife interest…we are getting lots of money to get you out of anmol's life…news for you there is someone else who loves your anmol and will do anything to get him in her life.she has loads of money and you are a big thorn in her path..giving her a sarcastic laugh..what you thought prem fell for you ..you fool…he is part of our great plan..asking you in marriage...all this was preplanned my dear sis…so forget about your so called love anmol as you are getting married with prem...he is coming here…a little sindoor and a mangalsutra ..you will be his wife..your anmol wont be able to do anything as he will never know about your whereabouts…..poor guy he will be totally devastated…ragini completely shocked hearing this with tears rolling down her cheeks..anmol aur mera pyar saccha hein…we truly love each other and no one can separate us…you can dream on …I'm anmol's wife and will be his forever…I trust my love ….he will come and save his ragini…

As promised damini called gaurav…sweetheart don't cry?...tell me what happened?...damini..calm down …we will not let anything happen to ragini..just take care of yourself and ragini's parents..dont worry and please don't cry…I will keep in touch with you….anmol..kya hua ragini ko?..gaurav…she is not home nor her brother…something fishy…anmol..damn where they have taken her?...i'm getting some bad vibes gaurav..if they do something to ragini ,I will not spare them..a place where I did not want to go ever in my life…sareen mansion…its there I will get the answer of my question.where they have hid ragini?..gaurav..do you think they will reveal anything to you.?..anmol…they will do it gaurav as I know one of their weak point..money was always their big interest and they are in big need of it ….they hate me and jealous of my success…they don't know my priority and happiness is my ragini.. I will show them what is hatred and how much deeply I love my wife ragini……

Anmol backstabbed by his own mother..

Ragini trust anmol and his love ..

She is confident he will save her..

Will anmol succeed ?.

Keep reading…

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Late Late very late ..

Amazing part, Anmol on his knees and asking Ragini to marry him ... Aww so sweet, Loved the way he did it and Ragini telling him that whatever happend in teh past ..

And Gaurav and Damini;s side was also so sweet.. U have'nt shown us Gaurav and Damini's picture its in demand...

I am not interested in Prem as he will be out of picture soon ,, He dosent know Anmol ka gussa.😆😆😆, He is a fire band !!

LOvely dear just missing angini so much but you are a saviour.. Goid bless you !! RS should hire you as their creative head Bidaaii2 New story so much is there Angini can rock the stage we have amazing stoyrline with concept relastionship and drama👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part savee...
anmol's mother doing all this things...😡
ragini's brother helping her for money...
enjoying reading it.. it was just like watching bidaai epi...
it's very interesting part savee... continue it soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@shanti..zee..thanks for reading and lovely comments..😊
how i wish it so comes true RS gives us such beautiful concept of relationship ..anmol-ragini are too beautiful as a couple..their love story is such an inspiration... apoorva..parul the one and only magical onscreen couple angini...
zee your avatar is too eyecatchy..magical angini and they are truly magical...😊

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